SwaRon OS- The Official Pay Back *PMs Sent*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Back with SwaRon OS on current track but still a bit different... Do give it a read.
Thanks to Deepa di, Rosyrkohli, AnanyaVrushan for help!! 🤗 Love you all.

Specially dedicating to CHARU DI (cscs) ! Love you ❤️

**SwaRon OS- The Official Pay Back**

"Sharon..I'll have to go..Vicky ne urgent bulaya hai garage.." Swayam told her getting up from the sofa...
"Umm..okay...jaldi aana..." Said Sharon with a light smile...

***

Swayam goes to the Garage where Bharat's father tells everyone that the Garage is now no more thir Academy.. Everyone revolts but his father don't pay heed.

Tensed Swayam came back home..late night...

He opened the door slowly and found Sharon sleeping on the couch only... he without disturbing her went to the Bathroom and washed his face... and came out...

He didn't wake her up... had a glass of water and sat on the Dining Chair itself thinking about the future...

"Problems!! Ek problem khatam nahi hoti ki next saamne... sabse pehle Academy ki responsibilty mujh par...then Karma ka tension... Huma ka jhoot...undono ke pair up ka tension n most importantly Sharon, uski health...n humare relationship ke tiffs!! Jab sab thik ho raha tha...noww! We don't have place...proper place..jise hum Academy keh sake!! Wow" His fingers formed a tight fist and he was about to bang it on the table but stopped thinking that Sharon was asleep...

Time went thinking and he slept there only...

***

"Swayam... yahan par so raha hai...and isne bataya bhi nahi when he came...and still he is asleep...??" Sharon came to him and found his face not at all relaxed... she could feel the tension...

She firstly made juice and bread omlette for both of them and then shook him... he slowly got up... and startled to see her ready!!

"Sha..Sharon..tum uth gayi...wo...m.." Swayam stood up immediately...
"Hey..hey relax... tum kab aaye?? Koi awaz nahi kuch nahi...??" Sharon asked...
"Wo...late ho gaya tha isliye nahi uthaya tumhe..." Swayam said with a fake smile...
"Swayam! Kya hua...tum tensed lag rahe ho?? Huh..?" She asked softly...
"Sharon...Bharat ke Papa Garage sell karne wale hai..." Swayam sighed.
"What..?? Swayam...tum... umm..tum baitho pehle..." She asked making him sit on the chair...and she too did so...
"Mein arrangement kar raha hun..trying to..." Swayam spoke shrugging his shoulders...
"Swayam...ghar mein tum practise kar sakte ho...so.." Sharon gave him suggestion...
"No..Sharon... yaha Rehearsal means tumhe problem...no I can't afford that... coz last mein tum yahi kahogi ki you shall stay at your house carefully...but no!!" Swayam spoke looking at her...
"Swayam...tum samjho...yeh important hai...Dance Mania... " She smiled at him...
"Shar.." He nodded a no.
"Gosh! tum kyun nahi maan rahe ho...meri baat...? Mein apne ghar mein reh lungi... why you... " She said..
"Tumhara ghar kahin bhaag ke nahi jaa raha hai...so no!!! Ek week ke baad rehna hi hai na tumhe...so tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho..." Ordered her...

This sentence reminded Sharon of their debt...everything was on stake...!! She just looked a bit aside...as her throat was chocking... Swayam observed her changed expression...he couldn't resist from asking her...

"Shar... kya hua? Achanak se tum aise... " He made her face him...
"K..kya? Mujhe kuch nahi..nahi hua...tum batao...tumhare Re.." She tried to hide the issue by changing the topic...
"Shar...mujhse jhoot mat bolo...tell me...kya hua hai...???" He cut her...
"Swa...Swayam..." Tears were forming in her eyes...
"Tum...Sharon...tell me... you are making me tensed dammit!!" He said while holding her shoulders...

She couldn't stop herself from shedding tears... Swayam cuppped her face...
"Sway..yam...humara ghar...w...Mom...d..debt...m..." She was trying to speak up properly...
"Debt? Ghar??? Plz...clearly bolo na..." He was damn worried...

She spoke all the truth...everything to him...and that was no less than a shock for Swayam!! Shock was an understatement for him...

"Whatt!!! Sharon...itna sab ho gaya...and tumne..." Swayam couldn't believe what he heard...
"Swayam...I m...sorry...wo mein..sorryy..." She was crying...
"Mein tumhari help karta...agar yeh pehle bata deti...aur don't you trust me??" Swayam asked softly...
"Mein tumhe tension nahi dena chahti thi..vaise bhi hhumare relation mein problems kitni aati hai...and I..I tr..trust youu...I do..." She closed her eyes...holding his palm who were cupping her face!

