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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update...loved it...I have read the whole fiction in a one go...And It is fab...Amazing concept...
rehaan and kaia were cute...
the proposal was nice...😳
but I think she will reject him...
I think sh is hiding something from him...
love this...
different concept...
Love it whe you use the words like mashallah, jannat, Khuda hafiz, Allah hafiz,...etc...
I love to read this words...
Waiting for next update...
Thanx for pm...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: trishikarajput0

Awesome Update...loved it...I have read the whole fiction in a one go...And It is fab...Amazing concept...

rehaan and kaia were cute...
the proposal was nice...😳
but I think she will reject him...
I think sh is hiding something from him...
love this...
different concept...
Love it whe you use the words like mashallah, jannat, Khuda hafiz, Allah hafiz,...etc...
I love to read this words...
Waiting for next update...
Thanx for pm...
Continue soon...


Thank you so much for your kind words! It really means a lot.

Well I hope you like the next update too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you!
Sure, will update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey people!

I know sab soch rahe honge ki yeh itne time baad kyu aa rahi hai, isse accha toh aati hi nahi 😆

But fir bhi mai aa gayi pakaane
And don't worry update leke aayi hu

But give me five minutes,

Aur aapki garama-garam update hogi taiyaar!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

The update was awesome...

The hug and his mind talk..awww
The proposal was so sweet and cute
Update soon



Thank you!

Just updating in 5.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshafan94

Wow amazing story.
well written.
though it was confusing initially.
well it appears to be a rejection.
will be waiting for next update.


Keep waiting and guessing...until the next update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Monika-

Awesome update...

beautifully written..

loved it...

waiting for the next part..

update soon..



Thank you!

Just updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Chapter 4~

I stood with my head low, fumbling for words. I didn't even have the courage to stammer. I just started cursing myself in the back of my head for even thinking that she loved me. Leave loving me, she wouldn't even like me now. I had lost almost everything I had.

"Rehaan, why did you choose me?"

Her reply shocked me to the core. Her voice was choked and tears were streaming down her cheeks.

She continued after that, which put me in a rage.

"What khoobi do I have Rehaan, to become your begum?" she said, and broke down. But I was hell angry. My sukoon, my mohabbat, my malika was saying that she had no talent no special quality?

"Kaia!" I almost yelled. "How can you even say that? You ask for qualities? I'll list down some. You have the quality to make me smile, to make me cry. To make me love each and everything present around me. To make me know that jannat resides only here, if want it. And all I know is that you are my dil, ibaadat, jaan, everything. I just love you for what you are."

With that she threw her arms around me. tears of joy spilled through her eyes. She gently whispered in my ear, "I love you too jaan..." The same tears now spilled through my eyes.

And I knew, Jannat was right here, in my arms.

Zapping away from her memories, I realized that I had been sitting here for too long. A part of my bottoms was soaked with blood, and it was only then that I realized that its source was my wrist.

Ignoring that, I started observing the rock I had been sitting on. It was flat, a bit shiny, and a person could easily sit on it. Then reality struck me. It was the same rock I had set as a chair, and ahead it was the table.

But when my eyes went forward, I was numb.

It was Kaia, with tears flowing down her face uncontrollably.

Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know even you must be complaining at the length.

But i had too! You know to maintain the suspense...😉

A big thank you to all those who took out their precious time to read and update.

Lagta hai yeh series aisi pehli hogi joh 10 pages mai hi complete ho gayi 🤣

Still love you!

-Parigya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm luvd it update soon and long

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