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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Teaser Chapter 6:

Haya was feeling insurmountable excitement and happiness. She jumped a little and put her arms around Rahat's neck. She hugged him and he certainly deserved it.

Aisa kya kar diya Rahat miya ne that Haya hugged him and he deserved that hug

Waise I am excited for RaHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

wonderful update

Rahat made me laugh here I totally imagined his face saying this😆
Rahat: Main mail ko nahi female ko... Mera matlab hai Haya ko dhoondh raha hoon... 😆
loved the conversation between Rahat and Haya. They are getting closer to each other
thanks for the pm :)

Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hiral1979

Wonderful update

Haya wanting Rahat to fight for Munisa

Munisa finally free of that 🤬

I loved the way Munisa is after the dark shadow of that 🤬 is lifted off of her

She knws Haya and Rahat are perfect for each other

I loved the sibling relationship you showed

😆Munisa teasing Rahat n he was 😳 also loved the part where she knew he was looking for Haya but teased him n Rahat said Mail nahi female ko dhoondh raha hoon Haya ko Loved it

Haya n Rahat at the orphanage She risked her life to get the truth out of him and then making him understand that accidents happen Loved it

Also was wonderfully surprised with Dilshad telling her about AsYa n Zoya ka famous karate wala dialogue

Wonderful wonderful update

Do update soon n thank you for he pm


Thank you so much for the lovely comment

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome update...
Munisa finally free of that cheapo. .
Munisa teased rahat...and rahat blushing. ..
Loved siblings relationship. .
Lovely chapter. .

Update soon

Thank you for liking the chapter

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: het27

Aisa kya kar diya Rahat miya ne that Haya hugged him and he deserved that hug

Waise I am excited for RaHa

You have to wait n read

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 6

3 months later,

Rahat was driving Haya to the airport. Haya was for one last time looking at Bhopal, capturing each scene and storing it in her memory till she returned. Rahat was concentrating more on Haya than the road. He stole glances whenever he could. When she felt his eyes on her she smiled and made him face the road. She could not have ever imagined that she would be going to a Fashion Institute that to, to The School of Fashion Technology, Poona.

Haya's Flash back.

The day at the orphanage, when Haya encouraged Rahat to take baby steps to come out of his painful past, she had no idea he had made preparations for her to take a giant leap towards her bright future. Haya and Rahat were alone at home. He had entered after her. She was in the kitchen making tea and snacks for the two of them. They were sitting in the living are talking about the times Rahat was happy and was a career oriented man. They shared many things and Haya too told him that she dreamt of going to fashion school. She wanted to know more about fabrics and designing than she already knew. She wanted to learn new things and make a career as a fashion designer. She was enthusiastically telling Rahat about her dream but then abruptly stopped... She did not have the means to go to a fashion school and to add to that her handicap made her brush that idea off of her mind.

Rahat: Kya hua achanak Rajdhani Express ruk kyun gayi?

Haya (Signs): Kuch nahi.

Rahat: Kuch toh hai...

Haya (Signs): Sapne dekhne aur unke poore hone mein zameen asaaman ka fark hota hai. Sabke sapne sach ho ye zaroori nahi...

Rahat: Saare sapne ka toh pata nahi... Haan meri ek tammana hai jo yakeenan poori hogi... Mera ek sapna hai India ke leading designers mein se kisi ek ka fashion show dekhna wo bhi front row center seat par baithkar dekhne... ka Haan I know mujh jaise black and white insaan ko kuan fashion show ke liye bulaayega... Haan ek sorat mein mera sapna poora ho sakta hai agar fashion show India ki one of the top most designer, Haya Imran Qureshi ka fashion show ho toh...

