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Posted: 11 years ago
waitinggg😃

oops sorry nisha dii😕...
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Originally posted by: gudmeet

Maan's struggle to fight his emotions, punching the bag , then shower and emerges Geet then again some more work out but still geet comes out

He was trying so hard to run away from that image of geet
Poor maan

Poor Kyu?😆
Who has asked him to run away. He can just accept his fate right and make it easier on the writer too😛😆
Miri the cute little angel and her bathroom adventure
I loved it so much
Mumma Miri Mumma Miri
a child trying to learn to do things independently , overcoming her fears just needs a little assurance a little support that yes someone is there
Her coming back from the door of the washroom when she did not hear her mamma's voice and on return her concern for her mumma if she is okay
that moment touched my heart dear Nisha
How simply you bring out such things
👏👏
As u had mentioned that this part was inspired by your sister calling out for your baba which made it so real and emotional
Though she has gone through a lot she is a well adjusted and curious child. And well adjusted kids generally want to test their limits and expand their horizons.
She is secure in the love of the people who surround her, especially Geet and so she letting her own nature take over😃
Maan was outside of geet's home
😲
geet ne to use sach mein deewana bana diya hai
geet and miri peeping out of the window and then Miri shouting sheru and waving at his direction was too good😆😆
Miri ne sheru ko pakad hi liya
😆
she is sooo cute n adorable 😳😳😳
and then comes our super embarrassed maan with his logical brain
I loved this spread sheet idea so much
his reasoning of his own crazy behaviour
how well he understands himself
👏👏👏👏
loved this whole idea of putting down the reasons and he was so very right with the order of incidents
That was such a brilliant move Nisha
Do u also do such kind of thing?
But I think if we are so able to put down all the facts so accurately then we can reach a solution or in the case of maan some conclusion

I definitely don't do it, but my husband and his excel sheet are like chaddi buddies. Ek doosre ka saath nahi chodte hai😆
loved it even more when his focus was little shifting but he brought his mind back again to the task at hand
That is called full concentration
well done dear Maan
I agree with his final conclusion but somewhere he did not accept the subtle conclusion of falling for geet
How much he wanted to see the same triumph in Dev's eyes?
The way u had described the picture of geet and her family and the emotions captured in the pic was really awesome dear
Your words had given life to that still photo
as if the still photo was in motion and each and everyone on the photo were speaking about their overjoy, geet's teary face the victory or triumph in her eyes and her smile everything was written so beautifully
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Brilliant writing
U know I think this should be the banner of this story
I just wonder how beautifully u thought abt the pic and then how wonderfully ur thought became alive with your words
amazing
the toppled wheel chair, her outstretched hands and Miri running towards her mumma
everything was so so so well thought of
and then how this pic helped maan for some realisation , that was brilliant Nisha

I do not want to put a face to that picture. I would never get it right. i would be limited with the Geet serial pics and am not sure I would even find what I am looking for . So I will let you guys weave your own imagination about the pic😉
Overall it was an awesome part.
Will Miri ask Maan abt his night out in their next meeting?
😆😆😉😉😉

Let's see about that shall we?😉
eagerly waiting for the next part Nisha


Thanks Gudmeet for such an awesome comment and thanks for being here🤗
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Originally posted by: mayyo

Seriously?! How in the world can he list something which provoked him emotionally just like that? 😆
I am so enjoying his plight right now, though it will still be some time before he comes to terms with the fact that he lost - his heart. 😃

Miri is such a cute girl. I wish I could cuddle her and pull her cheeks! Was laughing at her bathroom adventure. 😆

Loved it, Apa! Thanks for updating. And apologies for leaving this scrap of a comment after making you wait for ages.


@Blue
I was waiting to see if anybody would ask me that question
I should have expected that you would be the one to ask me that😆
More than the exercise, the crazy drive through the night and the most unlike him stalker mode, this act of his is what shows his real emotional state.
Good catch Mayyo👏
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Chapter 20: Hmm what can I say... at the start there was mild confusion,(Doc every time I come back to update after long breaks, even I suffer from bouts of extreme confusion🤣) I felt it was slightly off, might be cause I am reading back-back updates without a lot of time gap in between. So maybe I felt a lit out of sorts, as I felt there was block int he flow of the story... last chapter I guess there was already a glimpse to his ruminations about her which then got a turn with Miri, And the chapter started with again thoughts, so it took me time to process. But all in all it then picked up.

