SWARON OS: YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL HEART

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Hey guys Iam here with an os hope you guys like it. This os is dedicated to my sweet anu di.. hey di this is for you.. do like and comment guys

SWARON OS: YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL HEART

Sharon was driving her way back home listening to the soft tunes of her and Swayams favorite song "pehla nasha"... she was missing her swayam it was difficult for her to live without him even for a second... specially after their engagement.. yes they were engaged just week back.. they used to be always together without any fear or hesitation there was no one to question them they knew very well they belonged to each other.. their parents, relatives and friends admired them and their bond with each other..

Sharon was remembering the day of their engagement and all the sweet memories of the day came to her mind she was soo lost in her thoughts that she dint see the truck coming her way... sharons car was crashed by the truck and the only scream that left sharons mouth was "swayam..."the blood was oozing out from her whole body the last thing she remembered admist of the pain and the murmeres of the people who have gathered there was swayams face and them she went unconscious...

The people admitted her to the nearby hospital and also informed her parents about it with the help of the number provided in her ID.. sharons parents were shocked and soon rushed to the hospital they knew its necessary to inform swayam but they dint have courage to inform him because they very well knew that he would be shattered.. so they informed rey and asked him to inform swayam and also come to the hospital as soon as possible...

Rey was hell tensed and also dint know how to tell the news of sharons accident to swayam...

rey entered swayams room..swayam was busy in seeing his lady love in the engagement pictures and admiring his Sharon. his trance was broke by the cling of the door he turned to see who was it and found his dearest friend standing near the door

swayam: tu wahan kyon khada hai? yahaan aa na.. dekh meri Sharon kithni khubsoorath lag rahi hai..

rey stood there rooted to the ground, he dint know what to say.. swayam felt something strange on reys behavior and moved towads him

swayam: kya hua rey tu itna tensed kyon lag raha hai?

Rey couldn't take it anymore he had to say swayam tear filled his eyes... and finally he spoke "swayam wo Sharon ka accident ho gaya hai.. aur use city hospital le gayen hain"

Swayams heart stopped beating hearing this... his world shattered in front of his eyes he couldn't take it.. tears made their way out from his eyes the only word he could utter was "Sharon..." and ran out of his room rushing towards his car he just wanted to see his Sharon.. his heart was not ready to accept that Sharon had an accident

Rey followed swayam he very well knew that swayam was not in the position to drive.. so he insisted and drove him to the hospital..

IN THE HOSPITAL

Sharon was taken to the OT.. sharons parents were completely shattered.. swayam rushed to them he had thousands of question revolving in his mind how is she? how did the accident happen?what did the doctor say? And many more.. before he would ask any of them

Sharons dad spoke up "her condition is critical" and couldn't say anything more and broke down crying hugging swayam tightly. Swayam went numb hearing this... he couldn't imagine a moment of his life without her she was his life the reason for his heart to beat.. reason for his each breath..

3hours had passed but no one came out from the OT everyone was tensed swayam was completely broken tears rolling continuously from his eyes and the fear of loosing his Sharon visible on his eyes

And finally doctor came out everyone rushed towards the doctor just to know that Sharon was going to be ok

Sharons dad: how is my daughter doctor

Dr: she is out of danger now.. she is a strong girl.. we need to keep her under observation for atleast 2 days and no one can meet her

Swayams just wanted to see her but doctor dint give the permission.. swayam just somehow convinced himself to stay away from sharon for her betterment

Two days had passed Sharon regained her conscious she was under soo much pain.. and body covered with bandages doctor came to do her check up Sharon wanted to know whats her condition doctor refused to say her anything but Sharon insisted him to say as she wanted to know whats happening to her

Sharon: please doctor tell me.. is there any problem?

If I would be like before?

Doctor: Sharon hum jaanthe hain ki tum bahuth brave ladki ho.. tum itna insist kar rahi ho sirf isiliye mein tumhe ye sab bathane jaa raha hoon jabki meine tumhare parents ko bhi is bare mein nahi bataya

Sharon: pleasr doctor tell me I want to know

Doctor: Sharon tum jaanthi ho tumhare accident bahoth buri tarah se hua hai aur saare body parts mein injury hui hai isiliye tumhe thoda waqth lag saktha hai poori tarah se recovery hone mein aur..

Aur Sharon jo tumhare face par accident waqth kuch scratches hue hain aur wo kabhi theek nahi ho sakthe

Sharon was numb to listen this.. her face which she loved a lot had marks now and it would never go off from her... sharons chain of thoughts broke by the doctors question

Doctor:Sharon tum theek ho? Actually tumhare ghar wale tumse milna chahthe hain humne unhe tumse milne nahi diya tho hum unhe bheje?

Sharons: ok doctor par mein sirf apne parents se milna chahthi hoon aur kisi se nahi

On the other hand swayam was in the hospital since he came dint even go home he just wanted to see Sharon..all were gathered nurse came out and told that now you people can see the patient swayam was soo happy and about to go inside when nurse told that "patient sirf apne mom dad se milna chahthi hain"

Swayams face fell listening to that he felt as if Sharon doesn't wanna meet him and tear filled his eyes

In the room

Sharons parents came in and sharons mom broke down crying

Sharon:mom mein theek hoon mujhe kuch nahi hua hai

Sharons mom:wo tho dikh hi raha hai aur ye tera face!!!

Sharons face fell and finally she spoke mom dad mein aapse kuch kehna chahthi hoon " ye marks mere chehre par se kabhi nahi jayenge mein wo khubsoorath ladki nahi rahi.. aur mein swayam ko deserve nahi karthi wo tho koi khubsoorath aur achi ladki deserve kartha hai meri tarah nahi jo adhi mar gayi ho.. mujme use ye sab kehne ki himmath nahi hai aur na hi mein use face kar paungi so please app log use keh dena ki wo zindagi mein age bade aur mujhe bhool jaye"(tears flowing from her eyes)

Sharons parents understood her and also promised to keep swayam away from her..

