Story- How Pankhuri should come back! Idea! *Check it out*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey all!
Haven't posted in here, well practically forever! But I wrote this short story of the possibility of how Pankhuri could come back!
How there's no double role!
Explains how Ayesha goes and pankhuri comes!
Ayesha doesn't get hurt.
Check it out guys would greatly appreciate it

http://www.booksie.com/fan_fiction/short_story/xcraziiekidd2010/story-on-how-to-get-pankhuri-back

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really a great and nice post.😊

Hope CVs read this,consider few points and install it in Pankhuri's track.


Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For those who can't access the website.
Read it here:

In the Diwans office, with Adi and Rubal. Rubal is holding some files. Which he hands over to Adi.
Rubal: Adi here you go, this project now belongs to you. It's a beautiful project to take up, and I know no one can do it better than you.
Adi: [confused] whats this? [starts flicking through the file]
Rubal: Project save a life: Woman shelter. Adi this shelter was set up 35 years ago by this charity called save a life. They made a shelter here for girls and women to go to. It is home to 10,000 women and girls. Those women who were abused, abandoned, tortured, injured, lost. Adi our company can donate some profit each month to this charity. It will save lives everyday.
Adi: [smiling] Rubal! That's amazing Yaar! But why are you giving this to me? I mean I would be honoured!
Rubal: no Adi, this ones for you. [Smiles and leaves]
Adi: This Rubal uff! But this seems damn good. I'll go to this place tomorrow itself!

-scene shifts- [In avantika and Harish's house. Avantika is there when Adi enters.-
Avantika: Adi! [Pleasantly surprised] what are you doing here?
Adi: Mom! [hugs her] [Adi begins to explain this women's shelter project to avantika] I'm going there tomorrow mom! I'm so excited!
Avantika: [uneasy and shocked] What?! Adi it's great but why? Why are you going there?
Adi: [confused at her expression] Mom? Why not?
Avantika: [Reluctant] Adi please, stop pestering me. Just don't take up this project. It's great and all but just let Rubal handle it. You have enough going on. Please Adi just believe me son.
Adi: [shocked] Mom? What the hell? Are you mad? This project is amazing! And instead of being happy for me, your stopping me? [Adi is frustrated and Storms out]
Avantika: God please save my son! god please. He has too much going on. He can't bare another shock in his life. God please protect him. [crying] I've kept this from everyone for years. Please don't let it come out now. Please.