(yeah I was confused myself while writing that chapter. Something did not feel right to me, but could not pin point what exactly and that is why I stuck that note before the chapter. People on the forum are too sweet and will not tell you if you are going off track. I love their consideration, but that does not help the writer in me and so I am glad you pointed out that you were confused and what confused you. Its like an 'aha' moment for me.And so thanks a lot for this clear logic 😳
Loved how she intrigues him as well as frustrates him as each time he reaches a dead end with more and more questions piling up. Its like she's a mystery to him which he wants to unravel yet fearful what's it going to do to his defenses and his heart. He wants to reach the root of this fascinating woman but still is wary of it all. Very well symbolized by the way how he gets all happy seeing her concern and him becoming positive that she too is acutely aware of that undeniable bond between them which he too feels and is trying hard to resist the pull. 😳

I learn new things about my own story when I look at it through your eyes and it gives me building blocks for the future story.😃

Pari-Brij and their pyaar ki unkahi dastan 🤣 When oh when will they be all forth coming with it all. loved how Pari used newly learnt knowledge (even if it is from her "supposed" enemy 😆) to confess her love. The whole periodic table and the use you've made known here is is quite interesting 🤣
I love writing about them as a couple. 😆

Wonder what's cooking in Maan's brain now ... how is he going to use to his benefit, knowing that the person he is trying to use his business acumen on someone like Pari, who herself is a force to reckon with 😉

Miri ... hayee I so want to give her a 🤗 She just adds the extra frosting to the updates, she is indeed the seasoning of this whole story.

Thanks Doc for taking your time to give an comment on each chapter. That takes effort and it means a whole lot to me.🤗





Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 21: Woohoo!! A lot of interesting twists and turns.. And I guess a premonition of all the confrontations and revelations are int he waiting 😃

As I though Maan couldn't use his underhand ways to blackmail Pari.. after all woh bhi Pari Godbole hai 😆 But Yes what I felt very endearing was their sister-brother argument, they were assuming what would they do if they were related so... but then they were both behaving as true siblings (experience se bol rahi hu 😆) all the threats and what ifs were so similar to two siblings who are always ready to chop of the other's head yet when it comes to help the other in times of distress they do it without giving it a thought or doubt, the way Pari gave him a clue to his puzzle called "Geet" seeing him so at a loss and him wanting to guard his beloved brother.

These two are definite siblings in my mind. The fighting, the leg pulling, the getting pissed off as hell at each other, knowing exactly what ticks the other off and using that to your full advantage😆
However, at the end of all the fights you tend to surrender a little just coz it's your sibling. That is what I was trying to portray with these two

Pari gave him a hint ... Good but ye toh sochti ki kaise tede insaan ko hint de rahi hai 😆 She just made it a little more twisted ... But I guess this is going to lead to more interesting plots 😉

I like the conclusion you have drawn and how you have put that 😆

Patil 😡🤢 Now what's in store for Geet and Maan???

Agey agey dekhiye hota hai kya?
What seems the easiest answer may not always be so.
It's all smoke and mirrors😉
OK I will shut up now, before I am tempted to say more.😆

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Chapter 22: Wow it was one heart warming and feel good update 😃

Its after a long time that I felt so good after reading an update here on IF ... It made me feel like I'm having my Hot Chocolate sitting on my window sill, all cozy and very content (Avi will surely get what I mean to say)

Aww. Now this comment of yours gave me a warm feeling in the pit of my stomach.😳
I am really really glad knowing that I could bring such a feeling to you Doc.🤗

Just loved how it all synthesized and culminated into the last picture... that was such a great way of putting the pic together... I could actually visualize it 👏 Great writing Nishaji. The last pic's description with the below inscriptions and the emotions making up the image was beautiful 👏

Who wouldn't fall in love with the girl in there... Maan after all is mortal, and had to have his defenses bow down in front of this awesome woman who never gives up and is surrounded by the love of her family and has such a beautiful and loving daughter 😃

