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Srishti

@srstrulez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: MimiVruShan
BEAUTIFUL.. This.. I'm speechless... So well written.. Made me relive that scene.. Just beautiful.. I'm already a fan of your VMs and now I've become a fan of ur writing as well... Do write more :)

Thank you so much. :)

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@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful. Truly magnificent.
mind blowing. This was an amazing peice of work.
What writing and the way you described.
As a reader completely enjoyed it.
PM me your other works as well. (Including this)

Ps. Write more

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow Girl simply Wow! 👏
The way you have described the Scene is so Beautiful😳
Sharon's struggle to get back to the love of her life, Swayam just gave me goosebumps 😭
Sharon's Dance :')
The way you have used the lyrics of the song Permanent, actually suits SwaRon a lot actually in this scenes :)
Your writing is Elegant. The way you express yourself through emotions, the powerful words, the sentiments... Touches heart!😊
Magnificent :)
p.s.- Reading this after having read Friendzoned which is on its way!

Keep Writing!
Love,
Ayushi⭐️