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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!!! Awesome update!!!! I just hope Raghav and Babli accepts the truth and get back to Kapoors. Continue soon😃
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Priya, talk about adding fuel to the fire, lol. Zayne and Babli I'm liking but damn that girl is just way too stubborn, Just like her Dad. 😆 Aria, a mark of a good writer is to get the audience to feel strongly for one character, and you've done that. You made me feel a strong sense of hate, love, and anger towards Babli. It's all applaud worthy sweety. 👏

The million dollar question that even I've wanted to know the answer to. How come Raghav never knew he had a daughter? Watch it Mr. Singhania, Babli's not the only one that loves her mother. I love my Princess too much so no manhandling her.

Wha? HId her? Meaning? Why? Who? What? '

Ahahahahahahaha! I love women's mood swings in labor! The stuff that they do. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Go Kalpi! Lol. That line had me reeling in laughter. That's hilarious sweets. Poor Raghav should know better than to answer his phone when his wife is in labor. 😆😆😆

OMG! What the hell is Neetu's problem? Killing an innocent baby? Really? I never thought she would stood so low...on second thought, maybe she can stoop low. You never know how some people might be. Specially when it's Neetu we're talking about. Kudos to Kalpi for slapping her 🥳.

Aww somebody please give Kalpi a hug from me. Please please please please. But then again, Raghav's anger is justified so I won't dwell on it further but will hurry over to read the next update. 😃😃


Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this is awesome aria! Love the way you portrayed a pregnant Kalpi in labour! And how she hid babli! The neetu thing too good! Awesome job!
Edited by Yellowdiamond - 11 years ago
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Chapter 11 part 2


Raghav left from there kalpi sat on the ground and sobbed.
Eveyone was at the dinner table,Babli watched Raghav and Kalpi's quietness and thinked"Hmmm Aai and Raghav Singhaina is extra quiet today"Babli Gasped"Maybe Aai isn't speaking to him"Babli smiled and ate
Kalpi watched raghav,Kalpi threw the spoon on the ground to get his attension,Raghav got up and left kalpi was sad,babli watched them confused.Outside Raghav sat down kalpi came and kneeled infront of him holding her ears.
Kalpi-Raghav Please forgive me.
Raghav watched her and helped her up,Raghav hugged kalpi
Raghav-Kalpi I'm sorry i should'nt have treated you like that.
Kalpi smiled,she kissed raghav
Kalpi-Raghav i have to see Adi, babli and priya before i got to bed are you comming,
Raghav-No you go in i'll stay out for a while
Kalpi left,From afar babli watched on eating her chips she shakes her head"I'm busy playing house and i didn't get his Signature,I'll have to do something"
Morning came
Sammy and Aditya was waiting on raghav,babli came downstairs
Aditya-Good Morning Hot head
Babli smiled
Babli-Good Morning
Sammy-Babli tell raghav were waiting for him in the car
Aditya and Sammy left
Babli-But...
Babli saw Raghav leaving
Babli-Raghav Singhaina
Raghav Turned around and watched her,Kalpi and gauri peeped at them
Babli-Uh Sammy and Aditya said there waiting for you in the car
Raghav-Is that all
Babli watched him annoyed,Raghav looked away
Raghav -Your'e dressed up,you look good are you going out
Babli looked away
Babli-Yeah,You looked good too,
Raghav-I have an important meeting.
Babli watched him ,raghav left,Gauri and Kalpi smiled,Babli thought"Raghav singhaina has a very Important meeting"Babli left
At Kapoor's Constuctions
Inside Prem's office Neetu arrived
Neetu-Prem whats wrong?
Prem-That Raghav Singhaina is comming to attend a meeting held here i just want his Signature.
Neetu smiled
Neetu-Chocopie relax someone's already doing that for us
Prem-I can't wait Mom
Babli-Babli will get the signature for us she's wraped around my finger prem,She trustes me more than her Father,I made her hate him soon we'll get everything thanks to babli.
Prem,sahil, and avinash smiled
Neetu-I used Raghav Singhaina's Daughter to gain his property.
Neetu smiles
Neetu-She doesnt know that her father is innocent and i made up a lie and she's so foolish to believe me,Raghav loves kalpi more than anything he'll never cheat her but babli is so stupid she believed a stranger over her blood.
Neetu laughs
Sahil-As soon as babli finishes her job and gets Raghav's Signature all of Raghav's company'hotel,houses, land will belong to the Kapoors.
Neetu and sahil smirked.
Neetu-And prem do you know the funniest thing,I made babli believed that she's Illegitimate infact she's Aditya's Twin
Prem smiled
Prem-Really mom way to go!
Sahil-We tried killing them but kalpana saw neetu.
Neetu-That woman slaped me for her stupid baby
Neet smiles
Neetu-And now that baby will bring her whole family down and give us her father's property,Just one Signature and everything wil be Ours The Kapoor's Own.
Avinash-I like it Dadi but i want babli,I want her i want to see Zayne's face when i get her!
Neetu and sahil watched him
Neetu-Then you'll get her soon
Prem,sahil and Avi smiled
Neetu-Sahil and i will get the whole company,Avi will get Babli and Prem will get Kalpi.
Prem-Mom i do want kalpana but i first i want her to beg me,Beg me not to kill her husband,that to infront of Him.
Neetu,Prem sahil and Avinash laughs
Outside the cabin a shadow stands overhearing the whole conversation and is Utterly shocked.
Raghav,Sammy and Aditya are all presnt for a presentation at the Kapoors Office.
Prem-Good Morning this meeting will be postponed for 3 weeks
Raghav,Sammy and adiya watched him and left,outside raghav bounced into neetu was watched him wiping her face nervously,Neetu smiled
Neetu-Raghav Beta how are you
Raghav watched her and left with adi and sammy
Neetu watched him leave and smirked.
Babli was in the Elevator her phone rang
Babli-Hello
Avinash was on the other line
Avi- Hi babli i hope i didn't interrupt you
Avinash layed on his bed watching the pictures and babli on his wall
Babli-No avinash,I was just going home
Avi-Would you like to go on a date with me
Babli-Sure why not,I have to go I'll see you tomorrow night
Avi-Sure bye
Babli comes out the elevator seeing the crazy mailman she runs inside the house colliding with Zayne who catches her both shares a eyelock
from afar paakhi calls priya and shows her bith Priya and Paakhi was shocked.

