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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Khamosh mohabbat ka ehsaas hai wo,
Meri khwahish, mere jazbaat hai wo,
Aksar yeh khayal aata hai dil me,
Meri pehli arzu aur aakhri tamanna hai wo...

BEAUTIFULL WORDS...




updt again
So beautiful it was

I loved it


Mujhe aapki comment BEHADD pasand aayi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update i just love it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hiral1979

Beautifully written

Khamosh mohabbat ka ehsaas hai wo,

Meri khwahish, mere jazbaat hai wo,

Aksar yeh khayal aata hai dil me,

Meri pehli arzu aur aakhri tamanna hai wo...

Such beautiful words fit perfectly for Haya's feelings

Rahat too playing jhuki jhuki si nazar

Aww Rahat felt bad that she called him dost

I loved the flashbacks; Haya hugged Rahat and it was not awkward but warm; I am loving this Munisa in your story

Ab aage kya hoga? I am waiting for it so update soon


Thank you

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Posted: 11 years ago

Teaser Chapter 7

Will you marry me?

He asked... and She...

The flight was announced. Haya got up from the seat without saying anything. Rahat too followed her. He asked her once but did not force her to give him an answer. He did not want to force her into saying yes. He wanted her to accept him with all her heart and will. He saw Haya walk over to the boarding counter. Rahat closed his eyes. He could not bear to see her walk out of his life.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhisha

Awesome update i just love it ...

Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Teaser Chapter 7

Will you marry me?

He asked... and She...

The flight was announced. Haya got up from the seat without saying anything. Rahat too followed her. He asked her once but did not force her to give him an answer. He did not want to force her into saying yes. He wanted her to accept him with all her heart and will. He saw Haya walk over to the boarding counter. Rahat closed his eyes. He could not bear to see her walk out of his life.

Will you marry me ? He asked and She... Cliffy tera 😡

Haya got up from the seat without saying anything

Rahat too followed her. He asked her once but did not force her to give him an answer. He did not want to force her into saying yes. He wanted her to accept him with all her heart and will. 👏

He saw Haya walk over to the boarding counter. Rahat closed his eyes. He could not bear to see her walk out of his life. 😭

Update soon



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: het27

Will you marry me ? He asked and She... Cliffy tera 😡

Haya got up from the seat without saying anything

Rahat too followed her. He asked her once but did not force her to give him an answer. He did not want to force her into saying yes. He wanted her to accept him with all her heart and will. 👏

He saw Haya walk over to the boarding counter. Rahat closed his eyes. He could not bear to see her walk out of his life. 😭

Update soon



Yup I will update tonight

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Chapter 7

At the airport, there was still time for Haya's flight. Rahat asked her if she would like to have some coffee she agreed. They were at the coffee shop. Rahat ordered 2 cappuccinos. When the cappuccinos arrived Haya saw that hers had a beautiful heart froth design and Rahat's had a falling leaves design.

Haya (Signs): Rahat aap mera dil le lijiye...

Rahat: Kya?

Haya (Signs): I mean aap ye heart wali design ka cup lijiye aur mujhe wo autumn theme wala cup de dijiye. Mujhe wo design zyaada pasand hai. {Rahat ab main aapki life mein sirf khushiyon ki basant dekhna chahti hoon patjhad nahi.}

Rahat: Nahi it's OK. {Haya mujhe tumhara dil wali design ka coffee cup nahi mujhe sach mein tumhaara dil chahiye.}

Rahat and Haya sat there sipping on the hot cup of cappuccino and looked into each other's eyes. They had a silent conversation.

Haya:Rahat kya sach mein mujhe apne paas nahi chahte. Kyun mujhe khud se door bhej rahe hain?

Rahat: Haya main tumhe saari zindagi ke liye apne paas apne saath chahta hoon.Main tumhe khudse door nahi tumhaare dream ke paas bhej raha hoon.

