Chahat11's AnSh FF Agar Tum Na Hote T#3 Completed!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello readers,

I present to you the 3rd Thread of my AnSh FF Agar Tum Na Hote. I would like to thank all those who have visited and commented on my thread.

A special Thanks goes to HemaG, Jyothi_cool, and devi117 the three spammers without whom this would not have been possible.

I really hope new readers would develop interest and visit the thread and also read my FF. Anyways I will be updating to the Old Golden readers who have been with my FF till this moment.

Thanking all of you especially Thank you so much to the 3 of you.

Chahat.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teaser for Chapter 16

"Mumma ke liye breakfast? Mumma ko butter laga rahe ho? Papa aapne kya gadbad ki?" Saumyaa asked Shiv with her hands at her waist. "Koi gadbad nahi ki meri dadi amma. I am making breakfast for mumma because I love her."


Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Teaser 2 Part 16 (Demanded by Hema, Jyothi and Dharani)

"Papa please! We are your good baccha na? Aap humaare liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte? Please papa please papa please papa." Soumya and Saumyaa both nagged him to do as they wished. Shiv knew that there were dangers in doing so but he had to give in to his children's demand. He did as they asked him to do. Mahi and Shiv's friends Abhishekh and Lal too encouraged him to do what the kids wanted.

Anandi entered the house and caught Shiv doing something she had never expected from him. She was shocked and had tears in her eyes. Shiv saw her and he was scared of her reaction. He tried to explain. He ran after her "Anandi! Anandi suno na!" Anandi went to the room and slammed the door shut on his face. "Gayi bhains pani mein." Shiv was really furious with his children, his friends and his cousin. "You tow Abhi and Lal niklo mere ghar se! Tum dono maine kaha tha na problem ho jaayegi! Aur Mahi tut u sab jaanta hai phir bhi tujhe humesha inn sab ka side dena hota hai. Ab problem toh meri life mein hui na!"

"Papa aap mujhe aur deedu ko scolding mat karo. All your fault. Humne aapko bola to do it but aap sune hi nahi so much time waste kiya no no no no no no karne mein!" Soumya scolded Shiv. "Aur nahi toh kya if you would have started when we asked you to toh meri mumma ko kuch pata nahi chalta. Dekho aapne unko hurt kiya!" Saumyaa too scolded Shiv. Abhi and Lal left and so did Mahi. The children sat there looking at their papa. Shiv buried his face in his palms. The children came to him and patted him on the shoulder, "Don't worry all will be well! Bye wo humaara cartoon time ho gaya nahi toh we would help you."

At the evening tea Soumya saw that Anandi looked freshly bathed. "Mumma aap nai nai kiya?" "Haan Soumya you know na mumma bahar se aakar nai nai karti hai." Anandi smiled at her children and gave them their milk. "Water se nai nai kiya?" "Soumya nai nai pani se hota hai." Anandi was confused and amused by Soumya line of questioning. "Haw! Papa aap mumma ko bhains bole!" Shiv spat the tea and everyone else controlled their laughter as they knew that now Shiv ki band baji. "Soumya maine aisa kuch nahi kaha." "Papa aapne hi toh bola na gayi bhains pani mein when mumma room mein jakar door band kiya and you too know mumma bahar se aakar nai nai karne jaati hain." Soumya said innocently. "Anandi Saachi mucchi maine aisa kuch nahi kaha." Shiv felt like crying as his children landed him in further trouble with Anandi.

Anandi looked at him with hurt and disbelief.
Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations on the new thread now update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot

Update kal midnight

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congos on the new thread! Waiting for the update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

congratulations on the new thread now update

Thank you so much

Would not have been possible without you hema n dharani

Update kal midnight for sure

kindly check the previous thread na There is something I have posted

I don't know it makes sense or is it correct


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Congos on the new thread! Waiting for the update 😳

bas 23 hours 55 minutes ka wait more 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Abe Google apko ullu banadiya

but thanks for the gesture

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