-Scene shifts- [Adi arrives at the women's shelter and steps out of his car. The manager comes to greet him]
Lalita: Hello mr Aditya Kumar. It's a pleasure to meet you and have you here, my name is Lalita Khanna. I'm the manager of this place.
Adi: [smiles and greets her] Thank you.
Lalita: Mr Kumar, I will get one of our girls to show you around. Feel free to ask her any questions you have. I'm sure you will feel right at home here.
Adi: [Smiles as Lalita takes him inside]
Lalita: [Calls a girl] Aashi!! Aashi!! Come here dear, please show around our guest Mr.Kumar!
Aashiyana: [smiling comes and greets adi] hello mr Kumar, my name is Aashiyana but everyone calls me Aashi! Come I will show you around.
Adi: Nice to meet you Aashi.
-(Aashi shows him around, they visit everyone room, except one. Which leaves Adi curious)-
Adi: ERM Aashi? Whats in that room? Why are you not taking me there?
Aashi: [looks nervous] Actually sir, that room is off limits too everyone except me. But I can't take any guests in there.
Adi: Yes but whats there? Gold? Money? (Laughs) whats the big secret?
Aashi: Sir, I promise I will tell you later. Please just trust me on this.
Adi: okay.
-(The tour is done, Adi and Aashi sit down and start talking)-
Adi: So Aashiyana! Whats your story? Why are you here?
Aashi: Actually, at birth my mother abandoned me because my father had an extramarital affair. My mother couldn't bare the thought of a love child with that man who cheated on her. So she had me and put me here. But it's not all bad. She still visits. But in the last 3 years she hasn't come. But she's wonderful sir. I understand her decision.
Adi: Oh that's very sad to hear. But why don't you go back to her now?
Aashi: No sir I can't. It's too complicated. She has an older son too, my brother. I would love to meet him. But she says he's already been through too much trauma. And I would make it worse and complicate their household matters more.
Adi: oh. Well it's good she visits you and is in contact
Aashi: Yes, well she is from the Diwan household. There very rich. So she has the money to support me. In fact her money got me through medical school. (Smiling)
Adi: (shocked upon hearing Diwan house) What? Diwans? Whats her name?
Aashi: Avantika Kumar?
Adi: (Shocked to the core, can't believe this is his sister. He observes her closely. And sees a resemblance between them. He's shocked) OMG! Aashiyana?! Oh dear lord. (remembers why avantika didnt want him to come here. Shocked)
Aashi: sir? Are you ok?
Adi: my name is Aditya harish Kumar, son of avantika and harish Kumar. Diwan khaandaans son.
Aashi: (Shocked also, that this is her long lost brother) OMG! Adi! OMG you're my brother!!! (so happy she immediately hugs him)
Adi: (Taken back, is shocked and doesn't know how to take this in) Your my sister. (Hugs her tightly and gulps. Tears come down his eyes. He doesn't know wether to be really mad at his mom or really happy he found his sister) Aashi! Aashi and Adi! God! I'm so shocked...
Aashi: Bhaiya, it's ok. Mom said it will be difficult for you to take in. I'm sorry. But I'm so happy I'm meeting you! Your so handsome! My brother is so handsome! (Laughs with tears in her eyes)
Adi: (smiles, and kisses her forehead as though he's known her forever) my sister is a doctor. (Smiles)
-They get up and begin to walk out. Aashi told Adi not to tell anyone he's met her yet. Adi agrees. They walk pass that room again-
Adi: Aashi, you never told me. Whats in that room.
Aashi: That's my patient. She was brought here 2 years ago, after being in hospital. No one came for her Adi. No one. She had an accident. Doctors say she was found in Kullu. This poor girl slipped into a coma. And ever since then I've been taking care of her. Hoping one day she wakes up.
Adi: (shocked, he heard the word Kullu and accident) What? What did you say? Kullu?
Aashi: yes, did you not hear of that Kullu landslide 2 years back? Well she came from there Adi. (Laughs) I don't know how she ended up in Mumbai though. She was taken to hospital, I treated her there also. But then when her treatment was complete, doctors said to take her off the life support machine because no one came for her. I said no and brought her here instead.
Adi: (Shocked beyond belief! Could this be his Pankhuri? Could this finally be her? shocked to the core he insists on seeing her) Aashi please, I have to see her just once. I lost my wife a few years back in the Kullu landslide. Aashi I have to know if it's her. Aashi please.
Aashi: (Sees he's desperate. She agrees and lets him in)
...could this be Pankhuri?

Adi: (Opens the door, and walks closer) Pankhuri! (Tears come to his eyes, he is shaking. He is shaking so hard he drops to his knees. He's crying uncontrollably) My Pankhuri, I finally found my Pankhuri. I can't believe this. Pankhuri. (He can't stop saying her name. He holds her hand so firm and strokes her hair kissing her head. He caresses her face and cries) Aashi, this is my Pankhuri. I found my Pankhuri. I found my Pankhuri Aashi.
Aashi: (Starts crying seeing her brothers happiness and love for his Pankhuri.) Bhai I'm so happy for you. (She goes close to him and he hugs her tightly)
Adi: Aashi, today God gave me two things. My Pankhuri back and a sister I never knew I had. Aashi I can't believe this. (His phone begins to ring. He looks at the screen and sees Ayeshas name. Shocked he wipes his tears and answers the phone)
Ayesha: Adi where are you? You were supposed to home an hour ago! Poonam and Aunty are waiting for you.
Adi: (Trying to control his tears and his shaking voice) Ayesha, ok. I'm coming. I'm coming ok. (He hangs up)
Aashi: whose this Ayesha?
Adi: (Explains to her the whole story. How he's married to her etc)
Aashi: OMG! Now you have two wives! Adi! OMG!
Adi: I know! But I don't love her. I can never love her. Adi is just made for Pankhuri. I care for her a lot! I really do! She's an amazing girl. She's beautiful. She's got a heart of gold. I tell you she's perfect in every way..but..
Aashi: but what?
Adi: but she's not Pankhuri. Ash, Pankhuri is made for me. This is my Pankhuri Aashi! This girl right here! This is my Pankhuri.
Aashi: but? What if this Ayesha girl loves you? you can't leave her like that Adi! She has feelings too!
Adi: I know, I know I can't hurt her like that. I don't know what to do! Aaah! (Frustrated)
Aashi: Adi, you can't leave her.
Adi: I know! But what should I do? I can't leave her! I don't want to hurt her either! But I can never love her. She's not my Pankhuri.
Aashi: No but she's Ayesha. She's sill a person who has feelings. What if she loves you?
Adi: Maybe Aashi, maybe! (Starts thinking) Wait! Do you know any eligible bachelor? Perfect guy? For ayesha?
Aashi: huh? What do you mean Adi? You want to get her married to someone else?
Adi: Look, my mother hates her anyway. I mean our mom, she's brought home this poonam girl to marry me. So Ayesha is going to leave anyway. But she was going to leave hurt and alone. This way, when this new guy comes along she will get closer to him. She will fall for him! She will leave happy and with someone! She knows she can never be mine anyway!
Aashi: hmm! Ok, oh! I know lots of guys Bhai! Tell me what Ayeshas like! Maybe I can find someone matching?

