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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 11 Sneak peek

She hears the sound of a bike approaching, she thinks of Rudra. She remembers the first time she sat behind him and how she struggled to sit on it, how he told her to hold on lest she squashed into tomatoes. She laughed to herself as she climbed down the steps on her way out, "Silly Paro, why would Rudra come here after you? He told you to leave him alone didn't he? Besides he will be at the hospital right now" she told herself.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rithureuben

I'm still working on the next update to be posted tomorrow. If I give you a sneak peek at the next part, can you chase away the angry face?

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Thank you! For the sneak peak.
Hmmm.. Paro thinking about Rudra, hope Rudra find out where she is and say sorry ..
Will he?
Now I'll wait like a good girl😳
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Chapter 11
"Bhabhisa has sent over breakfast for you. Finish it fast while I talk to the doctor about getting you discharged" Rudra told his father as he entered his room. Dilsher teased that he seemed to have missed him and hence in a hurry to get him home and asked who melted his heart of stone. Rudra was not amused. His father went on to say that he missed his home too, especially his brother's hovering and his bahu's cooking. He then scolded him for acusing Parvati for the fire and said that girl is as gentle as a dove and would never hurt a soul, how could he be so foolish to blame her, if he is continues to be so quick to jump to conclusions then he will end up suspended from BSD for his thoughtlessness. Rudra lost his temper, "Your gentle dove managed to hurt me when she whacked my head", he retorted. Dilsher replied that he deserved a lot more for the pain he caused by forcing her to marry him. Rudra said, "If she has signed the papers, he would have let her go. So it's her fault." His father asked him why she should sign it when she was innocent. He yelled back saying if she was as clueless as she pretended then Tejawat wouldn't want to kill her. He had good reasons to suspect her. The heated argument brought the nurse in, who chided Rudra for causing unnecessary stress to the patient. He left the room to look for the doctor.
The doctor assured Rudra that he can take his father home, later in the day after some final tests are carried out. He left for work. Now that his health was stable, he can focus on finding Parvati. The foolish girl was somewhere in the middle of the desert and he had to find her before Tejawat did. He knew his father was right, Paro was innocent as they came. Thats what stopped him from reporting the arson to the police. She cannot be safe when she was away from him. He remembered, seeing her for the first time, crying for help in that Chadga. She was so helpless when those leecherous goons tried to hurt her. He remembered how she clung to him for safety. He had been her dark knight ever since.
On reaching the headquarters, he assembled every soldier available. He wanted to launch a massive search operation to bring her back. His right hand was in a meeting with the general, he gave orders to everyone else. As the briefing ended, Aman walked in saying a search wasn't necessary, Parvati was found.
Meanwhile, Parvati woke up and found the house empty. She made her way to the kitchen where she found the old maid, struggling to needle a thread. Paro offered to help, when she was told that Geethanjali's saree was torn and that she was trying to fix it. Paro artfully mended it by covering up the darning with fine embroidery.
Geethanjali was very pleased that her favorite saree was looking better than ever and thanked Paro profusely. The poor girl was embarassed as she enjoyed embroidering things though she never considered to have a great a talent for it. She spoke of her childhood where she used to spend all her hours playing with shiny beads, mirrors and sequins and fixing them on her clothes. Her Mamisa used to punish her by taking away her sewing kit when she used to ignore her studies. Seeing Paro so excited, Geethanjali told her about an NGO she works for where women are empowered and made economically independent by selling their handicraft items. And how Rajasthani embroidery is so profitable that she trains them in such needlecraft. She asks if Paro would like to join her once she regains her health.
Paro is in a dilemma. On one hand she would get to stich all day without anyone to stop her but on the other hand she didn't know if people would like her work. Her thoughts are interrupted by the blare if the phone. Geethanjali answers it and takes a message. She tells Paro that bapusa is now stable and will be discharged later that day and asks if she would like to go and meet him. Paro hestitates, Rudra doesn't want her hear his father, she declines and asks if she can go to the temple instead.
Back at BSD, Rudra is relieved that Paro is fine and with Geethanjali ma'am in Jaipur. He raced to bring her back home. Now that his father is alright, he can clear up everything. He will be able to take care of both of them with his bhabhisa and kakosa helping him. How did she end up in Jaipur? Why didn't she call him? He had a lot of questions for her and hoped she won't be stubborn.
At the temple, Paro thanked bholenath for saving bapusa. She prayed that Rudra forgives her too. It pained her heart to think that he thought her guilty of killing his father. He meant so much to her after saving her life so many times even if she didn't want his help. She hears the sound of a bike approaching, she thinks of Rudra. She remembers the first time she sat behind him and how she struggled to sit on it, how he told her to hold on lest she squashed into tomatoes. She laughed to herself as she climbed down the steps on her way out, "Silly Paro, why would Rudra come here after you? He told you to leave him alone didn't he? Besides he will be at the hospital right now" she told herself.
He saw Geethanjali ma'am's car parked near the temple close to their house. He slowed down, something bright and shiny caught his eye. He looked closely, it was Paro coming down the steps. It reminded him of their Ganesh stapna puja. She had worn a green lehenga choli coupled with a green dupatta which had sequins all over. She was his bride that day and all the days that followed. Would it have been so bad to be married to her? She was undoubtedly beautiful, and thoughtful, she cared about his father, now he knows that she is honest too. Will she want to come home with him, he hoped so. They will have to come up with a new reason for her to stay now that kakisa knows about the fake engagement. He'd think of something, maybe she can stay as his bhabhisa's guest, she considers Paro her sister after all. As long as she is with him, everything will be fine.
Suddenly he realised that he lost sight of Paro. He looked around frantically till he caught sight of her red bangles glittering in the sun. He remembered how he had forced her to wear another set, not so long ago. He would buy her bangles everyday of his life to make up for his rudeness. He rushed as the car started. "Take me home, bhaisa", her voice softly told the driver. Home, he stopped in his tracks. When did the general's house become her home, he asked himself. Wasn't the Ranavat haveli her home? His heart shattered as the woman he had begun to care about left him alone, just like his mother 15 years ago.
It was late in the evening when he went back to the hospital. "What took you so long? Where is Parvati? Is she home?" his father enquired. He reminded his father of the lesson he was taught during his adolense, beautiful women never belong to anybody. It was just him and his Ranavat against the world once more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the update so fast.😊
How can Paro call him when he only told leave him alone and don't want to see her again😕
Rudra can't he even talk to her for a minute? Khadoos 😡 If he talks then he'll understand what she' s thinking, but no this is Rudra.. The khadoos moonchiya.😆
You are So nicely maintaining the characters, liking it. There is a Nice flow to the story.
Hope Paro will be independent and Rudra comes around in future.

