Th#7 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 21 to 24

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Rice
Unrice!!
Uh alwayz succeed in making ur readers Speechless, don't uh??
nd now we have become habitual of it!!😆😆
the chapter was was really very emotional one!! Zoe's Anger nd pain was very much justified in this update!!! every singe thing about this chapter was Extraordinarily good!!👍🏼👍🏼
That Vishaal is such a jerk!! 😡😡how could he split out such filthy words for a women? Sick person!! I wish i could gift him a big punch right over his face!!😡😡
loved the fact that in all this while Zoya was giving him back to back replies that too so confidently!! proud of her attitude!!😳😳
I found her view to be right in every possible way!! whatever happend in was past was very dreadful to even think about it but her courage nd struggle to set up her already messed up life nd career once again in more strong way was very appreciable!!👏👏
good to see Asad calmly listening to what Zoe have to say!! He could clearly feel the pain that was killing Zoe from inside!! most Understanding lad he is!!😳😳
nd now Zoe decied to end everything!! well I'm not surprised at all!! just hoping that all goes well as the time move on!! 😃😃

nywayz the update was incredibly awesome as usual!! brilliantly penned!!
can't wait to read it further!! update quick!!!😛😛

P.S If i am asked to keep my view then i don't think Prostitute is a Word that is sufficiently good to describe Zoya's character!! Not At All!! if anyone feels just opposite of it then also I respect it because opinions differs from person to person!! 😊😊

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

😲😲
Stalking Ka Phal Meetha hota Hai!!😆😆

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Ummm...I just changed my mind coz it is mindblowing update and I can not stop myself😆

First of all HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN SHREEYA 😳

Oh my am loving zoya more and more!!!What a women she is 👏Left right chapeed marrr di Vishal k muhh parrr !!!but but but...ku Vishal ko villian banaya 😭🥺

I loved that she fought for herself 👏Vo bilkul bhi bechari nahi hai👏

She is Loving Caring Mardani 😉women !!!😆

And when she started telling her story ...Zoya's emotions and her hesitancy was very well written 👏I was soo engrossed in reading ...read it again and again and there u and maha and maliha ankie were shouting at me 🤣...trust me I had not even read maha's comment then 😆

Okiee I got diverted ...ohh so her pics were taken

My poor girl was in such a dilema kaha jayee.kise batayee,a 17 year old girl didnt even have a shoulder to cry on and she was being forced and people called her prostitue 😡😭

She carried on not for her own self but for her sisters 😭What did she get in return ...all money went to that saxena bitch only 😡

And yes she stopped doing it when things were in her control 😳

Plzzz Plzzz make Asad break everyone's 🤬!!!!!!

I loved this part a lot lot lot...I dunno what to say about it but smaz ja .it was full of emotions and I dunno how to express how I feel about it !!😆

"I know you are not a prostitute and neither is your mother. Whatever you did was right at your place but the problem is that this wasn't the right place for you." He tried to assure her with his fingers running in her soft hair while she stopped struggling anymore. "People like Vishaal are just jealous of your success. He is a loser so he wants you to lose too. You know you are right so stay with it instead of letting haters spoil your life." He continued while she listened quietly. It wasn't anything new, she had spent half her life with the same morals but listening it from him was assuring her that she wasn't wrong ever. "Sometimes ignorance is the best slap on the faces of those who don't deserve a proper answer !"

"Let me go !" She said calmly this time just to show him that she was still angry on him. "You can go back to Germany. To your own normal world."

"Relax ! I am not going anywhere. We can talk about everything later. Just stop hurting yourself." He told her as he hugged her tightly, letting go her arms and she didn't know how but her hands moved up on their own accord and got wrapped around his neck. She buried her head in the crook of his neck and allowed herself to cry silently. He didn't mind it at all. He wanted her to let go all her pain if it was possible. She had never shared her feelings with anyone, not even Nisha as she couldn't see her guilty anymore.

Tears never stopped as she was finally having a shoulder to cry over for the first time. She knew she wasn't going to continue this relationship after whatever Vishaal pointed out but if this was their last meeting then she was ready to give in. She hugged him as tight as possible, ignoring her mind for some time. She didn't know how to let go her feelings which were yelling at her, calling this pair a 'mismatch' !

So she will end it and ASAD will punish her 😲😳😆

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

My Bubbbaaa😳🤗
What An Update👏👍🏼
Those who called zoya prostitute 👎🏼 it's very easy to give stereotypical names of society..🤢
a woman who goes through such circumstances truely has noone..
A woman who sacrificed her self respect to save her family's honor😭 she even thought of her step sisters n mother
a woman blackmailed by that gruesome Mrs.saxena for her sick motives😡
but Zoya Farooqui came out strong👏 n i love Nisha now for being there for her
I love Asad for understanding her and for loving her even more despite whatever was her dark past😭❤️
the way she blasted that sick vishaal😡🤢👏
"Sometimes ignorance is the best slap on the faces of those who don't deserve a proper answer !"👏
Finally, she broke down in his arms with so many reasons to cry over and the one hurting her the most was that this was the last time she was seeing him. He was trying his best to stay strong when she kept on crying as he knew his tears will disturb her more. She had never cried this much ever in her life but she was today just because all this was going to end now. She is the one going to end it !😲😭💔
but wait no she broke the promise😉 Asads punishment☺️
super dooper AWESOME update👏
aapke haathon mein jaadu😛
Love u like family and an elder sister which i never had😳🤗❤️
Happy Birthday Shreyaaa🥳
thanxx for encouraging bubba to write a beautiful story😉

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago