The Divorce | COMPLETE | AbhiGya SS by mina - Page 2

Originally posted by: -mina-

OK ok! *hides from wrath of Ishaa*

lol no seriously, thank you for the details. Sometimes it's hard for me to see what's in my own writing, not enough distance as it were. 😳 And of course I love to hear about my writing so go on as much as you like 😛 😆

thanks Ishaa

Beautifully written... waiting for the continuation...

very beautifully written...

just love it update soon

This piece is evidence that you're a good writer because as much as I love your work with dialogue, this "heavier, less dramatic" piece was as enjoyable! I felt placed in Abhi's position, confused and slightly annoyed with why all this was being made so easy, why the "greedy" Chasmish wasn't asking for anything. I mean come on Abhi you've been living with her all this time and it strikes you now that she never asked for money! The memories and the present all kinda crashed down together and I'm glad SOMETHING finally struck this man! Sarla Ma's response was one I enjoyed because finally she wasn't the faint old woman, but the strong woman who could live with her daughter and live a good life too. I'm really excited to read more! Hmm maybe Purab spills or Abhi does something nuts? I dunno LOL! Update soon (:

Can't wait for the next part!! Loved itt 👍🏼

Wow!!
Amazing story!!
So will purab tell the truth to abhi!!
It seems like abhi is falling for pragya!!
Please update soon and pm me if you do !!
👏

wonderful👏
i find a mature abhi here, one who's questioning things, one that's thinking things over before making a decision, one who understand that eyelock. sadly for us viewers, this is not the abhi from the show

Amazing. You have wriiten Abhis thoughts on chasmis perfectly. Loved it. Excited to know what will be Abhis decision

Really nice. ...👏.loved it. ...waiting 4 next...