The Divorce | COMPLETE | AbhiGya SS by mina - Page 3

I really like ur style of writing
continue asap

Loved it very much , thank you for such an amazing story.
What a cliffhanger part.
Wonder why Abhi called Purab .
Is he going to reveal the truth.
What will Abhi do if Purab revealed the truth.
Will Abhi listen to his heart and start a new life with Pragya or is going to to let Aaliyah and Tannu to influence his decision.
Will Pragya what to start a new life with him after all the heart ache he gave her.
So many questions going in mind now.
Please do update soon.

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Originally posted by: lasyap3

Beautiful and lovely concept...

Please do continue ...

Thank you so much! Wow, I am glad you think so highly of the concept. 😊

Originally posted by: blue_rose1605

Beautifully written... waiting for the continuation...

Thank you, will try not to keep you waiting too long 😳

Originally posted by: magati

very beautifully written...

please continue soon

Thank you, I really appreciate your comment! You are such a loyal reader, thank you 😃

Originally posted by: fireroad99

just love it update soon

plz pm to me

Thank you for commenting! I don't send update PMs, sorry 😕

Originally posted by: illa8

this is great!

Woohoo glad you like it! Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

beautifuly written...
superb...

Aww thank you! Really appreciate your reading & commenting 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: teddyyy

This piece is evidence that you're a good writer because as much as I love your work with dialogue, this "heavier, less dramatic" piece was as enjoyable! I felt placed in Abhi's position, confused and slightly annoyed with why all this was being made so easy, why the "greedy" Chasmish wasn't asking for anything. I mean come on Abhi you've been living with her all this time and it strikes you now that she never asked for money! The memories and the present all kinda crashed down together and I'm glad SOMETHING finally struck this man! Sarla Ma's response was one I enjoyed because finally she wasn't the faint old woman, but the strong woman who could live with her daughter and live a good life too. I'm really excited to read more! Hmm maybe Purab spills or Abhi does something nuts? I dunno LOL! Update soon (:

teddy!!!!!! *hugglesquishes you* ahhh thank you SO much for this amazing compliment! i'm so glad you're reading here; i'm conflicted about posting WIPs to tumblr, so this probably won't go up until it's all done, and same for the rest of "Enough" 😳 felt a little bad about leaving tumblrites hanging, so again i'm glad you found this.

wow thank you for the detailed feedback! haha, i made you feel in abhi's position, success!! yes, the main point is opening abhi's eyes about pragya's lack of greediness - a point i feel is underemphasized in the show. i mean have you ever seen a less gold-digging heroine in your life? silly abhi...glad the mix of present/memories worked for you; definitely abhi has reached a turning point but i really wanted to show his conflicted thought process as he sorted through his experiences with pragya. hurrah that that worked for you 😊 and woohoo thanks for seeing Sarla's side! one little line but a very important moment too.

thanks for you predictions, will try not to keep you hanging much longer! but yeah probably abhi won't do anything nuts, this is (probably) going to conclude in the same tone as "a new beginning" - a bit serious, a bit boring 😉

Originally posted by: Kruths97

Can't wait for the next part!! Loved itt 👍🏼

Eee thanks so much! Hee love the thumbs up. Working on the next part!

Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow!!
Amazing story!!
So will purab tell the truth to abhi!!
It seems like abhi is falling for pragya!!
Please update soon and pm me if you do !!
👏

Thank you so much!! Haha I appreciate the applause, and your lovely comments. You have a good idea of where the story is headed 😉 Will try to finish and post the next part today, but sorry, I don't do update PMs 😳

Originally posted by: rutu83

wonderful👏
i find a mature abhi here, one who's questioning things, one that's thinking things over before making a decision, one who understand that eyelock. sadly for us viewers, this is not the abhi from the show

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts! Glad you like this side of Abhi. I feel that it's possible for him on the show, but I doubt we'll ever see it, as it better serves the drama to have him silly/impulsive/obtuse 😡 Anyway hope I can write a just and satisfying ending for this more mature Abhi! Thanks again for your insightful comment.

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing. You have wriiten Abhis thoughts on chasmis perfectly. Loved it. Excited to know what will be Abhis decision

Thank you! I am so happy that you think I've captured Abhi's voice. Will try to show Abhi's decision soon!

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

Really nice. ...👏.loved it. ...waiting 4 next...

Thank you so much!! Really appreciate your reading and commenting! ❤️

Originally posted by: MissAsian

I really like ur style of writing
continue asap

Aww thank you! I am so happy somebody liked the style, I worried that is a little boring hehe 😳 Working on the next part now!

Originally posted by: smala

Loved it very much , thank you for such an amazing story.
What a cliffhanger part.
Wonder why Abhi called Purab .
Is he going to reveal the truth.
What will Abhi do if Purab revealed the truth.
Will Abhi listen to his heart and start a new life with Pragya or is going to to let Aaliyah and Tannu to influence his decision.
Will Pragya what to start a new life with him after all the heart ache he gave her.
So many questions going in mind now.
Please do update soon.

Gosh thank you so much! I really appreciate your reading & commenting on all my stories. You are asking all the right questions! I think you have a good idea of where the story is headed, hope you will like the next part...working on it!

Awww! I guess Abhi will to go talk to Pragya?

It was a lovely read Mina. Abhi's thought process came out realistically.

Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you.

Pragya will first deny to want anything to do with him. But he will charm her to it.

awsome
pls write d second part too soon
waiting

WOW! AMAZING & very well written!