He just pulled her in a hug... she didn't stop crying but hugged him more tight...

"Acha...chupp..Shar...see..I am here with you...I'll help youu...chilll...don't stress yourself..please..." He calmed her down by soothing her back...
"Par...t...tum..." She broke the hug...
"Sharon...I can pay your debt...you.." He was cut by her...
"No...no...Mom kabhi..kabhi allow nahi karegi...wo nahi maanegi...Swayam...mein..." She immdiately spoke...
"Yeh kya baat hui Sharon.. mein unse baat karlunga...tum tension mat lo..." He spoke calmly...

She was about to say when Swayam's phone rang...it was Rishi Shekhawat...

"Hello Papa..."
"Swayam...kaise ho aur Sharon kaisi hai???" Rishi asked.
"Thik hai Papa...Sharon bhi ac..achi hai" He replied...
"Acha...mujhe tumse aur Sharon se milna hai beta...kabse nahi mila..." He smiled.
"Hmm...but abhi itne busy hai ki hum aa nahi sakte waha..." Swayam said.
"Are to mein to aa gaya hun na...kholo darwaza..." He chuckled.
"Huh...Papa..?? Aap yaha ho????"
Sharon n Swayam exchanged looks... Rishi cuts the call..As he spoke... Swayam went to open the door and yes he was here...
Sharon was behind Swayam...a bit hiding... Rishi was amazed to see both of them together...

Swayam called him in... Both touched his feet... he blessed him...

"Sharon..bete...kaisi ho...?? Aur subah subah yahan...hmm... matlab Shaadi ke baad ki practise abhi se shuru... " He chuckled...
"Wo..." Both looked down... but Swayam had no smile or expression as such...

Rishi sensed it...
"Swayam?? Tumhe kya hua?? Sab thik hai na??" Curisous he was...
"Papa...haa...bas Shar..." He stopped as Sharon in a glance glared at him...
"Sharon??Swayam?? Beta? Bolo...kya hai...?" He asked.

Swayam narrated Sharon's problem to him...and even told that she was not accepting help from him...

"Kyun aisa...meine tumhe apni family ka part maan liya hai...so..." Rishi made her understand...
"M...wo Mom...n..mein..." Sharon hesitated...
"Sharon...yeh issue itna small nahi hai...mein unse baat kar lunga na... I'll try..." Swayam twitched his lips while speaking.
"See...kya tumhe problems kam hai Swayam? Meri problem ko later solve kar sakte hai...it's not hard and fast!!" She realised he was also in tension!
"Okay!!!! Hum humari problem s.." Swayam stopped immediately...

He looked at Rishi who was also staring at him.
"Papa...woh..." He tried to speak...
"Yeh acha hai Sharon ne bola...nahi to mujhe to kuch pata hi nahi chalega beta..." Rishi spoke shaking his head once.
"Kuch nahi hai... sirf Bharat ka Garage khali karne ke liye uncle ne bola hai...uska hi back-up dhundh raha hun... " Swayam replied.
"To Swayam tum kahan Rehearse karoge??" Sharon asked.
"Are... tum dono ladna nahi ab...I hope Swayam...abhi thoda time hai na...?" He asked
"Haan... jaise Sharon ki Mom aa jayegi...uske bad ye ghar mein hi practise shuru kar denge..." Swayam smiled.
"Acha..to Sharon...tum apni Mom se baat karo...thik hai???" Rishi smiled.

She nodded. Rishi came Mumbai for some work so he went off. And SwaRon decided to move to their Rehearse Places!

***

Days passed and Sharon's Mom arrived. She was amazed about the fact that Swayam took her to his home and she was there with him. Sharon told her about Rishi...

"Mom...Swayam ke Dad offered the help...humara debt clear..." She looked at her.
"Sharon!! Yeh kya baat hui...hum kisi se bhi help le lenge...are we not capable???" Her Mom was loud.
"Mom!! Woh mera bf hai!!! Please... aapko wo ab bhi nahi pasand?? Yeh...aap..." Sharon was frustrated.
"Sharon, beta...it's not like that... bas...aisehi... acha okay...for you I'll talk to them!" She smiled light.
"Sachhi? Ohh thanks Mom!! To Dinner ke liye!!! Pakkaa!! Aaj..." Sharon excitedily spoke.

Her Mom nodded. Sharon informed this to Swayam.

***

Dinner Time,

It was all awkward too due to Sharon's Mom's replies. She a bit seemed uncomfortable... Sharon indicated in between but she as she was not impressed with Swayam...the convo seemed uninteresed from her side!! Rishi guessed it. Swayam was known to her behaviour...