Haya: Kya mere dream ke liye mujhe Rahat se door jana zaroori hai? Kya unke paas rehkar mere sapne poore nahi ho sakte? Rahat ki aakhon mein jo maine dekha kya wo unke dil mein nahi hai?

Rahat: Mere dil mein jo hai wo kaise kahoon? Main nahi chahta Haya ki meri mohabbat tumhaare dreams ke raaste emin aaye. Kabhi kabhi khud ko khud ke sapno ko paane ke liye humein sabse door jana padta hai.

Haya: Rahat please keh dijiye na apne dil ki baat... Main bhi aapse apne dil ki baat kehna chahti hoon... Par pehle kaise kahoon? Aap kya sochenge mere baare mein... Ye ladki saamne se propose kar rahi hai... Rahat aap keh dijiye na meri flight kabhi bhi announce ho jaayegi...

Rahat: Haya...

Haya (Signs): Haan kuch kehna hai?

Rahat: Haan chalo tumhaari flight kabhi bhi announce ho jaayegi... Aur...

Haya (Signs): Aur kuch nahi... Aapse kuch nahi ho sakta... Aapse kuch nahi kaha jaayega...

Rahat: Haya...

Haya (Signs): Mujhe kuch nahi sunna ab...

Haya walked very fast towards the barricade and was walking towards the boarding counter. Rahat ran towards her and grabbed her hand and pulled her into a corner.

Haya (Signs): Jaane dijiye mujhe mujhe kuch nahi sunna ... meri flight miss ho jayegi.

Rahat makes her sit on a chair. He takes a deep breath. Haya was waiting for him to day something but he did not say anything. She sat there eating her Cadbury silk chocolate. She ate chocolate whenever she was angry. What he did next was a pleasant shock for Haya. There was a smile on her face and tears flowed down her cheeks. He got down on one knee.

Rahat (Signs): Haya you have made changed my life forever for the better. I had accepted the fact that I had to live a lonely life till my very end. Then you came into my home bringing with you a new beginning for me. I am tired of the lonliness and the gloominess in my life. I want someone to share my life with. My heart is perfect because now you live in it. I want my life to be perfect too which can be possible only when you will share it. Your smile makes my heart melt... Your looks make my heart skip a beat... You are the only one for me... I love you not for what you are but for what I am when I am with you... I promise to love you forever, every single day of forever... Will you marry me?

He asked... and She...

The flight was announced. Haya got up from the seat without saying anything. Rahat too followed her. He asked her once but did not force her to give him an answer. He did not want to force her into saying yes. He wanted her to accept him with all her heart and will. He saw Haya walk over to the boarding counter. Rahat closed his eyes. He could not bear to see her walk out of his life. He felt a soft pat on his shoulder. He opened his eyes and saw Haya smiling at him. She put forth something. It was a ring made out of foil paper of the Cadbury silk she had been eating. She signed him to take it. Rahat took it then Haya put her left hand on front to Rahat. Rahat smiled and put the foil ring on her ring finger.

Rahat (Signs): Haya tumne kaha nahi...

Haya (Signs): Kya?

Rahat (Signs): Ki tum mujhse pyar karti ho ya nahi...

Haya blushed and lowered her eyes. She and Rahat were both happy and sad. It was time. She had to go. She moved towards the boarding counter. After her formalities were done she turned back to look at Rahat. She smiled at him. She did not have to say anything. Her smile, her blush and the glow on her face reflecting the happiness of her heart... It told him everything. They stood there looking into each others eyes with smiles playing on their lips.

Khamoshiyan gunagunane lagi ...

A year and a half later,

Dressed in an A line earthly off white net lehenga choli' Haya looked the most stunning bride. Poised and elegant on the outside Haya felt so nervous on the inside that at times she couldn't believe she was getting married. It was out-of-body because it seemed like everyone else was so calm and happy while she was so anxious about the ceremony. When she finally was seated on the stage facing Rahat, she suddenly felt calm and at peace as she saw him through the thin net curtain keeping the two apart. Rahat smiled at her and they knew they were meant to be together. Rahat too made a very handsome grrom. He was not nervous like Haya was. He was impatient for the ceremony to get over so that he could spend time alone quality time with his new bride. The maulwi sahib began the wedding ceremony with a prayer. Everyone prayed to Allah for the couple's happy and blissful married life. The maulwi sahib read the terms and conditions of the nikaah and then turned towards Haya to ask her if she accepted Rahat in marriage. The entire wedding party was silent. Rahat's heart began to beat very fast.

