* Winner Of the Script Writing Contest! *

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Script Writing Contest Winner

Hellllo guys!🤗🤗

Hope everyone is fine, and tip top shape!😃

I hope you all remember the script writing contest!😳😆

Well, we have winners to them!😃

We had two wonderful writers send in the entry!😃👏

They Jenny and Isha. Thnkoo both for participating!🤗

Now, instead of everyone voting for the entries, I chose 4 wonderful judges that can judge the entries and pic a winner.😳

The wonderful judges were

mokshda

FrEnDs8

Manoj_Tina Fan

and yours truly, me!😃 *Even though I new who's entry was which, without my vote, we would have had the same winner!😳

Anyways, I'll stop babbling and announce the winner!😃

Its none other than....

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👏jenny1000 aka Jenny!👏

Jen, you'll get the title 'Script writing contest winner'

And our runner up is...

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👏Isha789 aka Isha!👏

Isha, you'll get the title 'Script Writing Contest Runner-up'

Thankoo both for participating!🤗🤗 A big thanks to the Judges too!🤗

The titles will be done ASAP😳

Love,

Rachna!🤗

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Here are the entries:😃

Entry 1: [By Jenny]

Manoj: Welcome everyone to our wonderful show... Let me introduce myself, I am Manoj Bohra, the hottest one of them all😉 and meet my co-host.. Miss Basanti Tina Parekh..

Tina walks in. Manoj looks shocked to see her looking like Malika Sherwat Twin..

Tina: Helloooo everyoneee!!

Manoj: What have you done to yourself Basanti?

Tina: Manoj, this a new show, we are not on Kasuati sets right now..

Manoj: Kasuati si yaad aaye, did you watch Kasuati?

Tina: huh? why are we discussising this?

Manoj: Yes or no...

Tina: Yes, but moving on.. Our countdown today is about..

Manoj: The top 10 soaps on Tellywoood!!

Tina gives him a grumbling look...

Manoj: Anyways , so at #10, We have a show where it has had multiple marriages, a lead actor walked out and came in someone no so leadful and the 2nd lead actor died and came back as his humshakal.. Yes, you have guessed it..

Tina: It's Kahiin to Hoga.. Yaaa.. with 10 votesss

Manoj: My rating would have 1.5 out 10

Tina: Moving on.. The next soap is.. a beautiful story about family, traditions

Manoj (cutting her off): Multiple marriages, face changing a bizzlon times and lots of bhasans.. Please give it up for...

Tina: Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi.. Yayyy with 15 votess..

Manoj: My rating.. umm 3 out 10.

Tina: Manoj, we are just giving countdowns, stop giving it a rating..

Manoj: Shut up blabber mouth.. now, the next soap is. ahh, for once a nice soap.. deserves the seat..

Tina: It's a story about fairies doing their jadooo and a comic soap about love and our dear Manoj has worked in..

Manoj: Yup.. it's Sharaat and gets a rating of 8 out 10..

Tina: Humphh.. 8 out 10, I give it a 6 out 10..

Manoj: Gosh, kuch jal raha hai, is it you miss Basanti Sherwat?

Tina: Sherwat? Moving on.. On the 7th spot we have the wonderful love story of an arrogant man and beautiful girl. they fight and fight..

Manoj: Oh someone like us, is KZK at this number? (thinking: after my exit, it should be sitting at no 7)...

Tina: Ahh, no, the winner is Kajaal!!!

Manoj: Oh, is that a show? whopps.. Rating: 2 out 10, 2 points cause good friend Apurva is in the show...

Tina: moving on, 6th spot belongs to one of the greatest soaps on Indian Television, It's about family, traditions and has wonderful soap artisites in it.. especially me...

Manoj: Yeaaa, ok one soap that hasn;t bored me.. It's Kahani Ghar Ghar Ki.. Congrats Tina! Rating: 8 out 10.

Tina: Thanks Manoj! Next up is a soap about traditions, values..love between family

Manoj: God, yeh sari serials mein ek kyun hota hai.. Let me decribe this serial more better. It's about a girl who runs away on the wedding day to marry her love, her sister replaces her, the girl come back and now both are fighting for the same guy.. Lucky guy I say.. Anyways, the winner is Kasam Se! Rating is 4 out 10.

Tina: Kya Manoj,Sab Ko Itni bad rating kyun de re ho? Moving on, at #4, we have a beautiful soap about a girl and her skin and how she moves on to be a wonderful person.The winner is Saath Phere!

Manoj: Lagta Hai Saloni Mother India se lesson liya hai.. Rating: 7 out 10.. It's bearable for us.. Next up is.. on number 3, we have soap which I would not call it a great soap but something about is amazing which is Prem and UD and Basanti as well. It's KZK... but now we think that KZK doesn't deserve this spot but kya kare, agar KZK number 3 spot nahi diya to phir Mother India hum bhi Dad Basu jase mar dil gi..

Tina: I agree Manoj, am scared now... The next spot is quite a different soap, a great soap for army fans and lots of candy guys in the soap.. Ahemm, moving on.. It's a tie between LRL starring Rajeev Khandelwal😳 and the wondeful Virudhh starring Smriti which Manoj Never misses kyun..

