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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

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WIll unres the previous one here too 😆 but Aria I'm loving this one! The twists and turns are absolutely mind blowing. Girl what are you on about not being a good writer? You're amazing! It's all in the creativity of the author and voila! You have one fine piece coming your way. I'm not sure if I like Babli or if I don't but then again, considering that she's one of the pivotal characters I'll let her hang in the shadows and let you work your magic.

I'm genuinely curious as to what's the story behind Babli's birth and Kalpi's lie to Raghav. Also, I'm quite interested in the equation between Babli and the Kapoors.

Lol, for some reason, Priya reminds me of Pakhi. Besides the fact she's Pakhi's daughter but the equation of Priya-Zayne-Babli is something that is similar to Pakhi-Raghav-Kalpi but let's see what happens.

Aria darling, I loved every bit of it and please continue soon. I'm eagerly waiting for the next update sweety!

Lots and lots of love with a big big hug!
🤗❤️

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I just realised I was first. 😲



😃 😃 I am so happy that one of the best writers around loved my work thanks so much Raz🤗
you'll get to hate babli really soon 😆 but you'll love her atfterwards😉 babli is adi's twin soon everyone will find out babli's birth she(Babli) thinks she's illegitmate 😆 and the trio its gonna be different 😛 thank you so much for loving it 😃🤗 love you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Nice dear👍🏼

But confusions suspensions r increasing m so loving ur ff dear
Pls update soon don't keep waiting long😊


thank you rani everything will be out soon and you'll hate babli soon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

I'm so loving this aria! Hmm what is the lie Kalpi have to tell and prem and neetu? What are they up too! It's confusion galore lol



Dii im happy you liked it 😃 kalpi has lied to raghav well didn't tell raghav about babl's birth hence raghav doesn't know adi isn babl's twin 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10


Sahil,Neetu and Prem smiled,Babli walked up to prem and held her ears
Babli-Please forgive me i didn't greet you,as aai was there
Prem smiled
Prem-Its okay
Babli took blessings from prem
Prem-Be happy
Babli smiled,Neetu watched on and smiled
Neetu thinks"I've got babli wraped around my finger my next move is well awaited"Neetu Smirked.
Neetu-Babli, Avi wants to take you out so he asked me.
Babli smiled
Babli-Sure why not
Avinash came downstairs both Avi and babli left.
At Night it was 10 pm everyone was worried for babli as she wasn't home yet.
Kalpi-Raghav i called her many times and she's not respsonding
Raghav hugged kalpi who was in tears,Priya watched kalpi and thought"How could babli behave so stupid mom's crying her heart out because of her"Zayne called babli's phone and thought"Voicemail again where is she i hope she's safe.Kalpi kept on crying
Raghav-Kalpi stop crying
Kalpi-Raghav you don't know babli she over does things.
Just then babli comes home everyone watched her.Kalpi runs to her and hugged her.Everyone was happy
Kalpi- babli my baby are you okay? where were you?
Babli smiled,Raghav watched Babli.
Raghav-Where were you?
Babli was nervous,Kalpi watched babli
Kalpi-Were you drinking?
Everyone watched babli shocked
Babli-No aai i was...
Raghav-Then where were you!
Babli looked away
Babli-I was with Avinash
Raghav,kalpi, Zayne and everyone was shell shocked.
Kalpi -Why were you with avinash
Babli-He carried me out Aai
Kalpi got angry.Zayne was angry and thought"Ill speak to babli about this"
Kalpi-Why didn't you tell me!
Babli-I'm sorry Aai
Kalpi-You know what babli do whatever you want ,Just don't speak to me.
Babli was shell shock
Babli-Aai what are you saying
Kalpi left
Babli-Aai!
Everyone watched her and left,Priya walked up to her
Prita-Wow babli you've hurt mom wow.
Babli took a deep breath feeling annoyed.
Priya-I'll go and talk to mom since i love her and won't hurt her like you babli.
Babli watched her ,Priya left Babli wiped her tears Babli thought"I can't tell you this one Aai its a major game here and i dont like hurting you once i get that Priya and Raghav Singhaina away from you we'll live in peace and you won't consider me Illegitimate"
In kalpi's Room priya was hugging her
Priya-mom please don't cry because of babli
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Babli does what she wants,
Priya-Why do you let her.
Kalpi-Because i love her alot priya,Raghav wasn't in her life until this month and just can't force her she's headstrong,I'll-mannered,Stubborn just like Raghav, but as usual i'll forgive her
Priya smiled.Outside Babli was sitting on the bench when raghav sat next to her ,Babli watched him
Raghav-Your mother is upset and sad you should apologize.
Babli was irritated she got up
Babli-Who are you to tell me what to do.
Raghav-I'm your Father
Babli turned and watched him Dumbfounded,she laughs
Babli-Father?You
Raghav watched her
Raghav-I'm telling you as your Father to apologize to your mother babli
Babli sat down next to raghav.
Babli-I will live in your house but you won't tell me what to do,I don't consider you to be my father.
Raghav was shocked,Babli got up
Raghav-Then who do you consider as your father.
Babli turned and watched him.
Babli-No one,I'd ratter you dead Raghav Singhaina
Raghav was Beyond shocked those words echoed in his ears,Raghav got angry and slaped babli,Kalpi who was out heard and saw everything was in tears,Babli laughed
Babli-Your slap means noting to me Raghav Singhaina
Babli left,Raghav was Devastated,Kalpi watched raghav who was in tears"I Promise you raghav you'll get your daughters love and i promise i'll bring you two closer as father and daughters love each other"Kalpi left Raghav sat down remembering the bitter words his daughter spoke 'I'll be mean to you now babli you don't deserve my love nor your mothers love,what makes you hate me so much."
Morning Came Gauri and Paakhi were in the kitchen making breakfast everyone was seated,
Kalpi-Adi where's your father?
Adi-He has a day off today so he's sleeping.
Aditya looked around and thought"Where's babli,Dad and babli are the same i have an idea."
Adiya told kalpi his plan
Adi-Mom we have to let them like each other
Kalpi smiled and saw babli walking downstairs
Kalpi-Babli go and wake up your father
Babli twisted her face then smiled and thought"Aai has forgiven me"
Babli-Okay Aai
Babli walked in raghav's room and watched him"He sleeps like a log"
Babli walked up to raghav and pokes him she kept on poking him
Babli-Raghav singhaina wake up,wake up Raghav Singhaina aai is calling you.
Adiya and Kalpi smiled seeing this
Raghav opens his eyes and watches her finger pointing at him babli watches him.both Raghav and Babli started laughing,both watched other and stoped laughing.
Raghav-What are you doing in my room!?
Babli-Aai is calling you otherwise i have no interest talking to you
Raghav-Just go!
Babli-Like if i want to see your face first thing.
Babli left,Raghav smiled"I'll teach you a lesson today"
Everyone was eating breakfast.Raghav watched babli
Raghav-Kalpi will you feed me please
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Sure
Babli was angry she watched raghav who was smiling at her
Raghav-Feed me with your hands kalpi
Kalpi did so ,Babli was angry she got up
Babli-Aai I'm going in the kitchen.
Raghav watched her and smiled
In the kitchen babli sat on the counter eating chips"He's trying to get me angry i felt like pelting the plate at him"Babli kept stuffing her face,Gauri came in the kitchen and smiled
Gauri-Babli what are you doing
Babli watched her
Babli-When I'm angry i eat
Gauri went by her and wiped her mouth
Kalpi and Raghav watched them happily
Gauri-Babli you should eat with your mouth closed
Babli smiled at her.
Babli-Your'e Raghav Singhaina's Mother,how come you're so nice
Gauri-Your'e my Granddaughter.
Babli kissed gauri
Babli-Thank you,I'll get going.
Babli saw kalpi and Raghav by the kitchen door,she watched them and left.Raghav and kalpi hugged gauri happliy.


