IshRa SS - 'Together We Will' ( Completed! ) - Page 4

Originally posted by: gems4sana

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This was SO ADORABLE - and the way you portrayed Adi was pretty realistic.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">His brattiness was so on point; alot of OSes show him melting to Ishu immediately or being nice to her after she yells at him once (a bit uncharacteristically for her at this point...) but I liked how you showed her subtly getting to him - just like she did with Raavan Kumar ;)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Toshiji's dialogues were so on point I had to stop myself from laughing out loud for fear someone would hear me and think I'd gone crazy.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">That last scene. It made my dil khush because so sweet and so like Ishita to take any child - even one who's been rude to her - under her wing... and I adored how you added bits of Shagun's absenteeism and how that really affected Adi and how Ishita was able to pick up on it. Lovely lovely lovely. I'm actually pretty sad that this story is done, to be honest. I was hoping it would go on a bit longer😉.</font>