Darkest Dreams - KR Four shot | Finished - pg7

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There are some things Ii would like to say before you people start reading.

This work particularly belongs to Shanaya, here's your installment girl, and Apologies for the delay! :* <3

Shenz di as usual, for listening it all out, furnishing it, and never proofreading it. Anku on the other hand, never delaying, not even a moment to proofread, and doing it super early, despite of my bewdapanti and chapar-chapar! also, she deserves the credits for pushing me to post this :P Tu bahut accha ha! ^_^

Khyati, for lending me her self, and talking to me. The male character of this story is certainly derived from you yourself, so yes, you deserve the credits, also for never scraping me. I'm clearly not sending you a single scrap until you yourself come up to me and start a conversation. -___-

That's it. Thankyou for the time. Enjoy. and please let me know your views

He sipped his coffee once again, his luggage was placed next to him while he was looking out for his friend who should have been here half an hour ago, he shook his head, no wonder, back in school his girlfriends used to call up Reyaansh in order to ask where he was. He was always late.

He turned back in order to get himself another latte, he was damn sure that he would have to wait for another forty five minutes, only then will hi best friend realize that he had been waiting on the airport since so long.

The air conditioner blew constant freezing waves, and even though it was hot, he was finding himself to be slightly cold. But it was something else that caught his attention.

She.

She was draped in a yellow kurta that hugged her curves closely, her legs were clothed in green, and she carried a green dupatta which seemed to constantly fall from her shoulders and she managed to put it up over and over again, her hair were wavy and scattered around her shoulders, while her lips were thin and light pink in colour, her eyes were large and dark pools of chocolate. The phone was glued to her ears and she was surrounded by five fat bags, all red in colour.

Her lips were down, frowning, and she had large earnings in her ears which made a little tinkling noise as she moved from one place to another.

Soon enough, she ended the call, and tried picking up her bags along with managing her dupatta, which seemed to go out of place everytime she bent. And even before she could straighten herself he found himself making his way towards her, "May I help you?" he said.

She looked up at him, her dark eyes boring into his, her eyes were round, almond shaped, and she had a light sprinkling of freckle on her nose, her face was angled, and before he could observe her further, she looked somewhere else, straightening herself and speaking in her little voice, "Thank you but-"

Before she could continue, she found his strong arms picking up her bags, his fingers brushed against hers as he picked up the heavy weight. "Let me handle that" he said, his voice was calm and patient.

Kriya could not help but nod, she shivered at the touch of her fingers against hers, her eyes merely danced on his physique, loving the way his muscles flexed as he picked up another one of her bags, he was wearing a black tee-shirt paired with a stone washed grey jeans, his jawline was strong and his eyes were black, his nose was not sharp but it matched his broad physique and face. His lips were thin and right beside it was a little hint of beard.

She looked away, but could not help notice him time to time. "Where would you want me to place these?"

She pointed towards the gate, as the words seemed to be stuck in her throat. Gently, he placed the bags down on the floor, then straightening himself he said "Here"

"Thank you so much" he stared at her, as a hint of smile approached her lips.

"You're welcome" he said "How are you going to take them from here?"

"I think my parents might be arriving any time now" she said

He nodded, then offering her a little smile which sure was genuine. He stood next to her, wondering what he was supposed to say.

"You" she started off, feeling the need to ask "How are you going from here? Is someone picking you up?"

"My friend, he will be coming in sometime, I guess" he said "I'm-I'm Reyaansh by the way"

He pulled out his hand for a shake, but it was nearly the time, when he saw an elderly man and another well built person moving out from the car, their face looked hard sculptured, as though it had been made by some of the hard metal. He suspected they were her father and brother.

"I think I'd better leave" she said, her eyes stuck on the two of them.

He gave his head a harness shake, pulling back his rejected hand.