Precap

At a hotel while babli was outside on the Balcony someone drugs Avinash and Babli's Drinks.

In Priya's Room Paakhi Instigates Priya against babli
Paakhi-That girl is throwing herself at zayne,Do something about her Priya.
Priay watches her.

In the kitchen kalpi wholes a stick in her hand,Babli and Raghav was shock
Kalpi-Both of you will cook for me and if it tastes bad I'll beat you
Raghav and Babli was shocked kalpi leaves
Babli-Raghav Singhaina we'll have to work together,
Babli peeps at kalpi who was sitting watching tv,while raghav was ordering food.


tell me your thoughts sorry i had made any mistakes😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me first! Me first! Me first! Yayayayayayay!

Aww Kalpi's effort to speak with him was so cute. Bless her little heart. She's just too adorable. Babli..😡😡..he's your dad goddammit. You should be upset that they're not speaking with each other, not happy.

Aww they made up! Yayyy! Another dance session for them. At least they have a good understanding between them. Raghav was right in his own stead and Kalpi in her own. But the matter has been sorted. Now the only thing left to do is to get Babli to realise that Raghav is her father and not act so snappy...wait..does she know Raghav is her Dad?

I think that's the second time Babli and Raghav have had a convo that wasn't snappy or filled with arguments. It felt nice. Wah wah! Sammy decides to make an appearance already eh? 😃 Another dance session for his appearance...psst..Aria..Make him appear more often will you?😳.

Well if it isn't Choco-pie. Someone whom I have dearly missed in the show regardless of his deeds. Signature? On what?

Oho. So now it all makes sense. The conniving woman poisoned Babli against Raghav for her own needs. Why am I not surprised. Please have Babli slap her when the truth comes out. She deserves it. Or better yet send her to jail on charges of attempted murder. So what if Babli was a baby, it was still an attempt.

Property. Mother of God! What is with the Kapoors and more property? Why can't they just be happy with what they have, which is a lot mind you. Greed is an awful thing. Innocent? Lie? What is she on about now? Ab aur kitne jhoot bole hain issne? 😕😕

Woman she's not stupid. You're the one that's stupid to play with a child's mind and instigate her against her own father when he really is innocent. Aria please just make this one go to jail. I can't stand her right now. Now I'm getting why you said you'll love Babli. But this is so wrong. I hope the truth comes out soon as I hate seeing a daughter go against her father when under misunderstandings 😭😭.

This Avi character is no less than Prem (the Prem in this story, I mean). Why the obsession with these women guys? They are in love with someone else so stay out of their lives. Idiots.

