Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

flashback was so cute ritu!!!!!

is he going to propose her?

please do cont soon...

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zainab hassan

@zainabhassan1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

fabulous written love it dear 👏

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Beautiful update...
The FB part was really nice...
How could you stop at this point...???
Ok...please continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Nice Beautiful and Brilliant Update

Saakshi and Arjun making Cake for her mother was nice

Continue Soon

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Again magical and amazing update......take ur time becoz u always write so beautiful way just love ur way of writing ...🤗.arakshi and rainbow cake just wowww ...continue soon👍🏼

Thank youuu Nainaa🤗 That really really means a lot and thanks for understandinggg😳

Originally posted by: jia03
Beautiful update!
Loved the flashback & the way they were coloring the cake...

Thanks sooo much JIa😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Mujhe rainbow wala cake chahiye

See I m a very thoughtful friend.
Friendship week hai so no Axe wala smiley but a cutie pie wala hug
Cute hai na?I know. 😳Abhi mujhe wo kuch kuch hota hai wala sweet update chahiye & ofcourse Maai wala flashback bhi.I know I m greedy😆😆

hehehehe.. I was about to bake one and send this weekend but then got too lazy😛

Aww that hug is cute hehe🤗

LOL you are greedy😛😆 Will give you one of them and the other one...maybe in a later update😛

Thank youu for the comment Farheen urf GB😃

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi.
Loved it very much.
It was full of emotions just like a rainbow.
The flashback was wonderful.
Arjun's parents...
Grrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How can they be so ignorant about their own son!!
Loved Arjun's slip.
Now ahem ahem confession time.
Con soonzz...

Thank you sooo much Eashaaa🤗

hope you like that one😉

Originally posted by: kunchu
Cliffhanger ki jai ho!!!!
Love you for that Ritu
buhahahaha... I am so happy
Cake... mujhe cake chahiye.
banake parcel kardo
jaldi jaldi
Arjun's dad is khadoos it seems.
par at the end kya hua??
bechari GB ki haal dekho.
help her out Ritu...
continue soonish as I 'no' you are busy too

hahahaaa i cant stop laughing at the first line😆 and maybe another one coming up😉

of course of course..will send it to you three when i make it for sure😃😛

end ka you'll 'no' in the next updatee😉

thank youu for the comment🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Arjun Sakshi ke ghar aaya maai ke birthday celebrate karne ke liye

Arjun's dad is too khadoos yaar.

Arjun took Sakshi outside

He wanted to confess which Sakshi already knows

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks so much for the comment!😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun Sakshi ke ghar aaya maai ka birthday celebrate karne
Loved the Fb
it was too cute
choti Sakshi and Chota Arjun were too adorable
Arjun's dad 😡😡
Arjun going to confess to Sakshi
par usse to pehle si hi pata hai
it will be interesting to see hoe arjun confesses his feelings
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank youu Shravani🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
flashback was cute
waiting for next

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: shreya09
Amazing update Ritu 🤗
Maai's Birthday... The flashback scene... the effort taken by the school boy and his Titli was very very very sweet. ..very well written re 👍🏼
Arjun & his confession 😆
"I wanted to confess something that you probably already know." 😃
so another sweet part is coming 😃
waiting but you take your time. no hurry 👍🏼.

Thank youu Shreya🤗

hope you'll like the next part😳

Originally posted by: miss_precious
Really looking forward to the next update x

Hope you'll like it! Thanks so muchh😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun was knowing that Sakshi vll not sleep & Sakshi was knowing that he vll come...😃😃😃
Rainbow cake...mujhe bhi chahiye...😆😆😆
Classroom scene was 😆😆😆
Arjun-Sameer-Aisha...teeno ne Sakshi ko kaha tha baad mein baat kar lena but nahi usko daant khane ke baad hi samaj aata hai...🤣🤣🤣
That whole scene of cake making was 😆😆😆...
Maai was overwhelmed...😃😃😃

What a wrong point to stop???😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks soo much Snehaa🤗

awww koi naaa..main bake karke bhejti hoon naa😛

LOL..hope you'll like the next one😃

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Flashback was sooo cute loved little Arakshi making rainbow cake...
Arjun's parents didn't even care to know where was he for last six years...
Waiting for next part
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thank youu Nikita😳

Originally posted by: Rehana25
Oh no dear where did you stop
Anyway I am also waiting for that special update
Please don't take long and do update soon
This one indeed a nice one
I imagine two kids cover with flour icing and other related things but I feel cake was delicious hhhmmm after all kids make for their mum. Very nice one but wait for next
I want to know my guess is right or wrong
Waiting waiting

Thank youuu Rehana🤗

umm hope i didnt fall into my own trap lol.. hope the next update is what you imagined!

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
Nice update
Was Maai ka b'day nice flashback
Arjun was not with his parents for these7 yrs then how did he manage
Is Arjun going to propose sakshi at fort 😃
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Shefali!😳

um yes hehe😆😉

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Ritu update was soo beautiful

fb was sooo...

Aah can't find words to discribe

update soon

waiting

Aww thank youu Areesha🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: anu91
flashback was so cute ritu!!!!!
is he going to propose her?
please do cont soon...

Thanks sooo much anuuu..and yes he is😉

Originally posted by: zainabhassan1
fabulous written love it dear 👏

Thanks soo much!🤗

P.S - Great to see you back after so long!

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Beautiful update...
The FB part was really nice...
How could you stop at this point...???
Ok...please continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...

Thank youu so muchh Anjali🤗

hehehe am about to update😃

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
Beautiful update!
Loved the flashback

Thank youu Pari🤗

Originally posted by: yams.s
Nice Beautiful and Brilliant Update

Saakshi and Arjun making Cake for her mother was nice

Continue Soon

Thanks so much.. glad you liked it!🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Heylooo🤗

It's it's confession timee and so the filmy me has risen again! 😃 Ab main khud ka kya karoon😆 Ok, I have tried to make it as less filmy and cheesy as possible, but I know I have failed.😆 But still, I hope you like it😉

Before I begin, a small note - the location has been hugely inspired from the location of the song "Tu hi re" from Bombay. So if you want to have a look at the location and you haven't watched the video then go ahead😃

Um, yeah that's all.😆

(I know it's a weird chapter name..but it was the best one I could think of🤪)

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Yeah had to bring in a little twist to spice up the story a lil😉😆

Hope you enjoyed this chapter! And I hope that the wait for this was worth it.. leave your comments pretty please😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago