IshRa SS - 'Together We Will' ( Completed! )

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Lovely SS Anshika was a delight to read it 😊

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SanchiIndu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

all i could say to summarise praisings nd tariffsss i lv ur eriting skilld

specially 6 th prt ws awsm..

super se uprrr😊😊👏

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Sunita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

fantastic storyyy!!! loved it !! u writee reallyyy greattt!!! keepp continuinggg!!!

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nichuss
Misssing rkb one liners in yhm

anu , u bought missing knok jhok...

U made a redemption hope in adi

adi was made a part of family...enjoyed reading th ss

thanks for writing this

Glad you liked it Dii :) Thanq so much!!

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .Username.
OMFG You are amazing <3333 This was such a beautiful story. I loved how Raman and Ishita decided to work TOGETHER instead of distrusting eachother 😃

The way Ishita deals with Adi is amazing. LOL Unglee teede kar ke hi ghee nikal ta hai.

I wish you were offered to show this piece of work to the CVs and they showed this in the show.

Amazing <3333

Hey, Thanq so much for the encouraging words buddy! :)

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sristhi
anshika sister love u lot dear..again its wonderful peace of your writing. .love it lottt...

Love ya more, Dii :)

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: EkPaheli
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Lovely SS Anshika was a delight to read it😊</font>

Hey, Thanq SO much buddy, for the kind words of appreciation! 😊

Glad you liked it! 😊

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Anshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanchiIndu
all i could say to summarise praisings nd tariffsss i lv ur eriting skilld
specially 6 th prt ws awsm..
super se uprrr😊😊👏

Hey, Thanks a lot bud! 😊

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

loved the way u wrote it. wonderful. fabulous

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gems4sana

@gems4sana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

This was SO ADORABLE - and the way you portrayed Adi was pretty realistic.

His brattiness was so on point; alot of OSes show him melting to Ishu immediately or being nice to her after she yells at him once (a bit uncharacteristically for her at this point...) but I liked how you showed her subtly getting to him - just like she did with Raavan Kumar ;)

Toshiji's dialogues were so on point I had to stop myself from laughing out loud for fear someone would hear me and think I'd gone crazy.

That last scene . It made my dil khush because so sweet and so like Ishita to take any child - even one who's been rude to her - under her wing... and I adored how you added bits of Shagun's absenteeism and how that really affected Adi and how Ishita was able to pick up on it. Lovely lovely lovely. I'm actually pretty sad that this story is done, to be honest. I was hoping it would go on a bit longer 😉.

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