Th#7 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 21 to 24

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: treasure11
bhai behen 🥱

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Res

Unres.. (Chapter 24)

This was such an emotional update!!! 😭

but trust me, one of my favorites too!! 😳👏

you have written this chapter beautifully! 👏

hated Vishal here!! he is really a loser! 👎🏼

and the way Zoya expressed everything to Asad was Superb!! her motions were portrayed too well!! 👏

and she is thinking of leaving him and going! 😭

but Asad miyan will surely get her... 😳

i have full faith in you! 😉😳😆

going to read the next now!!

i am all set to unres all my comments today! 😉😆

love you! 🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

very emotional update
u penned zoya's emotions so well...
i m so proud of zoya and respect her as a person who still cares for her sister and her father's reputation
she suffered so much but still she decided to struggle and make a carrer by her own skills
and no ,zoya is not a prostiute, she is a woman who fought with all the odds and became successful by her hard work
i loved asad as he didn't question zoya rather he understood her position and respected her

Edited by cale - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Why did you updat3 at 3rd place on page?? 😲

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unres

update was just BANG ON,..👏👏
Amazingly written,..⭐️

So zoya heard everything,..
and Rule was broken unintentionally; undoubtedly! she thought this cox she was misunderstanding Asad's silence,..
she though that Asad aint trusting her,.. and has planned to go back to Berlin,..leaving Zoe behind,..
Aww mae silly grl,..

frstly she threw back all vishal's shit back on his face,..
Fab,.. sucha confident woman she is,..
though she is weak inside,.. fear of loosing her closed ones,.. make her weak,.
buh th shell outside her makes her stand... ALL strong,..

And now her reason of living in th drt is out,.. the pics thing,..
Stupid Mrs.Saxena,..😡
And Asad Mae Man,.. he never doubt her,.. he still trusts her,..
he was silent not cox he was doubting zoe,.. buh cox he was feeling more pain n love fah Zoe,..
i love this equation,..

Buh silly Zoya,..😡
what is this Last Time,,.Last Time,..
she must atleast give em a chance to justify,..

She is thinking that Asad broke th promise,.. buh i guess she is th one who is breaking promise,.. thinking of leaving em,..
i just wish asad punishes her...

WOW Update,..loved it,... Amazing!! ⭐️

Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

and guys cant you stop that quoting n replies for atleast frst 2 to 3 pages of update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: -Maliha-
and guys cant you stop that quoting n replies for atleast frst 2 to 3 pages of update...

exactly...i would have got the update page then 😆

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Maha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: BeYourself

exactly...i would have got the update page then 😆

aish n sonia😡

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: BeYourself

exactly...i would have got the update page then 😆

I was shocked to see that bubbli updated on 3rd post of the page 😕

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nahsjdnusksmsj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Such a sad update
I was literally crying reading this
U wrote it so beautifully and explained zoya's emotions amazingly
I don't have words to describe this chapter
I will just say it was worth waiting
Waiting for next update now

Edited by CrazyKSGlover - 11 years ago