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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It was good os. I loved Vivaan and Dhara scene. That was cute so Vivaan is also one of heir of Preet. Great idea and concept. 👏 Do write more and thanks a lot to share. 🤗

Edited by beautiful_heart - 11 years ago

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

Nahi the english was too good..I was just lil confuse of the concept!😆 And it was totally NOT horrible coz i loved it to core!❤️

you just scared me for secs 😆

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Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Its so beautiful n cute Os.. u wrote very well 👏
Preet n mahi.. 🤢
Wow vivaan n dhara.. Aww how adorabe 😃
'Tumhe lage, ye mujhe lagne ke barabar hua' heyy i love this line. ⭐️ vidha kissed
Preet was vivaan mom.. Hww that was socking 😲 keep writeing more 😊 😳

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Rimpi_kmh
Its so beautiful n cute Os.. u wrote very well 👏
Preet n mahi.. 🤢
Wow vivaan n dhara.. Aww how adorabe 😃
'Tumhe lage, ye mujhe lagne ke barabar hua' heyy i love this line. ⭐️ vidha kissed
Preet was vivaan mom.. Hww that was socking 😲 keep writeing more 😊 😳

Thank you so much dear .!! 😳