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Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Thanks for the update so fast.😊

How can Paro call him when he only told leave him alone and don't want to see her again😕
Rudra can't he even talk to her for a minute? Khadoos 😡 If he talks then he'll understand what she' s thinking, but no this is Rudra.. The khadoos moonchiya.😆
You are So nicely maintaining the characters, liking it. There is a Nice flow to the story.
Hope Paro will be independent and Rudra comes around in future.

Lol! Rudra was never reasonable when it came to Paro was he? Yes, Paro will be independent in awhile. I wanted their union to be of their choice and not compulsion.
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Nice. Rudra is as usual being thickheaded 😆
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Great update, hope the misunderstanding clears up soon! Continue soon!
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Nice. Rudra is as usual being thickheaded 😆

As annoying as his stubborness is, his easy acceptance of things will be terribly boring. 😉
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Great update, hope the misunderstanding clears up soon! Continue soon!

The misunderstanding is between the heart and the mind. Both their hearts trust each other completely but their minds are unwilling to accept this. Other than that Parud were always remarkably in sync with each other.
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Chapter 12

A few months passed bringing a lot of changes in Paro's life as she adapted to life with the general and his wife. They treated her like family and she was expected to call them Maasiji and Maasaji. Their 14 year old son was away at boarding school and they loved to have her around to alleivate their own loneliness. He was a nice boy and she speaks to him on the phone once a week.

Geethanjali took her to the NGO where she worked and Paro loved it instantly. She made a lot of friends who laughed and played and made pretty things to sell. They were all women who had their own tragic pasts, pasts that were never discussed. But often she would spot one of them with longing their eyes and she would tell them that Bholenath will give them peace once more. That's the reassurance they needed to look forward and forget their struggles. There were little children around who loved to play with her and listen to her stories. Sometimes the little girls brought their dolls for her to dress up and the boys would come over with bruised knees to be fussed about. They all knew of her fascination for imli and believed the best tasting ones were on the highest branch.

One day she returned home to see her aunt excited about something. "What's going on Maasiji?" she asked Geethanjali, who replied that she planning to have a party for VK Singh's birthday. She gives her a royal blue saree and tells her its from Vicky. Paro was suprised then she was told its a gift for Raksha bandan. Paro remembered her last conversation with him, when he had asked her favorite color. "Maasiji, when he have time to pick it up during his exams?" she asked. Geethanjali confessed that he had told her to get something in blue. But when she saw this saree in the shop window with lovely zardosi work she couldn't resist. Paro knew of Geethanjali's great love for sarees. She loved collecting them, and used any excuse to buy a new one. She had a modest collection now for her own use which she wore when she went to work.

