RaHa SS Khamoshiyaan Gungunane Lagi *Completed* - Page 31

Originally posted by: Linsie

Beautiful update...❤️

Thank you

Originally posted by: gowtu

Woww awesome updt
I loved it totally

Loved raha conversation 😛

Nd theser so beautiful lines...


Har pal tu hi hai khayaalon mein tumse milne ki aas hai...
Mujh se door sahi par tu mere dil ke paas hai...
Bahoth dekhe hai log par tu hi sabse khaas hai..
Tu mere khwabon mein aati hai ismein ek raaz hai..
Nayi nayi mulaaqaat hai abhi toh pyar ka aaghaaz hai..

Tujhe chahne laga hoon mere dilpar mujhe naaz hai...

Thank you so much for liking my written work

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome

thanx for pm

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: het27

Awesome update

I loved what Haya did for Munisa and it was for Rahat too

The orphanage girl; Aaj kal ke bacche tauba tauba 😆 but you know they say that the child's heart is the purest and Ma Saraswati resides on their tongue JO wo bolte hain wo ho jaata hai; n the kids they do not beat around the bush

I loved the relationship you showed between Munisa n Rahat; I could never imagine that she could be like this; teasing Rahat n he was blushing 😳 cute

I loved the orphanage conversation where Haya made him understand that accidents happen and he was not at fault

i like that she is asking him to come out of it slowly

You ended at cliffy in this one 😡 What is in that envelope?

I loved the lines at the end

Har pal tu hi hai khayaalon mein tumse milne ki aas hai...

Mujh se door sahi par tu mere dil ke paas hai...

Bahoth dekhe hai log par tu hi sabse khaas hai..

Tu mere khwabon mein aati hai ismein ek raaz hai..

Nayi nayi mulaaqaat hai abhi toh pyar ka aaghaaz hai..

Tujhe chahne laga hoon mere dilpar mujhe naaz hai...

Update soon

Next part ka precap n teaser hi de do Today itself

Thank you for the long and detailed comment

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: dinazz

hey dear, a superb update.

so nice of haya to get back munisa home and making rahat understand that what happened in the past was not his fault.

very well written.

thanks for PM.

cont soon.😊

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

superb update

Thank you so much

Teaser Chapter 6:

Haya was feeling insurmountable excitement and happiness. She jumped a little and put her arms around Rahat's neck. She hugged him and he certainly deserved it.

Originally posted by: veenisha

awesome update..good...👍🏼

Thank you