MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35 - Page 15

it made me cry sad ending of maaneet it was awesome story loved it

What nonsense is this???...Their whole struggle to change their fate is for nothing...I really hate this ending & it really depressed me...I kind a feel that one of my favt story has turned into a sadistic ending...Sorry if u r hurt with my comment , but can't help it...U always wanted honest comment , & I am giving u my honest comment...😡...

Wow great ending
I'm really going to miss reading this story of your so much

last part..i hate these word..bt happy for maaneet and their journey..wl miss fate

Note

kya bolu kal I get new experience my reader who always support me get angry with me but I like this anger and so many in this anger comment in detail to tale me this not good end they want other end specially who always comment in one or two word , so get big big comment which I always want from you all

fate is really closed to me it is story which give me so many new reader , and friend and three child with my basanti so I get so new member in my family of gf from ratna to priya di , so many

silent reader turn most active reader with this story like envi , she have so much problem in writing eng but she try it and she is successful , thanks envi and big hug and second one is basanti who become writer also can you belive it in this time I talk with all my reader try to heard their problem , try to communicate with them and all give love which make me always senti and my gang become complit with this story tanvi my buddy she is with me from long back , but mirror , uma , disha and my smjadar beti gunjar and chvvi they make this gang perfect , jado to muje tang karna inko acha lagta hai , always try to tease me and make me blush blush , but I love their teasing aisa lagta hai koi

hai jo mera hai sirf mera jo muje pe haq jamata hai aur main unpe

bahot jada ho raha hai na ok

last part I want to look your reaction on sad ending some give positive response some get angry (bhanu_rekhag, drashtimeetu , tabby999, shikha_guta25, gill123, love2_soma, _BlackPearl_sanghita0000 --Ratna-- aparna ) uf ismai se to drati and love ne comment hi nahi diye yaar jo hamesha comment dete hai itne rute gaye mahi se sorry dear

I am confused with end happy end du ya phir sad end , to socha mahi tuze jute padne wale hai pehale sad ending hi de ke dekh le and wahi hua just watch last 6 page comment

in all this my gang specially my devil and basanti , I expecting drama from them they accepted this end give me shockbut my CD cry so much in pm also look comment bhi nahi diya Disha sorry for make you cry apni mmmy ko maaf kar do

lakin my smjadar beti get my mind as usual look her comment on page 21 mera pura mind pad liya ho jaise usne thanks gunjar and big hug

so you will now going to hve epl 3 or 4 so enjoy

thanks and big hug from me to all

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please read note of upper side of update

EPL - 1

when she stop to sing veer and adi look to her she sit there with closed eyes and her back touching to wall veer took so much courage and just went near her and called di di and he put his hand on geet shoulder , geet body limp like lifeless , she just ... and veer wake with fear , all sweat he just say loudly di and adi who sleep beside him just wake up with veer sound , adi just switch on light button and ask veer kya hua veer , veer just hug adi and cried bro , bro , adi get veer get scared , he and naina have habit to called him bro when ever they get scare or emotional

adi ask- bura sapana dekha kya veer

veer bro wo di and maan bro ,and he just tale all to adi , yesterday after confession on pinky all just enjoy like crazy and include dadi and rano also both old lady just pray to god that they will took them alwys like this and after finishing dinner all went to their room , today pinky also stay in KM all are just happy

veer- bro please muje abhi maan bro aur di ko dekhana hai please ,ek bar sirf ek bar veer say with teary eyes

adi - look to watch it is more than 2 of night , adi say veer they are married , abhi jagana

veer - please kuch bhi karo just once please , some tear fall from veer eyes adi just hug and say ok main I called maan ok ,adi just called maan after some moment maan took called with worry and ask what happen adi , kuch hua kya adi just say veer condition maan say ok I will be there in 2 min ok

maan just look to geet after their passionate night poor girl now sleep before some time , her nude body tailing maan passion story , he cant control himself after his kiss in front of all he just want to eat her alive , maan control his thought and just wake up geet ,who cribeed , Babaji maan ko bolo na sone do , sb kuch aj hi karna hai kya aur kitani baar ...

maan just nodded in no and again called her , geet open her sleepy eyes and say what maan maan tale her veer dream , geet just wear her dress and both come in veer room , where , veer just sleep near adi he put his head on adi leg , tear failing from his eyes maan just run to him along with geet , maan just called him kya hua baccha and veer just hug maan tightly and sob loudly bro you and di you and di , words not coming from his mouth

geet took glass of water and went near veer and make him to drink that geet also sit near veer ...geet veer kuch bura nahi hoga hamare sath abhi , babaji itne bhi bure nahi hai veer , maan just cup veer face and kiss his forehead and say ha baccha kuch nahi hoga , hum sab sath hai na , fhir ku itna tense ho raha hai beta

but veer no wear to stop that dream just shake him like hell he just crying

maan - ok we all sleep on roof chalo adi called naina and pinky also

veer just hold maan hand who stand for go

maan - main tumare pass hi sounga promise now wash your face nahi to naina and pinky will tease you

veer - just say imm unko mat bolna and adi mummer lo jag gaya nautanki and slap on his head , and say chal roundu wash your face veer just went to wash room and adi went to called other

geet also try to went out but maan just hold her hand and pull her and she just land on maan chest , she just look to washroom and say maan veer

maaan - kya veer ye veer ne to mera plan flop kar diya yaar , aj to main tume aur kya kya sikhane wala tha geet geet just hit maan and say chi chi babaji kitana besharam pati diya hai

maan just come out from her hug and say besharam kya , ab dekho Msk kitana besharam hai and he went from there geet gulp hard and mummer babaji bach lena main Msk ko jaga diya kya

precap

Last night passion of maaneet geet lost in memory

on roof after dadi and rano went to room maan say now sit like couple

apne apne partner ke sath ok , maan mummer in geet ear Geet ab deko meri besharmi

next part may be till night