Haya stared at Rahat in confusion. Rahat smiled at her. He got up from his seat and stood in front of her. He put the forth an envelope, on which Haya read School of Fashion Technology, Poona.' It was addressed to Miss. Haya Imran Qureshi. Haya could not believe it. It was the fashion school she wanted to study at. She had wanted to give her luck a try by applying to the school. She had prepared an envelope containing her 10 + 2 mark sheets she had also a few samples of her creations. She never dared to post it fearing rejection. She looked at Rahat and his smile told her that he had posted it on her behalf. He told her to take it. She took the envelope and opened it with trembling hands. The first few words brought a huge smile on her face. There in bold letters was written Letter of Acceptance'. Haya was feeling insurmountable excitement and happiness. She jumped a little and put her arms around Rahat's neck. She hugged him and he certainly deserved it. She broke the hug. Both Rahat and Haya felt the warmth when they hugged but were also feeling shy not at all awkward. Haya was to go to Poona for her course which was 1 year PG diploma in Apparel Production, Merchandising Management, Fashion Design, Clothing Technology, CAD Textile Design.

Haya (Signs): Rahat main kin shabdon mein aapko thank you kahoon...

Rahat: Sorry Haya tumhaari permission ke bina maine tumhaara envelope post kiya...

Haya (Signs): Aap sorry kyun keh rahe hain?

Rahat: Tumne thank you kyun kaha? Kya main tumhaare liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta? Kya itni bhi dosti nahi hai humaare beech?

Haya (Signs): Toh hum dost hain?

Rahat: Kyun tum mujhe apna dost nahi maanti?

Haya (Signs): Nahi main aapko dost nahi maanti... Main aapko apna best friend maanti hoon...

Rahat: Best friend... Haan wohi toh hoon main... Tumhaara dost.

Rahat was happy for Haya as her dream would come true but was sad that she considered him only a friend. Haya gave the good news to Munisa, Dilshad and Sanam. They were all very happy... But Munisa...

Haya came out of her thought when she saw Rahat wave his hand in front of her.

Rahat: Kahan kho gayi?

Haya (Signs): Kuch nahi wo din yaad kar rahi thi jab mujhe mera acceptance letter mila tha sab kitne khush the na par Munisa baji mujhe itni khush nahi lagi...

Rahat: Kuch nahi wo tumse kuch zyaada hi attach ho gayi hai na iss liye. She will be fine.

Rahat's flash back.

Haya had given the good news about her being accepted to the fashion school to Munisa, Dilshad and Sanam. They were all very happy... But Munisa... Rahat left Munisa, Dilshad and Haya alone. The ladies had a lot to talk about shopping and packing for Haya. Munisa took a brief moment to go get ready and came to Rahat's room instead. He had been expecting her to come sooner than she did.

Rahat: Der laga di Munisa...

Munisa: Chup Rahat... Ek dum chup. Kyun kar rahe ho aisa? Kyun Haya ko door kar rahe ho khud se?

Rahat: Main use khud se door nahi kar raha balki uske dream ke kareeb bhej raha hoon...

Munisa: Haan aur use agar wahaan dream poora karte karte apna dream man mil gaya toh?

Rahat: Toh wo uss ladke ki khushkismati hogi...

Munisa: Nahi Rahat tum apne haathon apni kismet uss ladke ke hawale kar rahe ho... Kyun Bhopal mein fashion school nahi hai? Haya yahaan rehkar bhi toh apna sapna poora kar sakti hai na?

Rahat: Haan Munisa Bhopal mein bhi fashion insitiute hai par uska dream hai Poona ke School of Fashion Technology, ke padhai karne ki...

Munisa: Aur tumhaara dream? Rahat main tumhaari behen hoon tum laakh chupana chaho apne dil ka haal mujhse nahi chupa sakte. I know you love her. Rahat rok lo use... Rahat logon ko zindagi mein ek baar sacchi mohabbat mil jaaye toh ye unki khushnaseebi hoti hai... Kudrat tumhe doosri baar ye mauka de rahi hai... Grab this opportunity with both your hands and do not let go... Bata do use apni feelings...

Rahat: Taaki wo ruk jaaye... Munisa wo shayad haan bhi keh de par wo mujhe sirf apna dost maanti hai... Munisa agar abhi wo haan kahegi toh she will be settling with a friend... I am her friend jisne uspar ehsaan kiya hai uski asmat bachakar... Use ye mauka dekar...