Adi: (begins to explain)
Aashi: OMG! Ali! Ali mumtaz!! He's the perfect guy! She will fall head over heels for him! He's a doctor too! Super handsome! Tall, fair, humble, honest, kind, caring, talkative and crazy in a good way just like Ayesha! He's the one for her! And he's looking to get married too! He wants to go live in London after marriage!
Adi: OMG perfect! London! Brilliant! Ayesha wanted to go fashion school there anyway! Now she can! This is brilliant. But I need to meet with him first! Is that ok?
Aashi: of course! I will call him and explain to him everything! Our whole situation! About you being married to her, and finding your Pankhuri etc!
Adi: brilliant! Thank you so much!! I'm leaving now, but I will be back to take my Pankhuri with me. But not yet. The time isn't right. But you have to promise me you will take care of her.
Aashi: don't worry Adi! I took care of her before, but now I will take extra care of her because she's my bhabhi! Don't worry!

-Next day, Adi and Aashi mees with Ali-
Ali: Pleasure too meet you Aditya! Aashiyana explained to me everything. This Ayesha girl seems perfect for me.
Adi: thank you for meeting with us! Ayesha is great! You will love her even more in person! Description just doesn't do her justice!
Ali: So when will I be blessed enough to meet her then?
Adi: well I will do something. Convince her she can't possible be happy with me, then set you up on a date. She will agree because she thinks she has to leave anyway because my moms setting me up with this poonam girl anyway. So it's perfect!
Ali: Adi, don't get me wrong. I would love to meet her and get to know her, but I don't want to start this relationship lying to her. I don't want to be a dhokebaaz.
Adi: Don't worry ali! Just trust my plan! It will be perfect!

-Same day, Adi is talking to Ayesha-
Adi: So poonam seems great. I think my mom really likes her
Ayesha: (Sighs and looks hurt upon hearing this) yeah she's great
Adi: Ayesha, (goes close to her and sits her down. He rests his hand on her shoulder) I'm not gonna lie to you, this marriage. I mean us. Isn't working. I just don't love you. Look I don't wanna hurt you. But I want you to move on. There's other guys out there. Ayesha your a beautiful young amazing talented woman! You have a world of opportunities! I want you to be free from my mother. From me. From this house. You came here because of my dad. Because of me. Ayesha I don't want to see you hurt like this anymore.
Ayesha: Adi...(tears rolling down her eyes)
Adi: Ayesha, (sighs) you are an amazing girl. But no matter what everyone will forever compare you to Pankhuri. I love Pankhuri, I can't forget her. Ayesha I care for you a lot. I really do. You hold a special place in my heart. But just not the same space as Pankhuri does. I'm sorry. I really am.
Ayesha: (smiles through the tears) poonam is great. She will make you really happy Adi. (She wipes her tears gets up and leaves)
Adi: I'm sorry Ayesha. I really am, but for this Adi. There can only be one Pankhuri. And that's my only Pankhuri Aditya Kumar.

