OS:A Confused Girl - Page 2

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Pookhi,it is awsome os dear.

Thank You!😃
Somewhere my heart begain to cry and somewhere i wanted to clap.

Coming to Rachana's pov i feel she is too emotional person to handle her tears.But i like this Cry baby Rachana but truely an artist with her cuteness.

Other hand KT is workoholic and for him love is waste of time.Oh ghosh!how one man can be?
But ab voh workolic nahi hai..toh that's good.😆

I like their each and every thought for each other.But like Rachana's more.Bec she was hurted twice.But i think this she is more matured.

Yes, that's what I wanted to show ;)

I like when Kabir break her thoughts for men by his love.I feel this is the best moments of Rabir's life.Bec Rachana get her true love and so Kabir.

Yes, his love did change her opinion.😛

Kabir was sure that by demanding kiss and closing eyes his lady love will ran away.Smart boy.Rachana give up your all old belief and trust Kabir.

Nobody can love you more than Kabir in this whole worls.

Totally beautiful os dear.

If you know Hindi you will enjoy it

Pahelu me aate khushiyo ke

Aasar najar aate hai

Kadamo me humare

Chand sitare najar aate hai

Hum kaise ise pyaar kahe?

Hume dua o ke pure hone

Ke aasar najar aate hai.

Beautiful words and well written, thank you for it.😊

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Oh My God!!! pookie, its u!?

Yes it's me.😆
So happy, so read something from u :D

Totally fab...
Thank you so much Cutie.🤗

Oh my gosh, the rachna she ws to cute yaar, her not believing in luv n kabir making her realise...

Uff, tht college style...I wish I could c tht :P
Ha ha I wish I could see it too just once.😆

N the resignation,,,,,oh my it ws awesome part :)

Kabir...like really...drinking ohh wow...n our doll coming to our hero ;)

It ws totally mind-blowing...

Thank u pookie 4 writing such a beautifil n sweet os...

N don't say tht it is bad or boring:)

Thank you for your cool words!! :D

Will be waiting 2 read your next :D
🤗 Thanks again.😛

Originally posted by: awesome-raji

it's too good pookhi..

it's mind blowing

I'm glad you liked it.😳

tried to find better adjective for this brilliant os

but i am totally speechless..

so my fav word "it's awesome, awesome ad awesome"!!
And my favorite words for you are Thank you, Thank you, & Thank You!🤗

Originally posted by: hangok

owww great great ,
hope to read more from you

Originally posted by: saravathi

Gr8 yaar,I have read ur previous os,ofcourse not on Rabir

But this the best of yours,The excitement was growing for every word,..Rachna's inner conflict was so beautifully written,

n KT impressing Rachna was the best,Was laughing reading that...Pls write more

Originally posted by: sb1410

Great dear you should write more I honestly loved reading it.

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

pookhi its awesome

i loved it to the core 😳👏

it was a very short yet sweet nd lovely os 😳

gud work👏