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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






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Character Sketch


Maan singh Khurana... 25yrs old.

A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 5yrs

back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very disciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and Canada * lives life on his terms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his college-mate.


Geet Handa... 23yrs old .

A very beautiful , simple, sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents in her teen age yrs back ,, graduate in comrs ,, eager to get high edu .

Smt. Savitri Devi Khurana... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.

LateYash and Raashi Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents , Yash and Ritu's friends.

Daarji ... Head of Handa family ,, Surpanch of d village , very strict .

Pammi and Rajinder Handa.. Geet' tayaji/tayiji .

Brij , titto and Rajji ... Geet's cousins (her uncle or Tayaji's children).

Dev... Maan's younger brother

Nayantara...Dev's wife


Pari... Maan's love interest.


* Arjun Singh Rathod (Geet's Sr)..


* Arjun's Dadi...
* Annie (Geet's Sr)..



Some more characters according to flow of story ...











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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.



Part - 59



Geet came in her room nd changed ,, Maan was coming late , he informed Dadima about his meeting ,, she went to help Nakul nd then all did their dinner quietly ,, Dadima told Geet about Maan's call ,, it was a peaceful dinner in presence of NT ,, she was quiet today ,, Geet nd Dadima was exchanging looks ,, after dinner Geet helped Nakul securing work nd instructed for BF , came to give Dadima her meds then left to her room ,, her sem exams wr close , she entered in her stydy nd started her work as usual , 1st finished insti work nd than opened her books for study ,, felt an urge to have a coffee to refresh her nd went to kitchen ,, she prepared coffee nd remembered Maan , he was not back nd it was above 10 pm though Dadima informed about his meeting but she became lil worried for him ,, came back in her niche , settled in d chair near d window , looked around outside in d open terrace nd starry sky ,, her mind was running towards Maan nd then she started thinking about her talks with A&A sipping her hot coffee.

She was feeling light after telling d truth to A&A ,, she was living with a burden hiding d reality of Maan nd her from them ,, a small lie cd harm d beautiful relations ,, d fear of their reaction nd accusations of hiding d fact was over nd now they wr besides her to support her ,, not only Dadima but A&A had a big hand to increase her lost confidence nd trusted her capabilities ,, gave chance to grab her lost dream ,, today she cd say her a successful girl , independent nd confident nd it was all bcoz of Dadima nd A&A * she remembered Arjuns words .. Go with d flow ,,, nd be happy .

She recalled nd annualized that she lived in her house with her blood relatives but they never gave any heed to fulfil her dreams ,, they didn't allow her to speak nd they never asked about her wishes but after coming in KM she got everything for which a girl cd dream , Dadima geve her all freedom nd support ,, she trust her nd love her even Maan never stopped her nd opposed , though her relation with Maan failed but he didn't interfere in her life , she was living a free life ,, it was true that if she lost something then she find something too ,,, if Dadima nd Maan tried to stop her like Darji nd Brij then what wd be her life ,, Geet felt a shiver in her body nd mumbled ... No , that cd be very tough ,, i'm happy what i'm getting now , so what if he refused me , he was helpless with his heart ,, A&A love each other , if they cn't thing about separation then how cd he nd his GF ,, she remembered Annie's reactions .

Geet inwardly: Maan ke liye essa hi tough raha hoga , wo bhi to majboor tha , kya galat hei agar wo apne pyaar ke liye wafadaar hei to ,, mai ku usse galat kahun ? wo apni jagah majboor hei aur mai apni jagah ,, mai ku bhool gai ...

