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SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Oh My God...what is happening. Two dedications by two wonderful writers in a week!!I can't believe my stars. I am suddenly getting popular at dedication section.*Patted own back*.

Thank you Sush. You made me happy...hug you.

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SanDhiraddict

@SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Hey Sushie (I prefer Sushie over Sush..hope you won't mind) this is short and sweet update. Though you claimed we know Randhir Singh Shekhawat and he is politer here I must admit..I don't know this RANDHIR in your story yet. He is everything till now Which I don't know about him:

1. He is friendly with Parth (PaRan will be there in the show but I think it will take a millennium.)

2. He stays with Renuka (seriously without fighting and almost killing her?) that too happily. (I bet I don't know him)

3. He is looking forward to meet Sanyukta ..a woman...Mechanical design engineer...(Interesting very interesting)

Anyway I think you are right I know this Randhir.😃 My dhyan is not vatking anywhere when my hero (Randhir) is here. He is all sweaty after the game and drenched in water..quite a scene huh! I need water ..my throat is dry like sand. He is 27, successful, not taken...So I am booking him.😃. Yes me first. Sanyukta you don't have to come to Norway.Nysa someone else can meet your mother...I won't mind.

Wait what am I blabbering? You guys did this to me. I started talking nonsense after two consecutive dedications. It is SanDhir ff so I'll be happy to see them together. (Thank Goid I am back to senses.At least I hope so)

PS: I visited Norway for a conference only for only 2 weeks. So I am not expert on Norway. Even if I were I wouldn't dare to find loop holes...That restricts story. A writer should be free of date,time,place and laws. Imagination is all that they have to stay aside.So if you wish do google on it or feel free to write whatever comes to your mind.

Now update next part soon.

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Oh my! Had I not been stalking the forum now, I would have definitely missed this. I'm really greatful to my nocturnal habits that I came across this wonderful fiction.

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I have never read a fiction with such a beautiful and enticing title. Just the title of the story captivated my very attention and here I am, reading probably one of the most finest fiction ever...
Girl you just got me with the prologue. It kept me hooked till the very end and intrigued me so much... Mesmerized would just be an understatement...

Ah! The chapters, just as I predicted, were marvellous. I'm so in love with how the story is proceeding.
I specially like the personification of Randhir, it suits him just perfectly...
I'm glad that in this FF Sanyukta has a command of self respect and her action is worthly justified. Awwiiee... Sanyukta's daughter is just so cute and adorable...
Well, now that you've shown it, I like the exquisite bond of friendship that Randhir and Parth share. It was worth reading it.
I'm spell bound by the flwaless flow of the story and the radiance in description.
It was a treat reading the first 2 chapters...
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter... Hope that comes pretty soon...

Regards
Keya

Edited by -foreverhers- - 11 years ago

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

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Hey! Sush

Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,

lovely, lovely, lovely update dear

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written

love it to the core

Very well you've described the scenario

PaRan friendship is awesome

Parth teases Randhir

Sanyukta's entry on the way

Keep it up

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Love

Bushra

Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

OMG! So Randhir is a good-hearted person, while he behaves very strict at his workplace! That's awesome! I just can't wait for them to meet! I am so excited, MY GOD! And the plus point is, you are updating so soon, this makes this story a perfect one,in my sense! I am really looking forward to read more of my favourite story! Continue soon, sush! Keep writing always,coz you have reader who loves your stories alot (me)! Thanks a tonne for PM and updating so soon! Lots of love! :* <3

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

sooo beautifuly written. Rd's conv with parth,, thats sooo funny..loved it...waiting for the nxt part... with love swathi.

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Samyuktha Krishnan

@samyukthakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

loved it!!! one more today please????????

love

samyuktha😳

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Omg dies out of shock 😲 ek hi din me dusri update

Seriously sum thing is definitely different today

Now coming to the update do I need to tell its perfecy 😉

Rd description was perfect not believes in luv bt poor rd don't know he is going to be head over heels in luv

Cnt wait for sandhir to meet super excited

Do updte soon wtng

Keep smiling dear 😊

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

awesome update dear...really enjoyed this aprt...so parth is RD's cousin too... Eagerly waiting for sandhir first meeting...pls update next part asap dear...