Manoj: Yup, Viruddh gets a 9 out 10 from me, wished Smriti approached me yaar and LRL also gets a 9 out 10 from me. Two soaps I never misss you see😉

Tina: and finally we have the number one show and we both are very proud to annonce it.. It is...

Manoj: It is
Idea Ek Se Badhkar Ek with total of 30 votes.. Thanks everyone!!! We love you all!!

Tina: That's it for now.. Join us next time..

Manoj: BTW Tina, next time try to dress like yourself and not like Malika Sherwat..

Tina: What? Me aur Malika Sherwat? wait Ud, I mean Prem, I mean Manoj, get back here...

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Entry 2: [by Isha]

The show starts. Manoj and Tina enter the stage. Manoj is dressed up like a gangster and Tina like a cute little school girl.

Tina: Welcome ladies…

Manoj cuts her.

Manoj: and ladies.

Tina: Ladies? Areh Dharti ke bhoj manoj… tumhe pata hain na ki tumare picche koi nahi bhaagta…

Manoj: Chup karo tin ka dabba, tum sirf jealous ho…

Tina: Yeah yeah wotever..!

Manoj: Aur kya tumne yeh school dress pehenkar aaya hain.. bilkul bandar jaisi dikhrahi ho.

Tina: Aur aapna sakal aaine main deekha hain.. bhoot se kaam nahi ho!

Manoj: Anyways Ladies, You know what I am right? Toh aab suru karte hain Idea Ek Se Badhkar Ek ka aajka count down.

Tina: Aur aaj ka countdown hain Bollywood ke couples ka.

Manoj: She is right… So here are the top 10 Bolly couples.

Tina: Aur number 1 par hain..

Manoj: Tumhe main aise hi tina dabba nahi keheta.. tumare bheje main kuch bhi nahi hain. Results tum kya ulte sunaugi?

Tina: Opps sorry!

Manoj: So here is the number 10 jodi of Bollywood – Salman and Katrina

https://youtube.com/watch?v=Z78MKOXx7lA

Tina: They are so cute!

Manoj: lekin salman mujh jaisa handsome nahi hain hain na?

Tina: Uff! So here is the number 9 jodi of Bollywood.- Kajol and Amir

https://youtube.com/watch?v=H0xxVrwaNSo

Manoj: I loved them together.

Tina: I know right.

Manoj: Top 8 bolly couples are: Preity and Abhishek

https://youtube.com/watch?v=Mwt1xhcF9f0

Manoj: where's the party tonight?!!

Tina: jyada gala phado maat, tumhare dost gadhe aajayenge

Manoj: You!! Ladies, I will b back after a short break! We will be right back.

https://youtube.com/watch?v=IIcRD_YAAv4

Tina: Welcome Gentlemen and Gentlemen (looking sideways @ Manoj)

Manoj: Mera jadoo chal gaya

Tina: so here we are with our # 7 bolly couple: Hrithik and Aish

https://youtube.com/watch?v=a2wmIVJx4A4

Manoj: Oh boy! Aish looks really hot.

Tina: But Hrithik looks hotter than Aish.

Manoj: Our next couple is Shahid and Amrita.

https://youtube.com/watch?v=D_Rz1NTheU4

Tina: Manoj, don't you think Shahid and Amrita are match made in heaven.

Manoj: Peheli baar tumne aakal madhi ki baat kahi hai!

Tina: Tumna..! Guys, we will be back after a short break. Don't go away!

https://youtube.com/watch?v=L6JAPKJTl2k

Tina: Welcome back to the show. Toh Manoj hum kaha the.

Manoj: Main toh amrita ke dil main tha.

Tina: baas bhi karo manoj.

Manoj: kuch jalne ke boo aarahihe.

Tina: kabhie naahate nahi ho na isiliye!

Manoj: Basanti..! So here is our next couple: Shahrukh and Kajol

https://youtube.com/watch?v=Jm1r7iUVhuI

Tina: Kajol aur Srk toh mere all time fav. Couple hain

Manoj: Really?

Tina: Yes, So here is our next couple: John and Vidya

https://youtube.com/watch?v=wFcPOaEOTbY

Manoj: Our next couple is: Rani and Shahrukh

Tina: Take a look!

https://youtube.com/watch?v=uNegMJ6xSSQ

Manoj: Our number two jodi is: Rani and Abhishek

https://youtube.com/watch?v=vAHWeyaxFk0

Tina: Its time for us to leave.

Manoj: But we will be back next week. Same place same time.

Tina: But before signing out, here is our #1 bolly jodi:Aish and Abhishek

https://youtube.com/watch?v=vHjdnJhpcjM

And the show ends!

Edited by indianhomey1992 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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congratulations both of you 😛 😛
both of your entries were awesome 😉 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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congrats jenny di! 👏 👏 👏
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congrats guys....im sure ur entries were awesum 👏 👏 👏




-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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congrats jennny and isha!
I bet both of your entries must have been awesome! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ohh, I was also goign to ask, if we use some of your dailouges in d show, you won't mind, right? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indianhomey1992

Ohh, I was also goign to ask, if we use some of your dailouges in d show, you won't mind, right? 😉

sure.. go ahead.. we will be more than happy.. kyun jen di? 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooooohohoo...congoo jennnyy sis 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rachni,
we got our titles! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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congo to my lovely sweethrts...isha and jen 👏 👏 👏

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