Glad you liked the pic and Maan scenario. This is one scene I had in my mind for the longest time.😳
It was one of the first scenes that had popped in my mind for when Maan actually realizes his feelings(well it's a whole different story that he goes into denial mode right after that😆)
Nishaji you do have a keen sense of relations and must say you know how to weave them all together into a loving binding tie for your readers 👏 You seem very Susegad and have a way with words and Humor but then You have quite a depth of relations and emotions which is reflected in the characters you make us fall in love with 😳
Issh!! Shuukriya Doc. I am humbled you'd feel that way😳

Thanks for writing this story 🤗 And being here on IF ... This story is just getting all the more interesting with the Mighty Maan finally becoming more humane ... what with hsi own acceptances and behaving like a unseen and unacknowledged brother to Pari 😆

Glad to have people like you here Doc. I'll always be thankful to the forum, for because of it I got to meet wonderful people like you🤗





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Chapter 23: 😃

I Love love love Miri ❤️ She is the best part about this FF (having said that... there are many more dimensions and lovable aspects of this FF) 😃

The whole Mama-Miri sound track was so tender and sweet ... loved it.

Maan has it bad... yet trying for self-preservation 😆 Sheru toh gaya kaam se.

Excel sheet -- really ?? Oh how are all his layers trying hard to safeguard something that is already completely smitten by a force called Geet Handa 😉

He feels he wants Dev to be like Geet in that pic... Victorious and then tries to reason all his emotions but then there are many victory stories and overcoming handicap testimonies which he must be aware of in so many years .. yet its just this one woman who makes him feel it all, speaks a lot about his feelings 😉

Loved it 👏
@ blue
Your twinnie said kind of a similar thing; as to how could he try to explain away his emotions with logic.😆
I will say the same thing that I said to her...that it shows how badly bitten by this Love bug😉

@ red

I couldn't have put that better Doc, you just said it all👏







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Ok guys. This update is about Geet and Pari, how they met and how Pari and Brij met. No Maan in this update, but I have been wanting to share the story of these three characters and their binding ties, since I first started this story and hope you guys will like it.😃

Not proof read. Will correct any errors tomorrow.😛


CHAPTER 24

It was 6:00 AM in the morning and Geet and Miri were fast asleep when she heard a knock on the door. It had taken Miri a long time to fall asleep after her adventure to the bathroom and her excitement, after her mistaken assumption that it was her Sheru in that car parked outside.

Geet mumbled for the person who was knocking to enter. She smelled the tea and she had a strange sense of deja vu. She knew the moment she opened her eyes Brij was going to be there, so she pressed her eyes closed harder and burrowed deeper into the covers.

"Geet...Geeet... Geet utho na. Dekho main tumhare liye adrak elaichi wali chai laya hoon."

"Maine chai pini chod di hai Brij bhaiyya. Aap jao yaha se. Mujhe sona hai." She whined.

"Geet meri baat toh suno."

"Nahi sunni hai, sona hai."

"Geet Miri ke kaano mein ungliya kyun daal rahi ho."

Geet was too sleepy to realize what she was doing. She removed her fingers from Miri's ears and put them in her own.

"Ab thik hain? Ab jao aap."

Brij slowly slid the covers off Geet's face and moved the tea cup right beneath her nose. Geet's nose twitched at the wonderful smell of tea. She was awake by now, but was determined not to be drawn into one of Brij's schemes. Last time he'd brought her tea, it had eventually ended up with her agreeing to go to the ball held by the Khurana's, with Pari and Brij and look where that had landed her...on the wrong side of that man. She felt a soft smile touch her lips as she thought yet again of how gently he'd carried her.

Geet kya bakwas soch rahi ho. She scolded herself mentally. Yes he had finally stopped being mad at her unreasonably, but that was all. There was nothing more to it. She sighed deeply, opened one bleary eye to look at the bedside watch and then looked at her brother all ready for work.

"Bhaiyaa, what are you doing getting ready for work at 6:00 in the morning?

