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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maaneet are getting engaged
Is this is going to happen or not????
Waiting for next part
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oh no yeh rahul aur gadbad karne wala hai.. fab hun.. cont soon..
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Superb update. 😃What a confusion Maan and Geet both don't know that to whom they r going to engaged.😆
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Awesome maaneet ko jaldi milwa do
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Part 10


Here at the main door of Handa Villa, Avantika was about to enter when Mr. Handa saw her and came to the gate to welcome them.

Mr Handa : please come in... aap bahr kyu khade hai...? ghar dhundhne me pareshani toh nahi hui..?

Avantika : ji nahi bilkul bhi nahi... driver seemed to know it.😊

Mr Handa : are... Maan bte kaha hai..?

Avantika turned to look for Maan but didn't find him..

Avantika : abhi yahi toh tha.. kaha gaya..? (she murmured)

Mai dekhti hu... koi call aa gaya hoga... (she said smiling)

Mr. Handa : ji...😊

Avantika comes out to look for Maan, n finds him on phone... and gets angry..

Avantika : Maan..! what's this..? aaj bhi tumse ye phone nahi chhut raha.. it will be better if I get u married to ur phone or lappy...

Maan : 😕 mom aap bhi na.. it was an important call... chaliye abb its over...!

But Avantika snatches his cell...

Avantika : you are not getting this back until we are back home.


Maan : 😒

And both move to door... where Mr. Handa is standing with Rano, ready to welcome groom and his family...!

Avantika was looking towards the door, as they reached towards it... while her hand which held Maan's dearest phone stole his all attention, he was continuously staring at his mobile like ordering it to leave his mother's hand and jump to his hand..

When suddenly a voice reached his ears which was enough to show him stars in the bright daylight.

Mr. Handa : Avantika ji... aiiye... hope aapko itni jaldi taiiyariyan karne me zyada problem nahi hui... thank you very much for accepting our request of holding engagement today.

Maan looked up to find Mr. Handa welcoming him and his mom...

Maan (st) : but why?? What for..? forget that what is he doing here..? more importantly why is he behaving like the girl's father..?

He kept staring at him without blinking, Avantika was continuously nudging him to touch the feet of his to-be father-in-law... but Maan was all lost...

Avantika shook him out of his trance..

Maan : huh..! yes mom.

Avantika : Maan...! This is Mr. Handa.. your F-I-L, and this is Ranoji, your M-I-L.

Beta pair chhuo / touch his feet (she murmured)

Maan bent down to touch his feet, hell confused with the happenings.. while his heart was beating so fast like he is running some marathon.

Mr. Handa : jeete raho beta...!😊

But Maan was still bending... and all gave him a confused look and Avantika nudged him again, but this time secretely, and he moved to touch Rano's feet, and finally stood straight.

Mr. Handa (faked a cough to gain attention) : chaliye ander chaliye / pls move inside.

All moved inside...


Maan was all lost, so many questions, confusions in his mind...

Maan (st) : what is all this...? Am I getting engaged to GEET... as far as I know she doesn't have a sister or something... and Mr. Handa was also saying he agrees.. but I rejected the proposal.. did mom come to know of me loving Geet..?

Ahhh..! what the hell actually happened..!!!!!!


Mr. Handa was continuously looking at Maan, trying to read his expressions, and finally decided to help the poor thing... ooopsss..! his to-be S-I-L, he smiled.


Mr. Handa : Avantikaji.. kya hum Maan bte se akele me baat karr sakte hai..? kal bhi hum nahi mil paaye thhe... only if you don't mind.

Avantika : ji zaroor... abb to ye aap hi ka beta hai.. aur Geet meri beti.


Mr. Handa was very happy to hear that. He signaled Maan to follow him to room.. which he obliged...

Maan (st) : finally seems to end my misery... or...


But his heart was beating faster this time.. all ready to come out.

They reached the room, both entered in and Mr. Handa closed the door so that no-one overhears them.


Both were waiting for the other one to initiate the conversation, for Maan, it was shock over-powering all his senses.. while for Mr. Handa things changed a lot after their last conversation, he was finding it difficult to start the conversation, actually couldn't decide on his words and tone, as they are at the first step of a new delicate relationship.

Finally Mr. Handa decided to start of as Maan was all lost...


Mr. Handa (faked a cough) : Maan bte...!

Maan (st) : yeh Mr. Handa... Ooops...! I mean sasurji, ki tabiyat toh thik hai na..? or am I dreaming...? "young man" se seedha "Maan beta"...???

Mr. Handa : MAAN (he spoke loudly to break his trance)

Maan : huh...! Haan... ji... Ji sir... no sir... I mean uncle.. no...umm

It broke Maan's trance badly and he started fumbling badly...

Mr. Handa smiled at the man, how different he was, he thought, considering his confidence that day when he came to him with proposal, and his nervousness today, when he's in such a point of time hoping, praying for one word which can give him the relief of having his love back after loosing all hopes and surrendering to fate for his mother's happiness.

