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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.



Part - 65



Part - 66




Maan nd Geet came down in dinning area ,, Dadima was waiting for them ,, Maan sat near Dadima ns Geet serve them then took her seat opposite Maan , d food was really very tasty,, Dadima nd Geet made many things ,, Maan was praising everything nd enjoying lunch ,, Dadima was smiling , she knew him ,, he was a man of few words but for Geet he was going out of way to change her mind , but she was happy that he was caring Geet ...

After lunch Dadima went to take rest ordering servant to secure everything nd told Maan to take Geet in room for rest ,, Maan said that he was taking Geet to show d back side garden.

Both came in lobby nd then out side from d lobby door ,, it was a very beautiful small garden ,, with d sitting space ,, Geet was awed seeing that .

WOW!! , it's bful .

Maan: hai na ,, ye mom ka plan tha ,, unhone ready kerwaya tha yahin khade hoker .

Geet felt a heaviness in Maan's voice remembering his mom ,, she came close nd held his from arm .

Geet: u r lucky , u have many things to remember ur mom -dad,nd taking care of those things .

Maan: Geet jab tum nainital mei apna plan bata rahi thi to mujhe laga ki tumhari choice mom jaisi hei .

Geet gave a smile nd thought ,,, chalo ab to kaha ki plan accha tha , wahan to muh seel ker khade rahe.

Maan: kuch der baithna hei , ya chalen rest kerna hei .

Geet: eve tea ka program yahin rakhty hein , ku ?

Maan: fine , good idea ,, kuch special plan kiya hei kya ?

Geet: Dadima kaha rahi thi ki aap bahot dino ke baad yahan aaye ho to special bana dete hei visit ,, do u want anything special ?

Maan: haan ,, agar mai maagu to dogi ?

Geet: kya ?

Maan: tumhari dosti aur smile chahiye ,, milegi ?

Geet: dosti ku ?

Maan: mujhse to tum kuch share nahi kerti , at least dost se to karogi ,, Geet ( he held her hands ) bahot takleef di hei maine tumhe , maafi ke layak nahi lekin ab kuch khone ki bhi himmat mujh mei nahi hei ,,jo mere paas hei usse sambhal ker apne paas rakhna chahata hu ,, plzzz Geet , hamesha mere paas rahana .

Geet saw a venerable Maan who lost many happiness in his life nd from last nyt his behaviour was showing that she was very precious for him ,, his care was genuine nd now he was speaking by heart , she looked in his eyes nd find a layar of water ,, her heart melted nd she nodded in a yes giving him a dimpled smile ,, he instantly hugged her .

Maan: thanku so much Geet ,, u r an angel to me , thanku .

Geet: eska matlb ye nahi hei ki aapse naraaz nahi hu ,, mai bahot naraaz hu .

Maan: I know ,, I know , I deserve that ,, ab chalo kuch der rest karo .

Geet: mujhe kitchen garden bhi ghumna hei .

Maan: abhi nahi ,eve mei .

Maan held her close circling his arm around her shoulders nd came back ,, he show her few rooms in their way nd then came in his room .

Maan: Geet , songs sunogi ? ( he wanted to keep her mind busy )

Geet: nahi , aapko sunna hei to suno ,mai dusre room mei chali jati hu .

Maan: nahi ,, kahin jane ki jaroorat nahi hei ,, it's OK , maito tumhare liye pooch raha tha ,, sona hei ?

Geet : sona ,, aamm , nahi .

Her mind was again going that side but Maan was quick .

Maan: OK , yahan baito mere pass aur meri help karo ,, bahot kaam pending hei .

Geet: mai help karu ? Aapki ?

Maan: don't start ur Tana again nd help me , plzz .

Geet: aap trust kerenge ki maine jo kiya wo sahi hoga ?

Maan: haan , I'll trust u , now come n sit here.

He made her sit near him on sofa nd handed her a file nd told her to check all d amounts nd d total ,, there wr many scane copies of bills of diff things ,, He took another folder nd started his work ,, Geet looked at him for a min nd then opened d file ,, hr passed ,, she leaned back on sofa taking file in her hand n after few calculation her head hung side way ,, Maan looked at her , a smile crept on his lips ,, he too lean back close to her nd rested her head on his shoulder , he didn't want to disturbe her bcoz she didn't get proper sleep at nyt ,, soon he too doze off .

There sleep broke with d buzzing of intercom ,, Geet wake up with a jerk nd looke around ,, Maan got up nd pick d phone , Dadima was that side nd inform that Arjun called her ,, they r coming back from Nainital nd wanted to meet Geet ,, she called them here ,, it was good if Geet spent some time with her friends nd they wr worried for her .

Maan: no prob Dadima , mai Geet ko bata deta hu ,, kab tak a rahe hein ?

Dadima : with in hr aa jayenge .

Maan: OK ,

Both cut d call nd Maan told Geet that A&A r coming there to meet her ,, Dadima called them here , so prepare her special eve program for them too ,, Geet was surprised nd looking at him O .

Maan: ese matt dekho , so gai aur mera kaam bhi pura nahi kiya .

Geet: sorry , bas thoda sa rahata hei ,, pata nahi kab so gai ?

Maan made her sit nd knelt near her holding her hands in him .

Maan: don't feel bad nd no sorry , in fact mai bhi so gaya tha ,, tumhe jana hei to jao apne kaam ke liye mai ker lunga .

Geet: nahi bas 3-4 rahaty hei , jaldi se ker deti hu fir chali jaungi .

She started again nd hardly took half hr ,, she handed d file to Maan saying .. lo ho gaya , sab theek hei .

Maan: thanku so much .

Geet: Maan ek baat punchu .

Maan: haan , pucho .

Geet : aap har cheej khud check kerty ho , bills bhi ?

Maan: haan Geet , Dad ke baad bahot loss face kiya ,, kuch nahi aata tha ,, waqt laga aur mahant bhi lekin kerna pada ,, business mei sharp eye hona padta hei warna apne fayade ke liye dkoka dene wale bahot hotey hein.

Geet nodded nd realized that he faced losses nd tough time in his life ,, today he was successful coz of his hard work nd perfection ,, Geet excused nd went to kitchen to prepare for eve tea ,, A&A wr coming 1st time to meet her so she planned for a barbeque nd light party in d garden ,, She sent servant to near by mrkt to bring some required things nd started her arrangements .


Precap --- a small get together ...

A&A wr happy seeing some +ive signs... ..




Part - 67


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aapki puic copy karke aapko hello 😆😆
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon



aapki puic copy karke aapko hello 😆😆



😆😆 maine bhi yahi kiya...lo mjha...😆
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😳😳 btful pic

Hi dear..

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