"Swayam..." Sharon spoke...
"Agar koi problem na ho to...as I am..." Swayam was cut by...
"We can handle this... why help then, huh?" Sharon's Mom was bit rude.
"Swayam! It's okay...agar unko problem hai humse..to thik hai na..." Rishi looked at Swayam...
"Nahii..nahii... a.aisa kuch nahi hai...Aap..." Sharon interupted...

She was trying to control the situation.

"See! We have taken the loan from R. S. Enterprises ... so yeah...not a big deal..." Her Mom spoke casually...
"Whattt???!!!! " Rishi got up! And Swayam was shocked too...

Seeing that all of them stood in amazement.
"R. S. ??" Swayam spoke...
"Haan... why so shocked???" Sharon asked.
"Yeh..meri Company hai...!!" Rishi told them...

Avantika actually got a shock... R. S. En. was actually Rishi Shekhawat's!!!

"And...it is really important to pay it offf...! You can't ignore!!" Rishi informed them...
"Ohh yeahh! Mom...mujhe yaad hi nahi aaya yeh inki Company hai... a.." Said Sharon
"F..ir..." Her Mom turned tensed.
"Please..Please...aap help accept kar lijiye... sach mein... " Swayam spoke softly...
"Okay help le li...then??" MRP asked.
"Means...fir to apka ghar...debt clear ho jayega...aur sab...sahi ho jayega..." Swayam replied...
"Then yeh batao kab mujhe ise pay back karna hoga...um..interest nn.." She asked with brows up.
"Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai... jab...hum ek... " Rishi was about to complete but Avantika spoke..
"What! Hum kisi ka ehsaan nahi rakhte...I don't like it! And what EK?? I never approved anything..." She turned diva.
"Mom! Yeh aap kya keh rahi ho...?" Sharon revolted.
"Sharon...tum..." Swayam was about to shut her...
"Ek sec...Swayam ko kuch na bole wahi acha hoga..." Rishi spoke...
"Papa...aap kyun...hum yaha debt ki baat karne ke liye hai..." Swayam tried to calm him.
"Nahi! Jo galti meine ki...mein ab bhi pachta raha hun... Sharon ne mujhe lesson diya tha... meine tumhe samjha hai Swayam phir... aur yeh galti mein nahi chahunga koi aur kare aur tumhare khilaaf kuch nahi sun sakta mein... aur aapko (to Avantika) puri help mil jayegi... Swayam Sharon ko meri taraf se haan hai... to kuch bhi inki khushi ke liye..." Rishi smiled...

Avantika was stunned... she was just looking at tensed Sharon... Rishi asked Swayam to leave... Sharon stopped but Rishi just gave her blessing and told he'll meet her some other day... Swayam could also not control tat situation.

Rishi came out... and so Swayam...
"Papa...aap jaiye...mein aata hun..." Swayam spoke.

He agreed and left. Swayam was just roaming infront of her house... he was waiting for Sharon to come to the window of her Room...

***
There Sharon shouted...
"Mom!!! Aapko pata bhi hai... Swayam kon hai..kaisa hai... wo jaanta hai aap use pasand nahi karti fir bhi humesha aapki side li hai usne... wo tab bhi aapki help ke liye aage ayaa... mujhe attack aaya...he took me home!!!! Itni care, itna love karta hai... aapko kya problem haiii! What the hell do you want???? *tears* Mein Swayam se bohot pyaar karti hun... wo mujhe samajhta hai...mujhse Unconditional love karta hai... mujhe In-Out pehchanta hai...jitna koi nahi kar paata...aap bhi nahi Mom!!! You are defo missing out so so muchh... I wish mein...kuch huh... " Sharon sighed but tears flowed down...
"Sharonn..tum kaise baat kar rahi ho mujhse??? Huh...manners?? Have you lost them??" Avantika too lost her temper.

"Yeahhh !! Wow! Aapne jab Swayam ki insult ki ? Tab? Mom he is my boyfriend!! Usne aapke khilaaf kuch nahi bola... but you...no...aap chup rahi nahi...so I support him...he is not wrong!!" Sharon relpied loud.

Avantika was shocked... she was actually confused... Sharon changed...just because of Swayam... or she herself was too rude and wrong... she just left from there and marched into her room...

Sharon was tensed... she was not able to control her anger... she so wanted to say sorry to Rishi n Swayamm...

There, Swayam was waiting for her... as he knew her... she would come there... but till now no... she was not yet up... worry encountered him... he called Sharon but she cut it...

He had no option but to knock their door... he found it still open... and went inside...

Sharon looked at him... she was crying...

"Swayammm!" She called his name a bit loud...

Avantika who was in her room heard it...she sighed...and walked out...

