Love of the Afghan Hills| KriYansh SS| Chapter Four- Pg 8| - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
i loved the starting.
well it is a bit different seeing Rey poor, but just love the chirpy Kria and their first meet.
want more.
Please update soon.
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
I don't seem to be getting a response, even after sending PM's and updating quick.

Looks like my concept isn't working right here.

I think i should discontinue...

Do share your views.

-Parigya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Awesome update...

lovely meet...

loved dis fun loving kriya..

loved it..

and this concept is really awesome...

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
dnt discontinue..

it is really nyc...

liked it...

pls update it soon..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Amazing start...

Loved the simple yet so serene meet of theirs😊

strange to see Rey in poverty...but that doesn't matter as long as his heart's in right hands😉

Waiting to see how their friendship proceeds...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Hey I am back!

Well I got an okay response by the previous update 😊

And so I am here with the sequel!

P.S. Do read the note below the update
Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


I saw her again the next day; she was sitting at the grassy side probably looking something, which I found myself answering in negative, as there was nothing worth seeing. So I went with the thought that she was deep in thought.


I fake coughed, so as to grab her attention. She looked towards me, gave me a blunt smile, and motioned me to sit next to her.


"You have never watched a movie, right?" I asked her.


"How do you know?!" She excitedly whispered.


"People rich enough to watch Bollywood don't live at a place like this"


"Hmmm, you got my lie!" She pouted and then winked back at me.


"But I need to know, how you knew that-"


"-that the hero and heroine shake hands when they befriend each other? I had a friend whose father was a sweeper at the cinema. He told me" She said, completing my incomplete thought.


"He was a he'??"


"Ya! Somebody burning??"


"I am not jealous"


"Okay-okay! I was joking!"


We then began talking. Seconds became minutes and minutes became hours. Soon I realized it was near to nightfall.


"You must go now. It's late." I ushered


"So what??"


"It is not safe for girls of your age to stay outside"


"How do you know my age?" she childishly demanded.


"You must be around my age, like 17-18 years..."


Suddenly she sprang up and came very close to my face. Leaning in she whispered in my ear.


"You cannot even imagine how old I am..."


I was taken aback. But was relieved when I heard her laugh.


"I was joking stupid!" she said between her giggles.


"And where the question of my safety lingers," she continued, "I know you will always be there to protect me."


Her face suddenly felt familiar. As if I knew her from ages. But I knew it was a myth that she seemed familiar, i had just met her yesterday, I thought as I looked at her. Her heavenly orbs gazing back at me suddenly felt too disgraceful to be called earthly. Well, it was disgraceful to call her earthly.


We kept staring at each other for hours. And then suddenly she broke our eye contact and began leaving.


"Hey!"


I took hold of her wrist in a swift motion and made her face me. Her eyes were stung with tears.

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Hola People!

I don't know if many of you know but the rural areas of Afghanistan are actually very poor. And only the affluent people can afford a luxury like movies. Seems strange to hear, isn't it??

And it is a sincere request to all those silent readers, please comment and review.

Without any of them I feel highly discouraged.

And a big thank you to all those people who commented. A big wala hug 🤗

Love,

Parigya

Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
i am read it now dare u do not discontinue it ... run to read it now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
ok so basic rehaan does not know this place very well... and as swift as her mother
did not want to stay with a drunkard... and had fallen sick does not like to stay in hositpal
thus escape and went out and there meet a girl and both became Friends...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Lovely update
Seems very intresting the way story is proceeding
Love it

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