-Adi calls up Ali and tells him to meet Ayesha at the mall-
-Ayesha is shopping at the mall, when she bumps into Ali-
Ali: Sorry dear. I didn't see you there.
Ayesha: (smiles) it's ok
Ali: (looks at her basket) So you like maggi do you?
Ayesha: Yes, love them!
Ali: me too! Maggi is my all time fave! Can't get enough! But it's a good quick snack to eat! Especially when you have a job like mine
Ayesha: whats your job?
Ali: I'm a doctor! (Smiles)
Ayesha: (Impressed, staring into his eyes) (Shes about to turn around when she slips and is about to fall but Ali catches her)
Ali: (staring into her eyes) Careful dear, sorry I didnt get your name
Ayesha: (mesmerised by his eyes) oh (gets up) Ayesha.
Ali: that's a beautiful name for a beautiful girl. (Smiles)
Ayesha: (still mesmerised) thank you.
Ali: so I see you also like shahrukh khan? (Picking up her phone and seeing her background)
Ayesha: (shy) Yes he's a legend!
Ali: for sure! I love SRK too! You know, my friend knows this great place where SRK and his family like everyday! It's my friends restaurant in fact! How about I take you there and we might bump into the legend himself?
Ayesha: (Taken by his smile and his words, she's lost in his eyes) Yes..I (Her phone starts ringing and see adis name) no I mean no. No I can't.
I'm married
Ali: oh, but I wasn't asking like that. Just as a friend?
Ayesha: (ignores him and answers adi call)
Adi: (purposely says how hes having. Great time getting to know poonam.) yeah she's great. She maybe the one ayesha! Thanks for supporting me about her! (feels bad hurting her. But knows this is the only way she will move away from him and accept Ali)
Ayesha: oh ok, great (feels hurt hearing that then hangs up the phone) yes Ali! Yes I'll go with you! (thinks to herself: adis moving on. So should I)
Ali: smiles. I'm glad

-Few weeks later after hanging out and getting closer to Ali. Ayesha is officially over Adi. She's happy in awe over Ali. She's all she could ever want. Ayesha goes into adis room-
Ayesha: Adi I need to talk to you
Adi: (is reading Newspaper and looks up) yeah? Whats up?
Ayesha: look Adi, I was in love with you. I was mad about you. I wanted you to love me back. But I guess you were never made for me. We married in haste. It was rushed. It was a one sided love. Adi I'm happy for you and poonam. I am. At first I was jealous. But now I'm happy. Adi I'm so happy. You should be with her. Adi you deserve better than me. Don't worry about me Adi. I'm happy, I'm happy. I've found my own Adi...well Ali. Not Pankhuri ka Adi. Ayesha ka Ali! I'm happy Adi I really am. I want to marry him. I love him Adi.
Adi: (couldn't be happier) Ayesha...
Ayesha: Adi wait...(hands him over divorce papers) your free Adi. Your free.
Adi: (smiles, and gulps he signs the papers. No hesitation. Nothing) there you go. Your free too. Too marry your Ali!
Ayesha: (smiling, she hugs Adi) thank you Adi. Thank you

-Ayesha leaves the house, and gets happily married to Ali. Adi brings back his Pankhuri to this house whilst she's still in a coma. He also brings back his sister Aashiyana. Who says that Pankhuri is showing signs of recovery! She should come out of the coma any time now! He explains to his family he doesn't want poonam and going along with the poonam idea was just to trick them and Ayesha Into leaving happily-

-Ok that's it! The rest is up to the cvs! This whole adis sister thing was to do some track after with that. Don't even have to include that. But the main purpose was getting back Pankhuri, not hurting Ayesha. And not a double role-



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PAYANASHA15

Really a great and nice post.😊

Hope CVs read this,consider few points and install it in Pankhuri's track.


Thanks for sharing.



Awww thanks so much I appreciate your feedback! Yep hope some ideas go to CVS! Would be great! Thanks for the love 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg!!! this is fab Maariyah!!! seriously a great way to bring back Pankhuri!!! The womens shelter would be perfect!! and the long lost sister is just more spice...although yes that doesn't have to happen but no harm in it either. Hmm I agree another man for Ayesha whom she falls in love with would be great- she would leave Adi herself!! I hope the CVs see this and get some ideas!! see theres no excuse for them not to bring back Pankhuri as us fans have so many great ideas of how it can happen!! I really hope they do see this!!

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