Drabble- 'The Sum Parts Of The Whole'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay so its been eating me lol , i needed some closure , fictional or whether it happens or not i just wanted to write this !

"They Say Half Baked Informations is deadlier then the wrong one and you know what they said it right"

"After being dejected by Her mum and my daadi she herself will commit suicide" ... These were the words that kept echoing in pragya's mind , she was destroyed , she was devastated and she was a complete mess

Tanu backstabbed her and she should have expected that , aaliyah now blamed her for being an accomplice and hated her family , she expected that but Abhi... She thought maybe just maybe he would understand but nope he misunderstood everything all over again and part of her cursed herself from letting this get too far but she thought about her mother , what now? All this for nothing? Pragya just walked out of the room and she walked towards the mandir in the house , she stared on and on , she was flooded with thoughts of Abhi telling her mum the truth or rather what he thinks is the truth , all her nightmares were slowly becoming reality and Abhi's hurtful words to her made it worse

She had a gut feeling though , feeling that Abhi wont hurt Maa or Daadi and that if she found a way to get him to see the whole truth things can be salvaged ..

Abhi was furious , he was under his bubble that Pragya kept quiet to aid RaBul , abhi was pissed at all three of them and decided to take revenge by telling their families and saving his

Next Day :

Daadi found pragya sleeping near god and went and comforted her and told her about Abhi's goodness , pragya helplessly smiled and felt part of her being assured, she got up to go talk to him alone ..

Then she stopped , she felt things could get worse if she goes in front of him and the suicide words echoed she walked away and decided to go meet her mum and maybe prepare her for the worse with a heavy heart


Abhi was all ready to do his grand expos and then he wanted the letter tanu had as proof , although pragya was not the girl involved with purab he wanted some indication that she helped them elope on his baby sisters wedding day!

Abhi called tanu and asked for the letter , Tanu was nervous , if abhi were to show everyone the letter what if someone finds out what she did! She tried to evade it but abhi was persistent she went to get the letter , Tanu had kept the original safely with her aswell she grabbed her purse and picked out the folded letter and gave it to Abhi

Abhi took and and was well on his way to expose pragya and BB to their mum ..

Aaliyaha and tanu were eager and vengeful

Pragya also was on her way but she got a call from BB , BB cried out that purab is adamnet on getting married and that she knew that was not the right thing , pragya asked her about her whereabouts and BB unknown to purab gave it to pragya. Pragya had to detour and the little faith she did have on abhi helped her cause and she thought if purab and BB come out to everyone and explain it all things could still get better, she decided to go to the place , when she got there she failed to find BB and purab and tried contacting her but in vain pragya thinks of the lost time and thinks of rushing back to sarla aunty

Daadi too prayed to god that Abhi gets to know pragya for who she is and they both stand by eachother through this test of time , its like god heard her and just then the letter fell out from Abhi's hand , he reached out to pick it and it opened he was about to close it back when noticed that last line "Pragya ka saath doge"
That was not there preciously he opened it and read the whole thing !

BAM! Abhi was lost all over again he was so confused as to where this letter came and he knew this was purabs handwriting when he actually thought bout it , and tanu gave it to him so it has to be real and read it over and over and was confused ! Sacrifice ? Sarla Aunty?! Pragya ?! What?!

And finally it hit abhi! PRAGYA DID NOT PLAN ANYTHING! She still hid the truth but for her mother ! What was i gonna do?! He was still conflicted but things became more n more Pro Pragya !
He went back and furiously questioned tanu! And this time only tanu! Tanu tried to get her way through and cursed herself for keeping the real letter along with the fake one!

Abhi yelled at her and imagined what all would have happened if he had told her mum!
He gave a disgusted look to tanu and walked off! Thats it! Tanu thought she could not let abhi go back to pragya so she used her one last trump card.

She called up sarla herself and told her that purab ran away because of her daughters and that abhi and pragyas marriage is a facade and a lie and that pragya will be out of his life soon

Sarla at first was a non believer but then she thought of all the "suspicious events" and then thoughts of pragya's broken rishtas flashed by her and she had a panic attack /heart attack and fainted

Abhi reached the arora house thinking pragya would be there and he needed to talk it out he walks in to find the horrid state of sarla ! He rushes to her and calls out everyone
They come out and crowd around and all of them are panic stricken abhi yells to call a doctor and tries to take her to the car just then he sees an extremely shocked pragya who was frozen in her ground and was blatantly staring at sarla

She directly shifts her gaze to abhi and questions : "Aap ne yeh kya kiya" "kya kar diya aapne"

Abhi nodded his head in a NO and was about to say something when daadi said we need to go to the hospital

At the hospital : abhi goes to talk to pragya when the doctor says she had a heart attack and that this was her 3rd and one more and she wont make it alive and that no more stress and excitement and pressure for her she needs bed rest

Pragya took a deep breath and just walked off , her family tried to stop her but daadi just said rehne do she needs time alone

Pragya was broken , she was finished she walked out and went to the bridge and just stood there staring the water below , she thought of the happy times the sad ones the ones with her mum just then She was grabbed by a familiar arm!