"Thank you Reyaansh" she was now looking at him, her big bold eyes, boring into his face, as though creating a hole "for everything"

"You're welcome" he hushed, and for a moment his eyes met hers. and her eyes looked rigid, scared, afraid that something might happen. It was that moment when he wanted to assure her that everything will be fine, and that he would be there for her, but then she looked away, back at the two men, who were now pacing towards her.

"You sure you okay?" he asked

She gave a brief nod.

"I think I'll go sit near my stuff" he was waiting, waiting for her to look back at him once again. just once. She nodded. her eyes still fixed at the two men, and a ghost of smile was visible on her face.

He walked away, his mind flittering over to her, he turned various times as if to check, if she were looking at him, but the results were disappointing, because all her attention was now drifted to her mobile.

After getting himself another Latte, he turned back to look at her, but all that he could see was her curvaceous figure that moved away from him. and it was a little voice inside him that asked him to stop her, but maybe it was too late. He could already see her yellow attire blurring in the view.

He sat down, almost disappointed. But what was he expecting anyways? That she might look back and wink him and ask him to follow her? the way girls at New York did? It was pretty obvious that Indian girls were always taught not to catch a glance at boys, and her family encountering her talking to him might invite her some problems. But that's how Indian parents were, conservative. And they believed that people who gave children some freedom were child monsters. That's the mentality which continued to go on.

Also, he was pretty oblivious to the fact, that girls did not like males like him, the ones who were a little shy and tended not to speak what into their heads. Though he had been much of an extrovert while helping her and making a conversation, he never did that with most of the crowd-especially with females, he was about to finish his current latte and get himself another one when suddenly Anurag emerged.

"Five cups of Coffee. You're giving me back all my money, that was wasted because of you" He said getting up from his seat.

"You can never really improve" Anurag muttered, embracing him into a brotherly hug.

"Breakfast?" Anurag then asked.

"Dude, its past twelve. Don't tell me you just woke up" He said, a slight hint of shock audible in his voice.

Anurag muffled his hair then spoke, giving him a toothy grin. "You know why I'm late, don't you?"

Rey nodded his head, then spoke "What do I do with you?" he then continued "American last night?"

"Punjaban" Anurag winked.

"Seriously? You're telling me all about it dude" He slapped his arm playfully, as the two made their way to the car.

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Rey was constantly fumbling with words "I-er-sorta, met someone"

"Met someone? When did you start being so good with words?" Anurag said, concentrating on the traffic "British? American?"

"I guess she was Indian" Rey said, then continued "I met her this morning while you were late"

"Seriously? How was she? How long did it go?" Anurag asked giving a sheepish grin.

"I barely had a conversation with her" Rey replied

"Don't tell me that now you've seriously fallen in love at first sight with a girl" Anurag said

"I'm not saying that I love her or something, but its just that, she-there was something disappointing about it" Rey said

"Yes, sure as hell it was disappointing, since you just talked and nothing else. When you had forty five productive minutes" Anurag cracked.

"Not funny" Rey said "I mean, she looked happy and normal, but there was a certain sadness attached to everything she said or did. I mean, I wish I would have asked her about it"

"And she would have wrapped her arms around you and would have cried that Dr Octopus has been troubling her and that she wanted you to take her and fly with her to neverneverland" Anurag finished.

"Shut up sarcastic species" Rey shot him a glare "I wish I asked her once, she looked so disturbed, I mean, she acted fine, but there was a certain sadness in her eyes, as though she were afraid, scared that something might happen"

"Interesting Specimen" Anurag remarked.

"Shut up!!" Rey said "You can really never improve"

"You're saying that second time today" Anurag said

And the journey went on..

It was the night already and his thoughts were still haunted by her, her eyes, her hair, everything. She ruled the insides of his mind, the way her lips formed into a little smile, whenever he said something, the way she said "Reyaanshh..". The way her eyes bored into his, and the way she avoided looking at her, the way her little hands covered in bangles adjusted her dupatta as she bent, the way her lips curled down in a frown, the way her large earrings tinkled, and it was just everything about her that haunted him, reminded him of her, and everything, all of this, led him to believe that, there was something going on with her, without her will

He took his Ipod and his earplugs and stood up from the bed, he was just in his black vest and white Pyjamas, which he wore as a nightwear, he knew, that this was going to be a sleepless night, as it was already past one and he found no hint of sleep which drowned his eyes usually by this time.