Mr. Handa : relax beta... take a breath or two first.


Maan relaxed a bit and finally believed that this is true.. and waited with abated breath for him to open the mystry of his life finally...!


Mr. Handa : I know you are very amused and confused with all the happenings around... specially after our last conversation...

But before we proceed to the ceremony... I want to clear things off, between you and me atleast.


I'v no issue with you loving Geet, and this alliance, and that's why I got things fixed, BUT I can never approve of a love marriage in my family, so I approached your mother through broker and got things fixed, for my satisfaction, as I feel this as the right way... hope you do not have a problem with that.


Maan nodded in a no. he was flabbergasted with sasurji's logics...!!

Maan (st) : ye sabb kya hai..???? WTH...!!! I mean dulha wahi, dulhan bhi wahi... but it is not supposed to be a LOVE MARRIAGE...!! And that gives him a satisfaction...!!!!! Making me go through hell for whole of a day and night gives him satisfaction...!!!!!

Mr. Handa continued...

Mr. Handa : well you must be thinking what is all this... and about our conversation when I said I agree to your proposal...

Maan nodded again.. still busy in cursing sasurji..

Mr. Handa : hmm... well that was a small test by a father, I wanted to see whom you choose..? your mother's commitment or your love.

Maan (st) : What...!!! Small test...!!! He calls that as a SMALLL test...!!God help me...!!😡

Mr. Handa : and I'm glad you have passed it with distinction. Now I can proudly give my daughter to you.

Maan (st) : hitler sasurji😳

Mr. Handa : so... shall we move..?

Maan finally decided to open his mouth..

Maan : I have a question..! why engagement in soo much hurry..???😕

Mr. Handa : umm... for that...! Well I would say it was a part of test only... if I delayed that, you would have found out about all this and all my arrangements would go to drain. (he chuckled slightly)😆😆

Maan just wanted to bang his head on the wall...!!

Maan (st) : what goes in the mind of this man...?? Uff... hitler is the right word for him..!!!

My only relief is my love.

Geet... And many emotions hit him...

He didn't know what to do at this moment...

Thank his mom a million times.. .

or thank god..

or be proud at his luck..

or just dance around like mad...!!


He was finally getting engaged to his love, his Geet..!! after soo much of intezaar.. and TESTS..!!!


Though hitler sasurji will be sitting on his head all the time... but everything for Geet...!!


Mr. Handa found Maan lost in day-dreams... but decided to break it brutally this time...

Mr. Handa : shall we move now... (he said a bit loudly this tym)

Maan's trance broke, he was really startled, but hid his expressions well, and he nodded.


Both proceed towards door of room, when they reached the door...

Mr. Handa : and yess... you can call me papaji

At this Maan finally smiled at sasurji... oopss..! papaji.

Both reached the hall where the ceremony was supposed to be held and Mr. Handa took leave from Maan, and went to check on some last minute preperations.

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While the other side, Rahul was coming out of Geet's room all in thinking mode...

Though there's no doubt that Maan is the best match for Geet or any other girl for that matter... but the problem is this alliance is a compromise for him... and the heart of a brother always wants best for his sister..

He still remembered when he met Geet and Yash years back.. and they fulfilled the only void in his life of siblings... though initially it was difficult with Mr. Handa and his over-protectiveness... but he managed to convince him..

It was when Rahul was around 13, Geet was around 6-7 and Yash 4 year old, when Handa's shifted here as their neighbours.

One day Rahul saw Geet and Yash playing in the garden of their society... and he decided to join them... but Mr. Handa spotted them and asked Rahul to be away from Geet.

After that also Rahul tried many times, but didn't succeed.. he had an instant like towards them being the only child of his parents, needing some-one to play... and started to find solution to it..

Finally it was raksha-bandhan... an idea clicked him.

He asked his mom to give him one rakhi and ran to Handa house... he rang the bell... in over-excitement he kept ringing the bell till someone opened the door... he kept rakhi in his one hand and that hand at his back... finally the door opened and it was none other than Mr. Handa himself.

Mr. Handa : what do you want..?

Rahul : Uncle can I meet Geet please..?

Mr. Handa : why...?

Rahul brought out his hand which held rakhi from behind, showed him the rakhi, and said innocently..

Rahul : Uncle I want her to tie this to me.. I don't have any sister na... will you let her..? I will go after that.. promise...!

Mr. Handa was stun at the demand of little boy... more than his demand, his innocent request took his heart away... he kept mum, couldn't utter a word.

But Rahul was getting impatient, also he thought uncle may refuse, his face fell down..

Rahul : uncle plz... plsplsplsplspls...!

This broke Mr.Handa's thoughts and he allowed him in.

Rahul ran inside immediately, not wasting a second.