Paro drapped the saree along her shoulder and looked into the closest mirror. She saw a different face staring back at her. A pale woman wearing an oversized kurta of the same color belonging to a man with broad shoulders which always stood between her and danger and long arms which always grabbed her by the wrist. "Another new saree?" VK Singh as he came home from work. "Yes Maasaji. Its a gift from Vicky", Paro replied. The general was pleased to see her smile. She rarely smiles and was always seemed to be waiting patiently, but for what she never told. The only time she seemed happy was when Aman visited bringing news of the Ranavats and treats from her jija. She listened so feverently as if what he said was of crucial importance but her eyes were always tinged with disappointment as if he didn't have enough to say. He knew she had some strange pull towards the haveli in Chandangarh and asked often if wanted to visit. But she always said no and he left to wonder what happened during her stay there.

Paro brought tea for the general when his phone rang. She knew from the look on his face who the caller was and she immediately grasped his rudraksh. He was far away and fighting new enemies by himself. The general and his wife had told her about his former acts of heroism where he never cared about anything other than how well he can serve his country. What if something happens to him? How will bapusa cope? Who will support jija in adopting the baby, Shanti especially when Samrat bhaisa never opposes his mother? Who will keep her safe? Who will be her shield when Tejawat strikes again? Who will be her knight in shinning armour? She had to return his rudraksh back somehow. It would protect him from danger just like her own kept her nightmares away.

Meanwhile at the Ranavat haveli, Samrat comes home earlier than before, his wife rushes to greet him. "Did you go to the police station today? Did they find Shanti's parents?" she asks worried that this may the last day for the baby to sleep in her arms. He said, "No, we must wait for some more time." Everyone was relieved, as Sumer came taking the child piggy back with his sister chased her with a new anklets. Shanti didn't like to wear them though all the women in the house loved to hear the jingle as she kicked her feet. Sumer never wanted his little princess to be burdened by such heavy jewellery. Dilsher and his brother laughed at the antics constantly surrounding the child. Even Mohini and his own son kept their temper at check when she is around. She had brought peace to the home.

Samrat knew the entire family loved the child. Even his mother who didn't like newcomers didn't complain much. He wanted to come home to her for the rest of his life. He loved it when she tried to say bapusa but ended with bapa. His wife always had a glow on her face since she entered their lives. His family was complete. But he knew that hoping to keep something that didn't belong to him was wrong. He knew the pain, he and Maithili were for not having an offspring to call their own. The pain of loosing a child that you begot and raised for awhile would be much worse. He didn't wish that on Shanti's parents. Ever since she was found, he went to the police station every week to see if they had any news. But the police were giving up, they were going to wait another week before surrendering the child to an orphanage. They asked if he wanted to adopt the child. He wanted to say yes but what if his mother says no.

Mohini saw the effect Shanti had on the entire household. This is why she wanted Samrat to have a child of his own. But her son loved his wife so much he would never blame her for her only shortcoming. Will it be so bad for him to adopt Shanti? She brushed the thought aside as he would have spoken about this especially since Maithili loved her so much.

Her thoughts turned to her other son, her favorite. He seemed more responsible, more mature as he handled the baby. He started to pay attention to work more. He went out with his useless friends less. He stopped worrying her with his Jaipur dreams. Maybe she should start searching for his bride. He was the same age as her nephew who almost got married. He was tall, handsome and such a charmer. The rich men of the neighbouring villagers would love to marry off their daughters to him. She can have a wonderful wedding and get a hefty dowry too.

Seeing the glint in Mohini's eyes, her husband looked over curiously. But she shrugged it off. She needed to know who were the eligible girls available before discussing this with him. She knew her husband will be on board. Even Dilsher will support her as he loved her kids as much as he loved his own son. They had settled in quite well. Both men rarely interfered in her running of the house. As long as she is kind to her daughter-in-law, she got along well with Dilsher. Maybe he was never the problem, it was her sister who always wanted to lord over everything. His only fault was marrying that girl over her who thought she was too delicate to do an honest day's work and wanted to be treated like a queen always. And his loosing his leg soon after marriage was punishment enough for him. He too believed her to be reason for his change in fortunes and turned away from her. She agreed with him on this. After all a woman brings fortune to man's life. No matter, she was gone for good. As long as Rudra doesn't marry an ambitious girl, she will be the mistress of the haveli forever. She wondered if she should look for a girl for him next, someone like Maithili who will always bow down to her elders' will, maybe she has a sister. Her thoughts are suddenly interrupted by Dilsher's roaring voice, "Maithili, can you make some kheer for dinner. Rudradev returns tonight victorious from his mission." Maithili and Sunheri rush about to welcome the tired warrior as Mohini feels a twinge of jealousy and wonders when one of her children will make her so proud.

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