Love of the Afghan Hills| KriYansh SS| Chapter Four- Pg 8| - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Pls pm me when u update nd who is rey nd kriya i didnt understand
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

ok so basic rehaan does not know this place very well... and as swift as her mother
did not want to stay with a drunkard... and had fallen sick does not like to stay in hositpal
thus escape and went out and there meet a girl and both became Friends...
do continue soon and pm me



well diya (I hope that is your name) it isn't that exactly. If you had read the hospital part closely you would have got it. But if you didn't, just comment it here 😊
Edited by parigyaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alex754

Nice update
Pls pm me when u update nd who is rey nd kriya i didnt understand



Well that is the actual mystery, isn't it? 😉

Stay tuned and you will see the past unravel, i promise 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

i am read it now dare u do not discontinue it ... run to read it now



Ok... *scared hides under the table*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow superb.
i loved the update.
i loved the way you portrayed their meet and talks.
it is sad to know how poor can't enjoy stuffs we do without even thinking.
i loved that you are writing on such an issue.
I am confused as to why there were tears in Kriya's eyes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am really sorry for not commenting on the previous update ... was caught up with a lot of work .. but I surely read it and loved it too ...
The title itself is so engrossing ^_^ it makes the reader hook up from the start ...
There is a lot of suspense in it n I want it to unveil soon
.. het dialogue "you cannot imagine how old I am wasn't a joke I guess :/
All n all a beautiful chappy Pari (I hope I can call you that)
Update soon-ish
And dont even think of discontinuing it ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update😊
Keep updating sooner
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyani.arsha

I am really sorry for not commenting on the previous update ... was caught up with a lot of work .. but I surely read it and loved it too ...

The title itself is so engrossing ^_^ it makes the reader hook up from the start ...

There is a lot of suspense in it n I want it to unveil soon
.. het dialogue "you cannot imagine how old I am wasn't a joke I guess :/
All n all a beautiful chappy Pari (I hope I can call you that)
Update soon-ish
And dont even think of discontinuing it ^_^



Thank you! ^_^
And yes you can call me pari..
My hardwork paid off!!! It took me a long time to search for a hooking title
I completely understand...work has to come first.
But I am glad you read the updates and liked them
Well about the dialogue keep guessing! 😛
And how can I think of discontinuing now, all the readers will run after me, all my khoon ke pyaase 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...

loved it...

loved their convo..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello... sorry for being late..
n coming to story its great...

the dialogues, narration, suspense... are soo perfectly described.

im loving it.. <3 <3 plz update soon... <3

n a bit longer plz

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