Abhi grabbed her and hugged her ! He yelled at her thinking she was gonna jump off and he apologized after every sentence and then rambled on but then pragya looked up to him and then with all her force Pushed him away !

She glared at him will all the fury hell had !

"Yeh sab aapke vaajah se , aap ne meri maa ko-- bata diya na sab kuch , maine socha ki aap lekin nahi galat socha maine , you are responsibile for this and now i will not forgive you"

Yehi mangalsutra nai aapko roka tha na , ab nahi pragya goes to yank it out but she slips and falls off into the water! (Note how both of them were unsuccessful in removing that magalsutra)

Abhi yelled "pragya" and went down the bridge and into the water to save her

SOUNDS FAMILIAR 😉

He got her out and she was okay , but she fights back the come out and she yells at hin

"kyun Bachaya , Kyun , yehi chahte the na aap , you tried to kill my mother to make me commit suicide right?! Then why did you save me "

It hit abhi again , he felt the pain he felt the pain he had inflicted with his taunts and words and for what? A misunderstood truth? For a lie?

Pragya cried and she continued to yell at him saying that her mother was the reason she hid the truth because she wanted to protect her like abhi wanted to protect his daadi!

She said , if you wanted to hurt me then you should have HURT ME ! You had no right to hurt that woman who thinks of you as god!

Abhi was confused as to how this all happened he tried to explain but pragya would not listen and for the first time ever Abhi felt what it was to be like pragya how it felt to be gravely misunderstood and to be able to not do anything about it

Abhi genuinely felt horrible but he could not say anything ...


So whatever just wanted to write it!

NOT INTENDED TO HURT ANYONE PLEASE ! AND I LOVE ABHI , YES HE IS WRONG BUT WHEN HE NEEDS TO HE CAN BE RIGHT AS WELL!



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FhatTheWuck. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghoshmedha

'twas damn good 😊


aww thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This would be so amazing if it actually happens in the show. I also hope pragya leaves abhis house - a girl's gotta have some self respect gosh damn it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it!!! Balm to my heart ... I love Abhi too, but he needs to wake up!!! It's payback time for him!!!

Edited by indi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chashmish12

This would be so amazing if it actually happens in the show. I also hope pragya leaves abhis house - a girl's gotta have some self respect gosh damn it



haha thank you !and i hope something along these lines happen lol!

i know she did give a good argument today but uff no one wants to listen to her only ! :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh dear.. I wish it all solved like this.. Although I don't want her to try to die... No, Pragya gotta be stronger and that.. one tight slap to Abhi? How about that?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Oh dear.. I wish it all solved like this.. Although I don't want her to try to die... No, Pragya gotta be stronger and that.. one tight slap to Abhi? How about that?



hahah i wish too! no she aint she goes there to clear her mind na ! :P

haha slap ! make love not war 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yehi chahti thi na tum.. key main tumhe kabhi akele na chodoon
Tum jahaan bhi ho main peeche kheencha chalaa aau?

Toh loh main aa gya

Jin aankhon mein mujhe apne aanewala kal dikhaya deta ho- un aankhon ke kaise bandh jaane deta?

jo merey liye bani ho, usey kaise kuch ho jaane deta?

Jise dekhkar main apni duniya bhool jaaun usey kaise kuch ho jaane deta main?

Jin taaron ney hume milwaya hain na, un taaron sey bhi waapis le aata itna pyar karta hoon, tumsey
Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi

Loved it!!! Balm to my heart ... I love Abhi too, but he needs to wake up!!! It's payback time for him!!!



thank you!!! haha yes!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Yehi chahti thi na tum.. key main tumhe kabhi akele na chodoon

Tum jahaan bhi ho main peeche kheencha chalaa aau?

Toh loh main aa gya

Jin aankhon mein mujhe apne aanewala kal dikhaya deta ho- un aankhon ke kaise bandh jaane deta?

jo merey liye bani ho, usey kaise kuch ho jaane deta?

Jise dekhkar main apni duniya bhool jaaun usey kaise kuch ho jaane deta main?

Jin taaron ney hume milwaya hain na, un taaron sey bhi waapis le aata itna pyar karta hoon, tumsey



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MAN THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND COSMIC AND UFF

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