Munisa: Tumne use apne dil ki baat batayi? Tumne use poocha ki dosti ke alawa kuch hai jo wo feel karti hai? NAHI mere bhai usne tumhe kuch nahi bataya hoga kuch nahi poocha hoga... Rahat wo ladki hai agar kuch feel kar bhi rahi hogi toh pehel kaise karegi? Rahat iss se pehle der ho jaaye ek koshish toh karo... Agar uski na hogi toh bhi wo tumhaari dost rahegi aur agar uski haan hogi toh tumhaari best friend tumhaari life partner ban jaayegi... Rahat apni mohabbat ko ek mauka do... Tell her...

Rahat came out of his thought when Haya pressed on his arm to tell him to stop at the signal. Rahat applied the break. He was in shock, memories came flashing back. That night when he was not careful he lost Naaz, for the last time he could not even tell her I love you'. He was at the same place once again. Haya was going far away from him. He could lose her if she found someone else. This was his signal. He had to tell her about his feelings. He saw Haya look at her phone. She was surfing through something with the expressions of her face changing every now and then. He nudged her on the arm.

Rahat: Kya dekh rahi ho?

Haya (Signs): Secret hai.

Rahat: Best friend se bhi secret?

Haya (Signs): Ladkiyaan kuch baatein apne best friend se bhi secret rakhti hain. {Thinks: Khaaskar baat jab uss best friend ke baare mein apni feelings ki ho.}

Rahat pouts as she does not tell him her secret. She giggled as Rahat looked like a small child when he pouted. Rahat saw her blush while looking at the pictures in the cell phone. He turned on the music. Haya saw the equalizer bars move.

Haya (Signs): Rahat which song is playing?

Rahat: Secret hai.

Haya (Signs): Best friend se bhi secret?

Rahat: Ladke kuch baatein apni best friend se bhi secret rakhti hain. {Thinks: Khaaskar jab baat uss best friend ki apne liye feelings janne ki ho.}

Haya and Rahat both knew that they had feelings for the other but were not sure if the other felt the same. They both looked at each other from time to time. After looking at Rahat Haya looked at his pictures and after looking at Haya Rahat replayed the song.

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi

Dabaa dabaa saa sahi dil mein pyaar hai ke nahi

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar

Tu apne dil ki jawaan dhadkanon ko gin ke bataa

Tu apne dil ki jawaan dhadkanon ko gin ke bataa

Meri tarah teraa dil bekaraar hai ke naheen

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar

Wo pal ke jis mein mohabbat jawaan hoti hai

Wo pal ke jis mein mohabbat jawaan hoti hai

Us ik pal kaa tujhe intezar hai ke nahi

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar

Teri umeed pe thukaraa rahaa hoon duniya ko

Teri umeed pe thukaraa rahaa hoon duniya ko

Tujhe bhi apne aap pe ye aitabaar hain ke nahi

Jhuki jhuki si nazar

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi

Dabaa dabaa saa sahi dil mein pyaar hai ke nahi

Jhuki Jhuki si nazar

Rahat turned over to look at Haya who at the same time turned to look at him. They had an intense eyelock with questions about feelings in both. Their eyes had a sparkle as the recognized the similar look in the others' eyes which they had seen in their own image in the mirror. Rahat smiled and once more played the song. Haya took out a diary and wrote something which she did not share with Rahat.

Khamosh mohabbat ka ehsaas hai wo,

Meri khwahish, mere jazbaat hai wo,

Aksar yeh khayal aata hai dil me,

Meri pehli arzu aur aakhri tamanna hai wo...

A/N: PMs send to those who responded to Chapter 5. Readers kindly hit like and please leave behind your valuable comments.


Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome as usual

Khamosh mohabbat ka ehsaas hai wo,

Meri khwahish, mere jazbaat hai wo,

Aksar yeh khayal aata hai dil me,

Meri pehli arzu aur aakhri tamanna hai wo...


Just lovely...no words..beautiful


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow . nice update.
nice flashbacks and conversation between rahat-haya and rahat-munisa.
cont soon.
thanks for pm.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ssrdj

Awesome as usual

Khamosh mohabbat ka ehsaas hai wo,

Meri khwahish, mere jazbaat hai wo,

Aksar yeh khayal aata hai dil me,

Meri pehli arzu aur aakhri tamanna hai wo...


Just lovely...no words..beautiful


Thank you so much

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