||~ The Sunshine of My life #6 AsYa FF ~ NOTE PG 100

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Amazing part
wow so finally asya going to be bf and gf for 7 days
first day and their first date quite interesting
looking forward to their talk
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Edited by nilusoni - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

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Awesome update. Asad became zoya boyfriend & that's surprised zoya. He chose a dress for her with the help of his Ammi. Zoya doesn't want to but when she heared that dilshad helped him, she wore it. Teasing session was always nice. He booked the boat for her that's wonderful. Talk is the most important agenda for their dating. Waiting for next part soon. Thanks for pm

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Loved the update

so cute how they are dating and all adorable

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Edited by princess101 - 11 years ago

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Rubab Mughal Janjua

@--RubabMughal--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Resss!
UnResss😳

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Lovely romantic update..

awesome

I also would like to know more about Asad

Thanks for updating

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

unres
well this Update is something beyond the perfection&awsomeness
and u've did it
u've killed it
I just love it.

Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago

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DDP with Pookie

@yum_immy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

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Amazing update 😃

Loved all of it 😳 👏

Edited by yumna.imad - 10 years ago

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Prashni Singh

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Reading this chapter lead me to introspect over this FF, AsYa were rarely afforded time and opportunity to just let their hair down and enjoy themselves or the simple pleasures of life and being a couple in love about to marry, they had always been burdened with responsibility, trauma and intensity. It's awesome you have included courting into the narrative, love how you are blending in the variance of emotions and phases that make a successful relationship between spouses[to be].

AsYa cheese feast, more particularly Asad as the catalyst, is my preference of romance, the man in question just individually intensifies the essence of romance and indulgence beautifully, and it shall be welcomed with open arms.

His passion to lay the world at Zoe's feet is extremely captivating, the extremist side to him in all aspects of his life is enchanting as Zoe precisely feels. As a reader, I feel as ecstatic as Zoe does, and she ultimately deserves every bit of indulge Asad bestows upon her.

Meant to say this after the last chapter, anticipate the kiss in the presence of the family and Asad's creativity at accomplishing the challenge.

The playfulness, sarcasm, wit and pure joy was a pleasant read, love that they shall be talking more and acquainting themselves further, this shall be the most beautiful phase of their love story that's apart from parenting their little bundle of sunshine.

"Zoya hadn't seen Asad so carefree, so laid back in ages. He was talking, and talking like she had never heard him talk. His courteous, gentle gestures of pulling the chair for her, serving her the food and feeding her intermittently through their lunch had her enraptured."

"More comfortable and a little groggy after the heavy meal Asad rested his legs across the futon and pulled Zoya between them, letting her lean sideways on his chest."

These scenes were enthralling!

So do we get an intoxicated Zoe, on their honeymoon? Please say yes! *puppy face*

Anticipate the next chapter.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Glad everything is better on your side. Great update as always. Love the moments between Asad and Zoya <3 and who can forget Aahana? She's so adorable!!!