Mr Handa shook his head at his excitement, he also felt bad for not letting them play together before... sometimes children behave more maturely than elders, while elders judge people and things with their experience, children sometimes manage to outrun them with their pure heart and innocence.

Rahul rushed in and found Geet tying rakhi to Yash and Rano helping her,
3 of them saw him n got confused...


Mr Handa followed in shortly and said to Geet..

Mr Handa : Geet beta... see this is ur elder bro first tie rakhi to him than to Yash.

All smiled and Geet got really excited with the elder bro thing...
she ran with her thali to Rahul.

She tied rakhi in his hand... then took another and tied that too...
and kept on tying rakhi's to him till her count reached 6.

all got confused with this...

Rano : Geet... beta why 6 rakhi's..?


Geet : mumma this is for all the years when i couldn't tie rakhi to bhaiiya..


All smiled at her innocent action and answer.. and Rahul was way too happy to have a sister..

And ever since their bond just deepened with every passing day.

Mr Handa saw Rahul and got really happy to see him.

Mr. Handa : Rahul... When did u return beta..?

His voice broke Rahul's trance and he saw her uncle and decided to confront him knowing his view on all before talking to maaan again about all, but as Geet's bro this time...!

Rahul : huh...! Yes uncle.. I returned yesterday... but ye mai kya dekh raha hu... Aapne Geet ka rishta fix kar diya.. and engagment in soo hurry.. upon that mujhe kisi ne kuchh kaha bhi nahi...?

Mr. Handa : I'm really sorry son... sabb kuchh bahut jaldi me hua.. chalo tumhe dulhe se milwata hu..

Rahul : wahi toh mai bhi puchh raha hu...ki itni jaldi bhi kya hai...? And no need... of any meeting or introduction.

Mr. Handa : I will tell u everything... for now let things be the way they are... for Geet, if not for me... come and meet him.. he's a nice guy..

Rahul : arre nahi uncle...

But before he could tell him about his friendship with Maan, someone called Mr. Handa to have a final look at arrangements.. and he left saying..

Mr. Handa : will talk to you after the rituals get over.


Rahul nodded and moved to Maan, he wall hell frustrated with all the happenings around and felt like pulling his hairs... he felt like... all are in their own world... be it Maan, or Geet, or Avantika aunti, aur handa uncle...!



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Rahul reached to Maan, and found his mood all different!! He was no more in devdas mode.. but seemed really happy, and his expressions as if he was mentally dancing..!!

And this confused him more..!!

Rahul (st) : ye sabb ho kya raha hai..???? abb iss Maan ko kya hua..?? uncle is also busy..! and I cannot even stop this now...!!! What to do...???


And he was about to nudge Maan, talk to him, so that something going on here makes a bit of sense..!!

But before that Mr. Handa took the mike and started addressing the gathering...!


Mr. Handa : Ladies and gentlemen... its time for the ceremony for which we have gathered here.


And everybody including Maan and Rahul turned their attention to him.

Mr. Handa : its finally the enagement day of my daughter Geet with this young man standing there... Maan Singh Khurrana (and he pointed towards Maan)


All looked at Maan for a moment with appreciation in their eyes and turned back to him.

Mr. Handa : I request you all to bless the couple and enjoy the ceremony. Thank you.


With that he moved to Maan, all the Handa's too came there, and Rahul and Avantika too...


Mr. Handa : Yash, Rahul...! Beta go and get Geet from the room, it is ritual that brothers escort the girl for the ceremony.


And that confused Maan...


Maan : why Rahul then...????


Then suddenly felt embaressed with the way it came out...


Mr. Handa : Rahul is Geet's rakhi-bro..


Mr. Handa enlightened Maan, which was a bigg shock to him again...!!


Maan (st) : WHATT...!!! 😲😲Ye kya babaji... ye kaisa saala diya 😒 sasurji kya kam hitler hai...??

Abb isko btaya ki Geet is the one I love toh bhi mujhe maar daalega..

Aur nahi bataya toh bhi..!!!!!😲

Precap : drama has just started...😆😆

And #3 teaser 😉

Next will be up tomorrow if I'm able to type... else on monday

Edited by p_OO_ja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear cont soon waiting to see what Rahul do to stop
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haila hilter ne tho sach mein kitna drama play kiya😆😆dekho maan ko kitna pareshaan kiya aur patha nahi aagay aagay kya kya karega yeh hilter sasurji.
ek baat tho acha hua ki he wholeheartedly accepted maan. ab yeh rahul ka chakkar aagaya maan ke saamne😆😆😆poor maan ab kitne logon ko jhelna padega geet keliye. sab tho dushman banthe jaarahe hai 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
confused rahul
bechara maan lolzzz🤣
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Wow, double updates.👏 Both superb. Mr. Handa is super smart😆😆 Poor Maan had to suffer so much because of his sasurji😆 Now waiting to see Geet's reaction on finding Maan as her dulha😉

Loved the updates.Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update😊
waiting for next update

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