Haya: Qubool Hai.

These were the first two words Haya spoke. This was the first time Rahat heard her voice which did sounded as sweet as honey. Rahat was smiling from ear to ear and tears of joy danced on the brim of his eyes. He wanted the first words which Haya spoke to be his name or her love confession but Haya happily wanted to say Qubool Hai' as those two words would make her one with Rahat. Rahat's happiness was in Haya's happiness. Maulwi Sahib then turned towards Rahat and asked him if he accepted Haya in marriage.

Rahat: Qubool Hai.

Their wedding day was everything Rahat and Haya had ever imagined. Rahat could not take his off of Haya who was glowing all the time while they performed the post nikaah rituals. As the evening wound down and the guest left it had become quite late.

Haya was in her new bedroom, Rahat's bedroom no it was their bedroom where they would begin a new life of togetherness. She was nervous for the first night. It was her first marriage but Rahat's second. He was experienced whereas she was not. She did not want to disappoint him in any way. She wanted to wait... Would Rahat want to wait? Was it necessary for husband wife to consummate their marriage on the first night itself? Many questions arose in her mind. She had never discussed the bedroom aspect of husband wife relationship and now she did not have the time. Before she could call up Sanam and speak with her she heard Sanam's voice outside her room extorting money to allow Rahat to enter his room. Rahat entered the room and saw Haya sitting in the middle of the bed. He closed the door and sat across her. He sensed that she was very nervous. He lay down on his side facing her.

Haya: Kya dekh rahe hain?

Rahat: Chand ko. Mere chaand ko.

Rahat got close to her and caressed her her rose tinged cheeks. There was a sparkle in her eyes. She lowered her eyes but Rahat hooked a finger under her chin and made her face him. They had a simple, straight forward, and honest to heart conversation about their first night and taking their marriage to the next level. They sat there hands in hand, eyes gazing deep into the others eyes, beautiful silence spread in the room which bespoke more that words. Their suhaagraat had everything from the nervousness to comfort and assurance, from avoiding eye contact to intese eye locks, to trying to make conversation, from blushes to utter silences, to Rahat' demand for a wedding gift.

Haya: Rahat mere paas toh kuch nahi hai aapko dene ke liye aur jo hai wo sab aapka hai.

Rahat: Main jaanta hoon Haya ab tumhaara sab mera hai aur mera sab tumhaara par ek gift chahiye mujhe tumse aur wo sirf tum de sakti ho aur mujhe sirf tumse his chahiye.

Haya: Aisa kya hai?

Rahat: Haya tumne ab tak mujhse izhar e ishq nahi kiya hai. Tumne ab tak mujhe I love you nahi bola hai.

Haya: Kyun aapko nahi pata ki main aapse mohabat karti hoon? Kya bolna zaroori hai?

Rahat: Zaroori nahi hai par tum kahogi toh mujhe accha lagega.

Haya: Kaise kahoon? Sanam ke jaise filmy style mein wo main nahi kar sakti...

Rahat: Waise bolo jaise meri Haya bolti.

Haya: I...

Rahat: Na jaise meri Haya bolti...

Haya (Signs): I love you Rahat.

Dil ki aawaz ko izhar -e- ishq kehte hain

Jhuki nighahon ko ikrar-e- ishq kehte hain

Sirf zuban se kahna hi izhar -e- ishq nahi hota

Khamoshi main muskurane ko bhi ikrar-e- ishq kehte hain

The beautiful night turned out to be exactly what Rahat and Haya wanted and needed. It was the beginning of their happily ever after...


Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago
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