"Woh I wanted to... mera matlab hain, woh Pari ko.. main usse uske police station chodna chahta hoon."He finished breathlessly.

Geet bit her lip to stop the grin that was involuntarily trying to split her face.

"Kyun?" She asked him casually instead. "Uski bike kharab ho gayi hain, ya phir transportation ka strike hain aaj? Aur agar aap usse chodna chahte hain toh mujhe kyu jagaya. Aap jayiye."

With that she covered her face with the bedcovers once again and let the smile that she'd been fighting all long, take over her face. She raised her fist in victory under the covers and composed her face, before Brij pull down the covers once again. This was the first time ever Brij was making a move on his own.

"Geet tum bhi chalo na saath mein. Aur kyu maat pucho. Baas tum chalo."

"Kyun?"

"Geet kaha na mat pucho."

"Toh phir main nahi aa rahi aap ke saath."

"Woh I have just realized that we don't know what kind of people Pari works with. Hume jaake ek baar dekh lena chahiye. Pata nahi uske saath kaise kasie log kaam karte honge. Hum jaake ek baar check kar lenge ki waha ka mahol kaisa hai."

"Bhaiyya Pari jaha pe rahegi waha ka mahol woh khud thik kar degi ya toh sidhi tarah se ya phir tedhi."

"Tum nahi samajhti ho Geet." He snapped in frustration.

"Kya karunga main agar usse kisi aur ne ...kisi aur ne..."

"Kisi aur ne kya bhaiyya?"

"Kisi aur ne pasand kiya toh." He whispered finally. "Main yeh hone nahi de sakta Geet. Woh toh meri hai na. Phir?"

Geet gave a small shriek and jumped out of bed. She was laughing in joy and hugged him tightly.

"Kitna wait karaya bhaiyya, hum sab ko. Waise, jis speed se aap ki train aagey badh rahi hain, I would not be surprised if somebody took her from right under your nose."

Brij turned chalk white at that statement of Geet's.

"Sach Geet, Pari kisi aur ko apna maan sakti hain kya? Kaal raat ko bhi jab main office se lauta woh ja chuki thi. Woh mujhse naraz hoke chali gayi thi kya? Par kyu? Aisa kya kiya maine Geet?"

Geet felt sorry for her brother on hearing him rambling in his anxiety and wanted to tell him that it was impossible for Pari to think about anybody else other than him. She had only seen Brij since she had first come to their house almost ten years ago.

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Pari and Geet had met in the ladies room of their school for the first time when they were both fifteen. Geet had just come out of one of the toilet stalls, when she had seen a short haired young boy standing there in his PT shorts and T- shirt. Geet had screamed her head off at seeing a boy in the girl's bathroom. The startled boy at looked at her, jumped on top of the sink counter, drawn his feet up and started screaming on his own.

"Where is it? Kaha hain cockroach. I hate cockroaches the most. No that may not be true, it might be my father I hate the most, but cockroaches are a very second close. Please, please kill it. Chutney bana do uski."

He looked terrified siting up there with his legs drawn up, eyes wildly searching the floor for the crawling bug.

Geet had been startled out of her own screaming abruptly, when the boy had started screaming himself and jumped up onto the counter. She grinned now, looking at him.

"Nahi hain cockroach."

"Phir tum chillayi kyun. Ladkiya toh sirf cockroaches ko dekh ke aisi chillati hain na?"

"Cockroaches se darte ho, par ladkiyon ke bathroom mein aane se nahi? Agar iss room mein koi cockroach hain toh woh tum ho." She had pointed at him.

The boy had looked at her with laughter in his eyes and jumped off the counter when he realized that she'd screamed because of him. Geet realized that the boy had large beautiful eyes, delicate features and a really feminine voice.

Her mouth formed and soundless O in sudden realization and she gasped out,

"Tum ladki ho, hai na?"

"Main ladki hoon, though I am usually mistaken for a boy." The other newly discovered girl spoke simultaneously.

Geet had grinned sheepishly and apologized at her mistaken assumption.

"Waise main Geet Handa hoon, aur tum?"

"Oh so you are the famous graffiti queen, Geet Handa?

Geet's face fell abruptly at that title. She went to the sink washed her hands and started walking away, then changed her mind, turned abruptly and spoke out.