"Sharonn... tum ro kyun rahi ho...don't stress!!" Saying this Swayam held her shoulders...

Asthma came over...her coughing!! Swayam caressed her...Her Mom saw this and went up to take her machine... Sharon was breathing high...

Her Mom was tensed and was about to come down...but the moment she stopped herseelf at the stairs itself when she saw Swayam taking out INHALER fromhis pocket...and giving it to Sharon!!

Sharon felt a bit relief...
"Calm...Shar..calm... " Swayam cuped her face...
"Sorry..wo..." Sharon said...
"Hey...aisa kuch hua hi kaha...jisse tumhe sorry bolna pade...stop Sharon!" Swayam wiped her tears...
She just hugged him... he caressed her back soothing it...
"Sharon...I know you'll exert yourself...so now promise me...no crying, no thinking about it, okay? Sleep peacefully... sab acha hoga...okay...?" Swayam's eyes emoted love...
"Hmm...love you..." She smiled.
"Love you too..bye gn...tc.." He left her...

Biding a bye, he went to his home.
This was all witnessed by Avantika who quitely left from there to her room...

She had no words for what she saw... she found herself guilty for not accepting Swayam from the day she met him...

***

Next day;

"Ting tong"

Kaka opened the door...
It was Sharon...

"Are Sharon bitiya...aao na... mein Swayam baba ko abhi bulata hun" Kaka smiled.

She nodded...
Kaka went and from other side Rishi arrived...

"Are aao beta..." Rishi welcomed her...

Swayam smiled as he saw her... but the next moment Rishi n Swayam got amaze when they saw her Mom behind her...with a light smile.

"Aaiye na...aap..." Swayam smiled...

Both came in.

"Mein aata hun..." SWayam was going...
"Swayam! Wait...kuch baat karna hai...important...Mom ko" Sharon stopped him.

He nodded... They didn't sat even when forced...

"I have no problem taking your help but I won't stay just without paying back..." Avantika spoke.
"Aap kyun...mujhe..." Rishi sighed...
"Pay back ka way hai ki... would you accept the proposal "My Sharon offically Swayam's Sharon?" She smiled.

All eyes turned shockkk! Sharon smiled... Swayam n Rishi exchanged looks.!

"Aisa pay back...mein humesha se chahta tha..." Rishi had a wide smile...
"Means...you ac..." Swayam had no words...he was amazed!!!
"Yes!! Sharon will be yours soon... I accept you Swayam for my Sharon..."

Avantika came and blessed him...by putting her hand on his head... Sharon smiled and Swayam too...

Sharon gave a flting kiss tohim n he smiled with a shy looking at her..

That was the Pay Back ...as Official SwaRon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved this os...
Wish this actually happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is so goooddd patient ji!!
it is really awesome...swaron <3
official *_* yeh show mein ho jaye :v
awesome it is!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res 😲
unres..
first of all thank u sakshi for this os. loved it 😃
For the first time i am liking his family thing and thats bcz of ur os 😛
n omg i m so missing papa shekhwat, hope he comes back soon.
n the best thing was my sharon's as swayam's sharon 😊
hope it happens in d3
Edited by cscs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Sakshi that was like so awesome..😃 😳
I loved this one..
SwaRon..
i wish asli me bhi MRP maan jaye..🥱
Awesome writing..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too Dramatic bt who cares when it is on swaron...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good?
naa this is AWESOME indeed...
sharon can see his tensed face..
loved that they share problems with each other..

rishi is just fab in this os..
finally avantika saw the caring swayam nd accept him..

wow..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sakshi! Tum gazab ladki ho yaar. Matlab ek hi OS mei saara kuch nipta diya tumne. From rejection to acceptance! Waaahhh!
Aajkal har koi chahta hai ki papa shekhawat ki entry ho jaaye :p kya tum bhi unn logon mei se ho? Lol.
Waise toh mujhe current track ka itna zyada idea nahi hai par i really liked it. You wrote every scene very nicely, not rushing anything. Sharon ki mom toh pagal hai, swayam jaisa ladka unki beti ko kabhi nahi mil sakta! 😆
Inhaler wala scene toh even i want to see in the show, its impactful and will definitely give a huge blow to her mom.
Very nice sakshi ^___^
Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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after reading dis os, 1st thot which came to my mind ws KASHH CVS V AISE SOCHTE :(

awsm os... Loved it... Keep writing dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey🤗
awesome os loved it
soo dramatic yet too swt
loved the way swayam understood sharon
papa shekhawat he z jus too gud i felt
n finally sharons mom accepted them
all in all a brilliant work

love
shini
Edited by shalomshini - 11 years ago

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