SWARON OS: YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL HEART

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Kya year senti kardiya nah...*wiping tears*...
Jokes apart...seriously sum hardcore emotional os I came thru...
N awesomely written
I loved der convo...especially swayam's reaction...woaahhoo...lyk bang on...keep up DA gud work...

Pleeejjj pm me too ur works

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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Bhumi06

@Bhumi06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Its really an osum OS.
Keep on shinning Shini...
Its really touching.

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Tu aur tera P.S. I tell you 😕
Anyways edited on Pg1.

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Shini,My Rajdhani Express 😊
This was your best work till date.Sharon's and Swayam's emotions were described beautifully.Sharon loosing the thing which she was proud of. . .Her external beauty and Pushing Swayam because she thought he deserved better. . .This Write up shows your improvement as a writer.You took many efforts to justify the emotions and it worked. 😳
Lovely OS Shini and you should really write more.
P.S.I know ye comment bahut formal ho gya na 😆 So breaking the ice. . .Surprise yaad hai na??? 😉

heyya 🤗

m really glad

and i wanted to hear that..

haan formal tho hai par tu mujhe mana hi lethi hai

yaad hai meri maa kaise bhool sakthi hoon

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
r u mad...its not good...ya u r right it is not good...it is actually out of this world...loved the concept and writing

omg u scared me dear

anyways thank u soo much

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: GlamourousPearl
Kya year senti kardiya nah...*wiping tears*...
Jokes apart...seriously sum hardcore emotional os I came thru...
N awesomely written
I loved der convo...especially swayam's reaction...woaahhoo...lyk bang on...keep up DA gud work...

Pleeejjj pm me too ur works

thank u dat really means a lot

yeah sure dea

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No name

@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: GlamourousPearl
Kya year senti kardiya nah...*wiping tears*...
Jokes apart...seriously sum hardcore emotional os I came thru...
N awesomely written
I loved der convo...especially swayam's reaction...woaahhoo...lyk bang on...keep up DA gud work...

Pleeejjj pm me too ur works

thank u.. dat really means a lot

yeah sure dea

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Shini..🤗
gosh.you have improved SO much.. :D
i LOVED this OS..
Sharon's decision to stay away from Swayam for him.. Swayam's zidd to be with her and the last reunion...beautifully written..
loved it.
thanks for the PM..
sorry for late comment..

Love
Nishi.

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow!this was one of the best stories i've ever read
the way you have penned down the feeling of swayam and his concern 4 his lady love juzz touched ma heart
please do write more
this was truly a different take on swaron
after reading ua os this quote has been jusified
"Beauty lies in the eye of the beholder"
thanx 4 d pm dear