"I hate it when people call me that. It is a really degrading title for a person. What can I do if hormone crazy boys scribble my name on the walls of the bathroom and school? The more I ignore them, the more my name is splashed on the walls."

"Sorry Geet. I did not mean to call you that as an insult. It was just like an aha moment.' You know, like solving a puzzle. I have always wondered who the beautiful Geet was, whose name I see scribbled in so many places and why she evoked such a reaction from the boys? I meant no offense at ll. I know how it feels to be labelled something you are not. I am a girl, but nobody sees me as one. God is also not helping me in that department. Look at you and look at my chestnuts." She first looked in envy at Geet's ample curves and then pointed to her own chest.

Geet looked at the girl in front of her in shock for a moment and then started shrieking with laughter.

"Yeah...yeah go ahead and laugh and why not? Your life is not dark like mine. You have two headlights guiding your way, while I am lost in a dark flat non-existent zone."

That set off Geet again. When she finally calmed down she asked the other girl.

"Why do you keep your hair so short then? That doesn't help your image you know?"

"Oh this? This is my rebellion against God. I have made a promise with him The day he blesses me with abundance, I will let my hair grow out." She declared, while running her hair through her short hair.

"My god look at me. I told you my deepest darkest secrets and haven't introduced myself. I am Parinda Godbole."

Geet was already excited at meeting this strange girl with a crazy sense of humor. Her excitement only accelerated at hearing Parinda's last name.

"Tu Maharashtrian aahes? Tula Marathi yete?"

(Are you Maharshtrian? Can you speak Marathi?")

"Tu Pan?" Pari pointed to her.

(You too?)

That had been the beginning of a wonderful life long friendship between the two girls. The first time Parinda had visited the Handa household, she had had a nasty bruise on her arm and a black eye that matched Geet's. They had both gotten it, after getting into a fight with a boy who had been harassing Geet for the previous two weeks. Though Geet had been ignoring him, Parinda had finally lost her patience when the boy had started threatening her, coz of her silent treatment. Parinda who had been following Geet quietly without her knowledge, on her way back from tuitions, had rushed up from behind, dragged the boy from his bike and started bashing him up. The boy had lashed out and punched Parinda in the face. Geet had gotten extremely mad then and started hitting him with her bag. He had retaliated by giving her a black eye that matched Parinda's and finally run away.

They had both gone to Geet's house and narrated the whole incident to Geet's parents.

Geet's mother had fussed over both of them equally. Parinda had stared in fascination at the woman who was applying a cold pack to her bruised eye and declared.

"Geet, I think I am in love with your mom."

Geet's mother had smiled lovingly and smoothed back the hair on her forehead.

"I am flattered to think that a young boy could fall in love with me even at this age. Suna aapne Mohinderji. Iska matlab hain, aap ki biwi aaj bhi khubsoorat hain."

It had been Brij's voice that had spoken the truth from behind.

"Aai kis nazariye se ladka lagti hain woh tumhe? Mujhe toh waha pe sirf do ladkiya dikh rahi hain. Woh bhi two foolish girls."

With that he had walked away abruptly.

Pari had looked at the departing back in shock and then started laughing hysterically.

"Mala chimta kadh Geet. Tyachya dolyat me mulgi aahe. Aaaj jya divshi mazha chehra neet disat pan nahi tarihi tyala mahit aahe ki mi mulgi aahe."

(Pinch me Geet. I am a girl in his eyes. Today, when my face is not even properly visible, he still knew I was a girl.)

Eventually they had learnt from a friend of Brij that he had beaten the boy up for daring to touch the two girls.

Parinda had spent the whole afternoon with the Handas and when it was time to go home, Brij had grabbed Geet's hand dragging her along telling her that they were both going to drop Parinda home.

All through the bus ride, Parinda's adoring eyes had clung to Brij while he had sneaked side way glances at her. Geet had laughed silently at the story that was taking place right before her eyes and been proud of her intuitive brother.

They had dropped Pari off outside her house and when she had gone inside, Brij had asked Geet

"Geet uska naam kya hai?

"Parinda hain bhaiyya."

