INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019 - Page 38

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mujhe update chahiye wo b jaldi se samjhe tum dono
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Part 5

sorry for short update


After one month

A man was exercising very aggressively and was breathing heavily. Seeing him like that his friends got worried.

At once Rudra said stopping him, "Why dont u clear the matter and tell her the truth that u r not any god but an normal human being, who can't do miracle and wipe off her pain!"

Maan glared at him and spoke,"Dont talk about her!"..

There was a certain rage and anger in those chocolate brown orbs listening to the words of his friend .. the words which were indirectly telling him to part from her.. the words which hurt him most other than her dried tears on the paper .. he smashed the ice that was infront of him hurting himself in the process..the red liquid start dripping but he was having no effect of the blood that was flowing carelessly.. instead he just in his sheer anger he was giving the pain that was the reflection of her hurt and pain..

His feelings were just the replica of that crystal which appear to be clear yet you can't see on the other side and here the crystal was his heart whose every single plea he was ignoring in the futile attempt to calm his raging senses..

Rudra asked angrily, "Then what about am gonna talk seeing u acting like Devdas!"

Maan snarled, "Shut up Rudra!"..

The words were no less than the teasing but still a little smile that appeared on his lips was not ignored by karan who came and threw the ice cold water on both of them..

The two looked at him in the anger but the poor guy just made a puppy face and answered ..

Karan " don't look at me like that , you two are looking like the perfect romeo's especially maan.. see what he has done to himself .. he forcefully took his hand and put it in the ice cold water ...

Karan " yar , dard nahi hota tujhe.. see its a deep cut .. and its all because of that girl..whats he name..yes geet.. aisa kya hai usme that you are hell bent on giving yourself pain.. agar pyar karta hai toh saaf saaf bol.. itna gussa dikhayega toh bhaag jayegi samjaha...

Maan took his hands and again gave both of them the cold stares..

Maan : shut up both of you .. i don't love her aur agar karta bhi hun so that's my problem you two don't have to interfere .. that's my problem and she doesn't even know about me ..she is completely ignorant about me

Rudra snarled, "Then u shut up abt her!U said she was naive...ok i accept it becoz i cant say this as conspiracy of tht girl becoz u r getting her letters from childhood..i cant blame her tht she's trying to trap u...but what have u done...u r trapped in ur own deeds!Who said u to reply to those letters?Who said u to create an obsession towards her?Who said u to give her false pretences tht u r god?Who said u to fulfill her all wishes like god?Who said u?Whos said u Maan answer me?"

Maan collapsed on the nearby chair feeling defeated...

Maan : don't call it as obsession.. his eyes were red..and the pain and tears were making him vulnerable...

Rudra continued,"U said that she's naive...u said that she has lost her mother when she started writing letters to u...so why dint u let her face the reality?why dint u make her accept the truth?why did u make her more naive?From starting she thought u god and it was u who fulfilled her all wishes so its obvious she thinks u as a saviour but u r not in reality!Yeah she's angry becoz she thinks u as her god..but why r u so angry?Why r u restless?"

Maan said with frustration,"Becoz she blamed me that i dint do anything...after all i did to her she still blamed me!"

Rudra sighed and spoke,"Maan,now u r proving urself as human being...u r proving urself as selfish human being!"

Maan asked,"How?"

Rudra said gently,"Maan,god wont expect anything from us though he gives everything! He's way too generous. Let's leave god from here and talk abt u!Now are u gonna come out of this frustration or not?"

Maan still not convinced as he was so much hurt becoz of her last letter...

This was not only the maan , it was geet who was restless.the guy varun has humiliated her , she was angry on herself and varun..right now she wanted to bang the head of varun just like meera said.. meera was equally angry on her and she has abused varun...for the first time she saw her sister using slang against anyone .. geet was not going to college ..and meera and her mother didn't even asked her .. it was three days geet was sulking .. there were crushed paper al over..her books scattered .. meera came in the room and saw geet sleeping with her face buried in her pillow..

Meera : utho geet di.how long will you sleep.. just get up now.. we are getting late ... she pulled the quilt switched off the ac..

Geet turned to other side.. meera noticed the wet tear marks..still on her eyelids...

Meera sat near her and took the glass from the side table and filled it with the water and started sprinkling on geet's face...

Meera : one..

Meera : two..

Geet sleepily : what are you doing meer...

Meera : am counting the drops , jaldi utho...

Geet : you just go , i don't want to go anywhere

Meera : are you sure ..

Geet : hmm..

Meera : ok fine..

The next moment she emptied all the water on her face and geet sat with a jerk..

Geet : meera kii bachi... what have you done..

Meera : kya matlab..i haven't done anything and why are looking like paro .. geet look at her showing her baby anger ...

Meera : don't look at me like this.. even devdas was better than you.. pagal ho tum.. uss khotte gadhe ko aise rona chahie and here you are looking like pata nahi kya ho gaya .. get up and and show that nerd that you are not affected y anything , you know these guys are so ungrateful.. and you should be thankful that you are spared from one such idiot ...

Now come on get up. I need new dresses and i think you too.. utho we are going for shopping then movie and kal se college jana.. kittu and pinky are asking about you..

Geet uninterestingly get up and thought..

Geet : meera is right , why i am sulking and god has already told me to be careful..it was my fault.. ohh what have i done.. geet tu jhalli hai ek dum..

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Next : teaser

Updating tomorrow..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally hume update mila...
awesome update dear...maan apna gussa n frustration nikal rh h harsh practice kr k...
rudra trying to make him understand n make him realize about his feelings for geet...
geet still crying bcoz of that ba****d varun...meera samjhaying geet ko k uss varun k liye geet ko rona nai chahiye balki usse dikha de k geet ko koi fark nai pada h usski wajha se...
geet ko b realize hua k god ne b careful rhne kaha tha...
hmm kya ab geet apne godji ko dubara letter likhne wali h
eagerly waiting for nxt
hope k ye jo tumhara tomorrow h wo kal hi aa jaye nai tho pata chala phir 2-3 months ka wait krna padega
Edited by nikkirockssss - 11 years ago
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so he is breaking apart with what she said
but glad that he realises he feels something for her
his friends were right
he has to stop playing god for her
he is just a human
is it obsession
or just love
lets see
geet was all crying was she
awww that was sad to see
but meera got her outta it
will they meet again
i hope so
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so he is breaking apart with what she said
but glad that he realises he feels something for her
his friends were right
he has to stop playing god for her
he is just a human
is it obsession
or just love
lets see
geet was all crying was she
awww that was sad to see
but meera got her outta it
will they meet again
i hope so



thanks
yup they will def meet
warna ff ka kya malab😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
aah mein bhi khush hoon! lets give daily uds sweety and finish it..kaun pade ya na pade humein toh apna kaam khatam kar dena chaahiye!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
yup bohot khush 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
yup jaldi type karo
btw updated my cmmnt

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