FF|| Raaz- The secret(Completed||)

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

i can't believe it.Sunny can be that cheap?hope kumud will believe saras.waiting 4 the night fest eagerly.thx a lot 4 adding pics.i love ffs with pics.it enhances our imagination.loved kumud wearing ghagra.Missing her ghagra in d show as well.Who was pramad's wife?is her ghost still roaming around?

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome update...
thnks 4 d pm..
continue soon...

Thanks😳

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
i can't believe it.Sunny can be that cheap?hope kumud will believe saras.waiting 4 the night fest eagerly.thx a lot 4 adding pics.i love ffs with pics.it enhances our imagination.loved kumud wearing ghagra.Missing her ghagra in d show as well.Who was pramad's wife?is her ghost still roaming around?

Hey Jasmine,🤗

I like pics too.😊

About the ghost, you'll have to wait for the upcoming parts to know.😆

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

plz write a 3 shots or something on saraswati n chandra with pics

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
plz write a 3 shots or something on saraswati n chandra with pics

Jasmine, i'll try but there is no guarantee that I'll be able to upload soon. My holidays will be over next week and I'll be busy. I'll be working on it soon and I'll see what it gives.

Thanks for suggesting me your ideas.😳

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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Sersh

@Gul.S_Ef

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

loved the update, really looking fwd to the next part.U're really good Jess 👏

n as we have no FF writer abt Samud, tou u're our only hope 😆 so plz continue this. 😊

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef

loved the update, really looking fwd to the next part.U're really good Jess 👏

n as we have no FF writer abt Samud, tou u're our only hope 😆 so plz continue this. 😊

Thanks😳

I know there are not too many writers out here. Will continue 4 sure and hoping to get more readers.

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NIKITA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

started reading

good work dear 😃😳

keep writing 😉

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Part 4:

"Bro! BRO!"
'Huh!"

"Where are you lost? he saw Saras's gaze on Kumud

"Oh so that's the matter."

"Shut up Danny!"

"Chill bro! I'll go and look at the beautiful girls over here." he winked at the group of girls that were looking at him and blushed as soon as he winked at them.

"Dan, this is not Mumbai, if you cross your limits, you'll have 5 - 6 wives and I'll have lets say, around 10-15 nephews or nieces."

Danny thought about his future and shouted,"NOOO!!!!!!!!!"

Saras started laughing and the girls who were looking at him were laughing at him. He felt like an idiot.

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Kumud and Anushka were with the ladies.

"Anu, this is so boring, there is no music nor drinks."

"Kumud, for god's sake, this is a village."
"Great!"

"By the way, is something going on between you and Saras."
"Please, don't take his name in front of me and if I told you what dirty things he told me last night, you'll feel like killing him."

"What happened?"

Kumud told her what happened.

"He's right."
"What???I can't believe that you are taking his side."

"Look, I'm your friend, I want what's best for you. Sunny was actually looking at you, I saw him, stay away from him."

"But I..." she could not find words.

"Saras can fight with you and all but he is good at heart and he cares for you. When you had fainted, Sunny had carried you but as soon as we reached the mansion, he dumped you in Saras's arms. Try to avoid Sunny, he had a bad reputation before you came. Stop misunderstanding Saras and give him a chance."

"Anu, we have come here for a purpose and let's concentrate on that only."

"As you wish."

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Saras was standing in an isolated corner later that night. Kumud seized that opportunity to talk to him.

The kamarbandh that was around her waist caught his attention.

"What are you doing here?" he asked angrily.

"Saras, I know that you are angry with me but I am sorry for what I said last night."

"Good for you." he was going to leave but she stopped him by holding his hand.

"What is your problem? It's the first time that I've apologized to someone."

"So, what do you want me to do? I'll publish in tomorrow's newspapers and tell all the news channel to broadcast that the great 'Kumud Desai' has said sorry to someone in her life, wow, that's news."

"Why are you showing so much attitude?"

"Oh so I'm showing attitude, last night you were a total angel." he said sarcastically

"You are so mean"

"Thanks for the compliment."

She was going to leave but she slipped and Saras caught her before she could hit the ground.