"Pari." He nodded to himself. "Bilkul sahi naam hai. Bikul pari jaisi hai woh," he continued dreamily.

"Badi badi aankhe, laal hoth, chote chote kaan , bilkul nazook si..." His eyes widened abruptly when his eyes fell on Pari who had walked outside to remind Geet of something. He blushed furiously when he realized that he had blurted out his thoughts loudly and moreover they had been overheard by Pari.

"Chalo Geet hum chalte hai." He grabbed Geet's hand once again and started rushing off from there, when Pari's voice rang loud and clear from behind.

"Geet I think I am in love with your brother. Aur bhagwan ji se ki hui kasam cancel. Main aaj se apne baal badha rahi hoon"

That had been the beginning of a decade long cat and mouse game between Brij and his Pari.

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Geet now looked at the desperation in her brother's eyes and knew that Brij had needed a wake up call to shake him out of his reserve so that he could finally claim Pari. She wondered how and what had brought about this sudden insecurity in Brij. So she asked him directly why he was suddenly so worried about Pari and about losing her.

"Actually Geet mere boss ne mujhe aisi kuch baatien kahi jisse main soch mein pad gaya."

He gave her a short version of what Man had said to him.

Geet wanted to desperately thank Man Singh Khurana in that moment. She did not know why he had done, what he had, but she was extremely grateful to him and the next time she saw him, she was going to tell him that.

She asked Brij to wait for her, while she freshened up. She then asked her Baba to keep an eye on Miri and that she'd be back in time for their breakfast.

They both left the house after calling a startled Pari and letting her know that they were on the way to pick her up.

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thank god finally itne saalon ke baad brij ne apna muh kholdiya aur kaha pari sirf uska hai😆chalo kam se kam maan ki baatein sunnkar akal tho aagayi brij mein😆😆
past pari's introduction was really funny . geet ne pari ko ladka samjha and how pari explained about her angry towards babaji😆😆


wow pyaar pehli nazar mein hogayi hai brij aur pari ko par abhi bhi izhaar nahi karpaye yehdono aur specially brij😆😆
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hope your reserving game is over...now can we start them
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😆😆 geet puting ungli in miri's ears😆😆😆 lovvvd that scene...you always come up with very different ideas diii...😃
aww i love the brij geet scene there...Brij looked soo cute when he was trying to bribe her...and this rambling trait is there in their blood i guess...😆

wow lovvly love story of pari and brij...still eager to see how brij is goin to finally confess😆
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Hugs and kisses Nisha ...for updating this beautiful story...
Geet all sleepy after the late night adventures of Miri and Sheru ...Brij trying to wake her up with a cup of tea ...Geet thinks of the previous time he did the same thing ...the Khurana ball...meeting Maan...all that happened between them ...shying at the way he carried her so gently ...she finally wakes up to listen to the so in love Brij wanting to drop Pari at her work...so many doubts and questions in his mind ...he wanted her to come along so that they can check out the place ..to see if anyone else is eyeing his love ...finally he admitted his love and Geet so wanted to say...loved the past scenes and how Geet and Pari met ...Geet thought a boy was in the girls restroom and started screaming ...the said boy screaming thinking there was a cockroach ...Both realising their mistakes and laughing ...Geet was so beautiful boys used to graffiti the walls with her name and their love ...the next part was so real and girly...they shared so much in their first meeting...no comments on the chest and chestnuts part ...the things that u come up with ...head lights and dark flat non existent zone...i was laughing just like Geet ...Pari's pact with God that she will grow her hair when he blesses her with abundance ...awww poor girls both had black eyes fighting a romeo who was after Geet ...glad Brij gave him a good beating ...woww Brij corrected his Mom about Pari being a girl without seeing her face....them checking out each other while dropping her back home...looks like the cupid has struck on both sides ...Brij all in praises about Pari the angels beauty ...Pari overhearing it and deciding she found her true love ...coming back to the present Geet comes to know that Maan is the reason behind Brij's changed thinking and is all thankful to him ...now the brother and sister are going to drop pari at work...awesome update my dear ...already looking forward for the next... .

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Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 45~02.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

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Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

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