Gustakh dil (DARK) sandhir ff Thread2# chapter 23( last)

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CHAPTER 10b

s:(sobbing) what???
R:(turns his back against her) yes
you heard me right .
no one is forcing you to live with us
when your heart belong to someone else.
jab tumhe hmare 5 years ki shadi nhi badal paye
toh its better to separate.
(leaves the room without any further reply of her)


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Rd came back home & somewhere feeling guilty about his rudeness

R: kaka sanyu kha ha?

k: sir madam ne apke lye letter diya ha

His heart skips... and only words which were audible were WHAT? WHY?
and he read that letter in which it was written I'm going from your life
but it doesn't mean that I'm characterless or filthy kind of woman.
.
.
.

and at last the word ''yours'' was scribbled and only sanyukta was written


And soon heard virat voice
and he wipe his tears
V:papa ap ay gye(kissed him)

R: aap apni mom k sath(virat cuts him)

V: aare ab ma big boy ho gya hu
ma bolti ha yeh.
and she told me that she is going to nanu's place for some days and told me to tc of you and me

R: OK
have you eaten anything?

V: yup dad
and you?

R:hmm(managed to lie)
let's sleep

V: dad but today I promised dadu that I'll sleep there
and I don't like breaking promises

R :good night was all he manages to say

and both left for their rooms

RD POV
as I entered my room
my room seems to be lifeless without you.
mujhe tumhri aadat o gye ha
dails her number


R: hello
S:(silence)
R:I know you are listening

S:kya ha(irritatedly)

R:(smiles) gussa ho

S:ni happiness k mare dance kar ri hu
dat you had left me
...no no I mean
why you care(attitude)

R:ghar ay jao
virat is missing you

s:maine usse baat kr li ha
& he is understanding unlike his father

mujhe neend at ri ha
bye
ilu...Rd stunned
ni I mean virat ko ilu khna
and usko sone se phle milk de dena

R: agar itni phikar ha toh ghar chor k kyu Gye?

S: I had left you
not my child
(hung the phone)

~~~~~~~

next day
rd was totally messed up
the reason been (you will get to know lol)


V:papa whereis my shoes

R:I don'tknow Yar
apni ma se puch

V:papa
mind your tongue

R:sorry sorry
apni mom se pucho


v: dad you are forgetting that mom is not at home

R: oh ha
wait lata hu

take your socks & shoes

V: dad
mera lunch
mrri bottle
mera bag

R:(irritated) Kya ha yaar
you are impossible
tumhari mom tumhe kse sambhatli ha
ruko servant se puchta hu
about your belongings

V:koe fadya ni(no use)
coz
mom kise ko kuch karni hi ni deti thi
now its your turn
R:whatever
(in mind..: I hate you sanyu.
tumne Jan bhuj k virat ko yha chora to irritate me)

V:dad

R:ha wait dhundta hu
trin trin

before he could say anythng sanyu speak

S:virat k lunch ma cheese omlet dena, uski bottle & lunch fridge k sath wali drawer ma ha
bye
R:(shouts) WT...
V:dad
r:sorry
chalo let's go

~~~~~
in car
V:papa I want to call mom
r:lo phone
V:hi mom
I'm missing you come soon

Hello your mom's checkup is going on
call after some times ''was all doctor informed virat.
v:OK


a/n
no pm guys
but I'll update twice a week

thread#1 link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4185924/gustakh-dil-dark-sandhir-ff-link-for-thread-2-added

chapter 11-pg2
chapter 12-pg3
chapter 13-pg 5
chapter 14-pg5
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ch18-pg10 chapter 19-pg11
ch20-pg11
ch21-pg12
ch22-pg 12
ch23-pg-13
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BornAries thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey! Parul Congratulations for the new thread 👏 🥳

Do continue soon with the next parts 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BornAries

<font size="3" color="#990033">Hey! Parul Congratulations for the new thread👏🥳</font>

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<font size="3" color="#990033">Do continue soon with the next parts😊</font>

thanks dear.
you remember this SS had given me a new and encouraging friend like you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolishparul

thanks dear.
you remember this SS had given me a new and encouraging friend like you.


Aww!!!!! love you 🤗

and Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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updated chapter10 in a new thread.

enjoy
happy reading friends
Parul
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo shongo for new thread
Party tym

The update was superb
I so luved it

Sanyu left the house
Rd feeling guilty

He's missing her
Sanyu left virat

Virat irritating rd
Its getting difficult to Handel him
Cnt wait for next


Update soon


Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey parul many congratulations on the new thread...
The chap was superb...
Rd ki tho band baj gayi...*lol*
Loved it...
Conti soon...
Love
Harshita
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey parul
Hearty congratulations to you for the new thread

Randhir.. Lol!!! Ab pata chal jayega About sanyu's hardships...
Now the ball is in her court...
Lovely update😳
Continue soon!!!


Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome superb updates
read all updates in one go
virat was so cute he really supports his mom
rd was too bad yar
hope soon he will realise his mistakes
continue asap :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.

Hey parul

Hearty congratulations to you for the new thread

Randhir.. Lol!!! Ab pata chal jayega About sanyu's hardships...
Now the ball is in her court...
Lovely update😳
Continue soon!!!



thanks dear

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