Here swayam was tensed and waiting to meet Sharon sharons parents came out from the room and swayam went to enter but now was stopped by sharons father saying "sharon tumse milna nahi chahthi aur wo sagai bhi todna chahthi hai"

Swayam couldn't believe his ears what he just heard...he just said consoling himself "nahi Sharon aisa nahi keh sakthi, wo mujse bohoth pyaar karthi hai baath kuch aur hain mein ek baar use mil letha hoon fir sab kuch theek ho jayaga"

But sharons parents dint allow him to meet her even their heart ached to say such a thing to swayam but they had to because they knew it was for the betterment of him

Like this 2 months passed

Swayam used to come to the hospital daily in the desire of meeting Sharon or just seeing a glance of her but couldn't. on the other hand Sharon has recovered completely she could feel swayams presence even she wanted to meet him see him feel warmth of his skin but she had to control her feelings

Finally she was shifted to her home it was more than 2 months since she saw swayam she used to receive his calls messages but she never answered them.but somewhere she felt as if she needed to talk to him and convince him to move on so she dropped a message "meet me in my home at 7.00 pm"

Swayam was soo happy that finally she wanted to meet him.. he reached sharons home exact at 7 sharon was pacing the window and feeling the fresh air over her skin swayam entered the room.. Sharon realized it before swayam would say anything Sharon spoke out "I know swayam tumhare pass mere liye bahuth saare sawal honge... isiliye mein tumse milna chahthi thi tumhe batana chahthi thi ki mein tumhe deserve nahi karthi tum tho koi acchi ladki deserve karthe ho"(she couldn't say anything more tear rolling down her cheeks she dint even turn around because she couldn't face him)

Swayam felt heartbroken finally he spoke "aisa kya hai sharon jo tum meri taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahthi.. mujse koi galthi hui hai kya bolo Sharon tum aisa kyon kar rahi ho. Mere saath, apne app ke saath, kyon Sharon kyon??"

Sharon couldn't take it anymore she turned around facing swayam and gestured towards her face "iss liye swayam jis khubsoorath ladki se tum pyar karthe the wo mein nahi hoon wo tho kahin kho gayi hai. Tumhari Sharon mein nahi hoon Sharon wo ladki jo diva thi jiske pyaar mein sab pagal the wo mein nahi swayam.. is baath ko samjo swayam mein nahi chahthi ki tum apni zindagi mein kabhi bhi mere karan inferior feel karo isiliye swayam tum abhi mujhe chod do tumhe tho koi acchi ladki mil jayegi jo meri tarah na ho aur..."

Swayams patience level broke and he shouted "what the hell haan meine tumse iss liye pyaar nahi kiya ki tum khubsoorath ho ya diva ho... us Sharon se nahi balki meine uss Sharon se pyaar kiya jiska dil sone ka hai.. jo mujse bahuth pyaar karthi hai.. mein yeh physical beauty ke liye tumpe fida nahi hua meine tho tumhare andar chupi uss innocent bubbly cute Sharon se pyaar kiya.. ek baath bolo Sharon agar mein tumhari jagah hotha tho tum ye decision accept kar pati?"

Sharon:please swayam aisa math bolo mein tumhare bina nahi jee pathi mar jaathi mein

Swayam:tho ab tum mujhe kaise kisi aur ke saath jeene ke liye keh sakthi ho... jo tumhare bina mar chuka hai

Sharon understood what swayam meant she rushed to him and hugged him tightly and felf his warmth which she carved for months and even swayam hugged her back with the same passion

Sharon: m sorry swayam.. n I love you soo much

Swayam : I love you too Sharon more than my life.. don't ever be inferior about yourself YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL HEART

P.S. I knw guys its not too good just a thought came to my mind and I penned it down do give your feedback

Love

SHINI

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey shinni
it was wonderful n emotional too
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and heart touching os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os👏
nice concept👍🏼
it was emotional also😊
swayam accepted sharon with her heart n nt her face❤️
do write more n more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wao shinni it was such an awesum piece
i loved it
i cud picturize a very heart-broken swayam
who desperately wanted to meet sharon
sharon too needed him but her love for him overpowered tat desire too
tat emotion certainly was conveyed n beautifully penned
swayam's breakdown was very well penned
i too wanted to cry wit him 😭
the way he tried to reason out wit sharon was heart-touching
all in all a very heart-warming story
do write more shinni 😛


Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shini,My Rajdhani Express 😊
This was your best work till date.Sharon's and Swayam's emotions were described beautifully.Sharon loosing the thing which she was proud of. . .Her external beauty and Pushing Swayam because she thought he deserved better. . .This Write up shows your improvement as a writer.You took many efforts to justify the emotions and it worked. 😳
Lovely OS Shini and you should really write more.
P.S.I know ye comment bahut formal ho gya na 😆 So breaking the ice. . .Surprise yaad hai na??? 😉
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazingly written...it was emotional bt truly i loved it. swayam sharon convo was really good n i loved it wen at d end swaym shouted...it was damn needed...!!! good wrk dere...do write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey shini dear,
loved it yr.
yup an emotional one..

swayam is right..usne kbi diva sharon se pyar kiya hi nhi..usne to sweet cute sharon se pyar kiya h..

thanks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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r u mad...its not good...ya u r right it is not good...it is actually out of this world...loved the concept and writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What the hell was this di!!!
It was just out of my head.
I loved it completely!
and am telling u pls chitra di ka saat mat do mujhe maarne mai.
puhlease!!
But still went mad fr this.
wowww

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