MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

well mahi devil u baching from ur reader warna

bhut gussa they

good one the way u potray it dream realy good woh update waste nahi howa

asa dream toh kisi ko bhi darai ga babaji

but love maaneet romance

waitng for next

u made always speech less muje samj nah ata mein kiya coment karo

last update mein rulaya abhi kushi k marey i am flying

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

humne socha bom futa lekin nikla sursuria kya mahi tune to humko rula hi diya?

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

uff

that was a dream veer had

rofl

such mein daradiya tumne

adi consoling veer n called maneet

all getting together in group.in roof

now what is maan upto

nautanki ki book hai ye maan

missing muski..

bring her into updates again pls

nice part

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

don't give shocks like this🤢. i thought they were really dead...

1st part of epilogue is nice...

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Ok..

so I turn it inyo dream n now back to romanc r. ..good...but what about pammi n maans father n dev...

dev is almost in a vegetable stage after maans torture so what's gonna happen to him...

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

After reading the last part of fate I had no courage to put a comment and all I wished was it to be a dream.. and thankfully you gave this epilogue!!

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Ufff I am really shocked😲 and thought that they were really dead...In this shock and angry I can't comment😡😉 You are really devil😡😆 don't do it again🤢

Well 1st epilogue is Amazing👏👏..thank God its Veer's dream😆 Loved Maaneet lovely moments😳 loved it so much...waiting for next update

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

loved it!!!!

it was all veer's dream thank god!!!!!

maaneet are still alive

last part mei toh aapne darra hi diya tha

love this update

eagerly waiting for the next part...

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

really shock

I thought you are going to end lke this

but acha laga ye dekhar ki

all are fine

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

omg kya u turn mara hai story ne😲😉😃thnks😛
superb epi👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
wonderful chnge in story n i appreciate tht u tak all the suggestions n smartly chnge the end
i m so happy
thnks once again
cont. soon

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