A shadow? My money is on Zayne or Priya...no forget that...my money is on everyone besides Raghav, Kalpi, Babli, Aditya, and Pakhi. 😆 I can't seem to make up my mind. A personal wish is that I want it to be Sammy but then I'm hoping too much.

The guy is obsessed with Babli. First I thought it was just a minor crush but with the pictures on the wall. No way. It's a serious obsession and that just makes me a bit weary of Avi.

Ohooo..a little romantic moment between Babli-Zayne. Damn this Pakhi. She's exactly like her own mother, instigating her daughter against two that are not at fault. If Priya has Sammy's blood at all then let her rebel against her mother and support Zayne and Babli's relationship. I want Pakhi to get a taste of her own medicine. 😈

Aria darling this is getting interesting with every update. You simply have to continue soon! I am in love with the unpredictability of this FF and I'm really looking forward to seeing how you will weave in the confrontation of Babli and the Kapoors into this FF.

So continue soon and I'm really sorry for leaving such a long comment.

P.S.
Did I mention I was first? 😆😆😆
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting update!! Wondering what will happen next? Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! Wondering who was the one who overheard the entire Kapoor family convo!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..Aria😳😳

Nd thanx for pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Wonder who d shadow is may b aditya or Sammy
Ur updates getting more n more interesting
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

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Me first! Me first! Me first! Yayayayayayay!

Aww Kalpi's effort to speak with him was so cute. Bless her little heart. She's just too adorable. Babli..😡😡..he's your dad goddammit. You should be upset that they're not speaking with each other, not happy.

Aww they made up! Yayyy! Another dance session for them. At least they have a good understanding between them. Raghav was right in his own stead and Kalpi in her own. But the matter has been sorted. Now the only thing left to do is to get Babli to realise that Raghav is her father and not act so snappy...wait..does she know Raghav is her Dad?

I think that's the second time Babli and Raghav have had a convo that wasn't snappy or filled with arguments. It felt nice. Wah wah! Sammy decides to make an appearance already eh? 😃 Another dance session for his appearance...psst..Aria..Make him appear more often will you?😳.

Well if it isn't Choco-pie. Someone whom I have dearly missed in the show regardless of his deeds. Signature? On what?

Oho. So now it all makes sense. The conniving woman poisoned Babli against Raghav for her own needs. Why am I not surprised. Please have Babli slap her when the truth comes out. She deserves it. Or better yet send her to jail on charges of attempted murder. So what if Babli was a baby, it was still an attempt.

Property. Mother of God! What is with the Kapoors and more property? Why can't they just be happy with what they have, which is a lot mind you. Greed is an awful thing. Innocent? Lie? What is she on about now? Ab aur kitne jhoot bole hain issne? 😕😕

Woman she's not stupid. You're the one that's stupid to play with a child's mind and instigate her against her own father when he really is innocent. Aria please just make this one go to jail. I can't stand her right now. Now I'm getting why you said you'll love Babli. But this is so wrong. I hope the truth comes out soon as I hate seeing a daughter go against her father when under misunderstandings 😭😭.

This Avi character is no less than Prem (the Prem in this story, I mean). Why the obsession with these women guys? They are in love with someone else so stay out of their lives. Idiots.

A shadow? My money is on Zayne or Priya...no forget that...my money is on everyone besides Raghav, Kalpi, Babli, Aditya, and Pakhi. 😆 I can't seem to make up my mind. A personal wish is that I want it to be Sammy but then I'm hoping too much.

The guy is obsessed with Babli. First I thought it was just a minor crush but with the pictures on the wall. No way. It's a serious obsession and that just makes me a bit weary of Avi.

Ohooo..a little romantic moment between Babli-Zayne. Damn this Pakhi. She's exactly like her own mother, instigating her daughter against two that are not at fault. If Priya has Sammy's blood at all then let her rebel against her mother and support Zayne and Babli's relationship. I want Pakhi to get a taste of her own medicine. 😈

Aria darling this is getting interesting with every update. You simply have to continue soon! I am in love with the unpredictability of this FF and I'm really looking forward to seeing how you will weave in the confrontation of Babli and the Kapoors into this FF.

So continue soon and I'm really sorry for leaving such a long comment.

P.S.
Did I mention I was first? 😆😆😆



thank you raz your comments always makes me smile everything i write out i plan it so soon you all will hate my babli😆 wait and see you'll be shocked to know who was the shadow 😉😈😈 and signature prem needs just 1 signature 😉😉

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