Catching hold of his slippers, he walked out of Anurags place, where he was staying for another one month, he walked around the streets of Punjab, where he spent his childhood, playing with his best of friends, walking in the fields, the street was dark, just lit by a streetlamp, which casted a little amount of light, falling on the streets. He scanned the houses, walking out of his neighbourhood, he started walking towards some streets which he had no idea about, most of the houses were huge, and were covered in glass, which allowed you to see inside out. No doubt, Punjabis were so rich, almost each house owned a field which was irrigated, and earned them some good bucks.

His life in New York was so different, he used to party at Saturday nights like this, and was pretty used to it. But since he had been employed, there was no chance of him wandering like this so late, he often slept at past ten and woke up at seven in the morning.

He was just scanning another house when he saw something, or heard something, he heard more closely, there was a light music playing from one of the houses here, but which? He scanned all of the houses, and then it caught his eye.

She.


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So, that's all. I would like to tell you people, that I have the entire two shot ready with me and I would post it as soon as I get some reviews. So, its all upto you!

Make sure to type out your views and let me know in the comments below. I'd be grateful, trust me.

I hope you enjoyed the chapter. :)

Rashi xx

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
yay...me bahot zyada acha hu tuje kuch ni pata
unres ..
honestly mene ye nai padha...coz mene already ye 6 times padh liya mere pm dabbe me...
though i noticed the changes which i pointed out...tu or tera bad boy obsession..."sigh"
me mera pura cmnt edit kr dungi agar tune iska 3rd part ni rakha to...badtameez mene TS bola to isi ko divide kr diya...dhokha dhokha dhokha!!!!!
green nd yellow muje kuch yaad ata hai...wo pata ni kya...
this rey is so adorable...nd frightened kriya is cherry on cake in this particular os ...
umm...or kya likhu...
bye
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice two shots
love the title
amazing start
can't wait to see what happens next
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting os
N must say beautifully written
krias entry way she look te assesrry he were
Was amazingly describe
N rey to pahli nazar me hi kria se payaar ho gaya
Hayyy
Har wakhat basnusi ke baare me soch raha tha wo that was so sweet
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super amazing start
loving it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...

Awesome start..

loved it..

Amazingly written...

Waiting for their next meet..

continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved.

Actually reserving doesn't make much sense coz I'm already way too late but I'm gonna do it anyways! ;)

Unreserved.
Okay,so I feel so short of words to describe this one.
And believe me that rarely happens.Extremely rarely.

So yeah,coming to the point I just want to say I am touched that you created a character based upon me.
Its just amazing how well you know me.

The story.
Well,its all about the instant feeling of warmth one gets when they meet someone who is just right for them.The tingling in your veins when you know that you NEED to shed all your inhibitions and just have to connect with them.

I love this Rey.He is not perfect by any aspect.He has flaws,glaringly obvious ones.But that does not make him less determined to reach for what he desires.Shy and bold.Yeah,that's so me! ;)

Just an awesome piece of writing.

Love,
K
Edited by So_Naley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing story... continue soon n pm me :)!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A twoshot...

Wow Rashi...

It was ausome...the description...and all...

Their meet...

Kriya an all Indian...n Rey an all Newyork return...

Kriya was shy talkin to him...I guess scared by the thought that het parents wont like her talking to guys...happens in most Indian houses...

A Panjabi Love story...ausome...

I liked the way U described it...the choice of words...must say ausome...These words made it more interesting to read...

please...update soon...

Love Aditi...
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fantastic start👏
loveedd ittt😊
continue soonish😊

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