Never dream of a perfect person to love, it is an illusion . In this life, we have to settle with someone . Someone not prefect, but real .

ho sakta hei uska koi reason ho jo Maan humare rishty ko sabke samne nahi lana chahta ho , wo kya sochta hei apni life ke bare mei mujhe kya pata ,, mai ku kio hope karun ,, jo hei jaisa hei chalne do , agar usse koi prob nahi to mujhe ku ho ? peechle kuch dino se wo normal behave ker raha hei ,, kisi odd situation mei na pade eske liye sabke samne baat hi kerne laga hei to esme bura kya hei ,, mere liye bhi accha hi hei ,, lekin uski aankon mei kya hei jo mujhe kamjor banata hei , ku dekhta hei wo mujhe esse ? Geet was lost in her thoughts when heard her name from behind nd she turned.

Geet

Aap ,, ap kab aaye ?

Maan: bas abhi , soi nahi , it's late , 11 pm.

Geet: aap bhi to ghar se bahar thy ab tak ,, Dadima se mile kya ?

Maan: hum ,, unhi ke paas se a raha hu.

Geet: kuch loge ?

Maan: nahi , thanks , dinner late liya .

She only gave a faint smile to him which soothed his tired mind nd filled his eyes with brightness.

Maan: busy in study , disturb kiya kya maine ?

Geet: nahi , I was enjoying my coffee , but have to study , exams r near .

Maan: OK ,,, Geet TM afternoon i'm going to Lonavala ,, NT nd Dev r here I hope u'll manage d things .

Geet tried to get his words nd then nodded in a yes .

Geet: don't worry , meri wajha se aapki family mei kabhi koi prob nahi hogi .

Her words aapki family pinched him ,, he nodded his head with heavy heart nd went back to his room ,, changed nd went to sleep ,, there is a long way to go with out any hope , she was talking that was enough .

He slept thinking over their life ,, now his days started nd ended with her thoughts ,, a glimpse if her smile nd few words wr enough for him to make his day ,, he was surprised that how nd when he had changed .

Next day her phone was ringing in her bag nd she was chatting with Dadima in d patio .. Gr8 ,,, after few min Nakul came out nd handed Geet handset of land line phone saying ,, Arjun sir ka phone hei .

Geet: Oh!! Thanku Nakul bahiya ,, hello Arjun .

Aj: hello ki bacchii , where is ur mobile?

Geet: wo ,, wo to room mei hoga , bag mei ,, ku ?

Aj: tera mai kya karu ? mobile sath rakhne ke liye hota hei room mei band kerne ke liye nahi ,, kabse try ker raha hu .

Geet: sorry ,, wo maine kaha tha na mujhe aadat nahi hei ,, annie di ne kaha bag mei rakho .

Aj: tu aur teri annie di ,, ab sun .. aaj koi appointment to nai hei tera ?

Geet: nahi , Dadima ko puchti hu ( she asked Dadima about any work for her nd she denied ) nahi koi kaam nahi hei , ku?

Aj: OK then ready ho aur KC aa jao meeting ke liye , mai bhi idhar se nikalta hu , aur phone pas rakhna , samjhi.

Geet sheepishly smiled: OK , mai aa janugi .

She checked d time nd informed Dadima that she had to go ,, she made her sure that she took her lunch on time ,, then she remembered something.

Geet: wo Dadima ,, Maan bhi bahar ja rahe hein afternoon mei ,, unka bhi lunch banwa du kya?

Dadima : haan , Maan ne bataya tha hume bhi , Ok nakul ko bol do , hum Maan ke sath hei lunch karenge aaj , unhe bol denge .

Geet: OK Dadima .

She left from there nd instructed Nakul to prepared lunch for Maan too,, she hurriedly make 2-3 things for him nd Nakul helped her ,, she left d kitchen lil satisfied after checking things ,, got ready nd then left for KC ,, she was relaxed today coz she didn't have any fear from Arjun side nd now d ball was in Maan's court ,, Aj called her in mid way nd asked where was she nd how much time she took to came there.


Precap --- Maan was back nd got a shock ...

G e e t where r u ..?

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🤗 hi ,, update essi per dungi..

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babie update dene gayi kya?

ya yahaan ho


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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

babie update dene gayi kya?

ya yahaan ho


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