Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
Taareef aisey ki Aapne ke hum fidaa hogaye.. 😳 ⭐️ I feel like I'm the best reader ever Hehee...
I would say one of the best😉
And you praise my writing too much ..I just saw your comment on my comment on Web of Love lol ... I haven't reached there yet to reach the same stage as you and other writers..where dialogue writing and scene description is all in an effortless flow... I'm still on description on expressions and reflections of emotions .. Gaaddii abhii door chalna hai..
I know i would absolutely enjoy whatever you penned. For the longest time I had these ideas in my head that I kept on imagining, but did not put down on paper. I thought if I wrote them down I would eventually run out of ideas. Then one day I sat down And wrote the first chapter for this stoey. the more I wrote, the more freely the ideas flowed.
So I hope you will find your muse that will compel you to write 😳
Will definitely be waiting for that day😃
If my words make you strive towards better penmanship then I'm truly honoured! A small note of thank you is sometimes an enough inspiration to write a whole chapter but a small description of your own brilliance inspires u to do better then its a treat on my side for me !!
A small note of thank you, means a world of encouragement and inspiration to a writer. Nothing inspires me faster than genuine appreciation for my work😉
So thanks for all the beautiful word that you pour in on my work. It makes it worthwhile writing further😃
Your manifestion of real and fictional characters really does click so well with us and sits so well in the story that im well and truly heads over heels in love with your work ..so Fikar not ..my feelings won't sway any other way hehehe...
You are suggesting I write something for you !!! For your story ?! That's too much of gratitude for me to take in ... I won't be able to match up with your pace and carry on the baton to win the relay but for you some day I will write a small concoction of my imagination for your 'Binding Ties' ... Waada zarroor par.. Kasam Nahii 😳
Oh my!! Cant wait for that day😃
I will definitely hold you to that😉
Mamma Mirri .. Mamma Mirri... Anatakshari of the night !! And what a creative one too !! And the fact that its been taken from your real life makes it even better !! This lil big mouth Pixie can really stir up some trouble for her Sheru... I'm just sure that the trouble she will involve her Sheru and Mamma in will make those lists of logics bow down to the laws of gravity of unexplained Love...
I love how you have put that😆
It's fun jogging old memories. I have been talking to my mom and dad and asking them more about how we were during our childhood. In a way I am getting to know the younger me and my sister through Miri.😳
How long was the night Suse ?!! ( If I may call you that ..not sure how to pronounce your pseudonym 😳 )
Never mind the pseudonyms. Susegad is a konkani word for Siesta. I am from the State of Goa. You can call be by my name whicj=h is Nisha😉.
.. Itne ghante dishum dishum then Ho-haa waali haatha paayii aur phir bhi Raat khatm hi nahii hui 😆 ... White shirt...jeans ..disheveled hair and bechain ankhiyaan... Uff what a delightful sight he makes .. if only his bechaini ki wajah could see this from her balcony... I am not doing tareef of your Heroine ..kyunkii hero ne kuch kasar hi nahii chodi Hehee... That's all he saw behind his lids .. her transparent emotional and perfection personofied beauty...
On a side note ... What I wish to see... I will dwell on, on my next comment ... Yeh waala bhi much zyaada lamba hua jaa raaha hai ..
And to answer yoir previous question ... No translations are needed for me ..I'm well verses in the lingo .. but haan a confusion I had whilst reading this chapter .. please clarify : why does Mirri talk in Tum to her mum ... 😳 Woh samajh nahii aayaa ... I am only acquainted with Aap or Hum... Tum is rarely used,so not sure when ?!
That is how we spoke to our mom during our childhood. I think many kids call their moms tum. Aap is a term of respect, but it also has some reserve behind it. A mother is a person who is loved too much and without any reservations. You generally refer to a person who is of your age as tum, say siblings or a friend. A mother though not of your age feels like a sibling and a friend many a times. Basically there are no barriers where the mother is concerned. So the tum you call her is a whole reflection of the love and closeness you feel to her. She is the respected and loved more than anybody, yet she is a tum😳
I am sure I am making a jumbled mess out of this explanation, but I hope you get the gist of it😆
Waiting for another update as always
👏 Thank you for such a delightful read...and for being so unreservedly open, kind, receptive and exceptionally humble ... 👏
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