Precap
At Night
In raghav's room
Kalpi stood behind raghav
Kalpi-Neetu Aunty is Responsible for me Hiding babli from you
Raghav turned and watched her shocked
Ragahv-What do you mean Neetu is responsibble! You hid babli from me why did you do that!
Raghav walked up to kalpi and held her shoulders tightly in anger,Kalpi was in tears.
Raghav-When We where seperated i never touched you once then...
Raghav watched kalpi.
Raghav-Its either someone else touched you or Babli is Illegitimate
Kalpi was shocked

In the Morning
Kapoors Office
Inside Prem's cabin
Neetu,Avinash,Sahil and prem are present
Neetu-I used Raghav Singhaina's Daughter to gain his property
Avi,Sahil and Prem smiled
Neetu -She trustes me and hates her father
Neetu smiles"She doesnt know that her father is innocent and i made up a lie and she's so foolish to believe me,Raghav loves kalpi more than anything he'll never cheat her but babli is so stupid she believe a stranger."Neetu laughs"As soon as babli finishes her job and gets Raghav's Signature all of Raghav's company'hotel'houses land will belong to the Kapoors"Neetu smirked
Avi-Dadi all i want is babli
Neetu-Then you'll get her soon.
Prem,sahil and Avi smiled
Neetu-Sahil and i will get the whole company,Avi will get Babli and Prem will get Kalpi.Neetu,Prem sahil and Avinash laughs
Outside the cabin a shadow stands overhearing the whole conversation and is utterly shocked.

Raghav,Sammy and Aditya are all presnt for a presentation at the Kapoors Office.

At singhaina's Mansion
Babli runs in the house colliding with zayne who catches her both shares a eyelock while Priya and paakhi watches on shocked


Please tell me your thoughts here's few spoilers 😉 Many of you might hate my Babli😆
someone will get married
Someone will get Pregnant
Babli to love Neetu more than Kalpi
Paakhi to turn Priya's mind against Babli
Zanye to confess his love for babli to priya

My chapter will end soon soon everything will end great just enjoyed the drama cause you will hate my babli for what she's going to do but you'll love her again😉








Edited by ariarai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely chapter Aria. I want to give you tons of hugs for this.🤗
I really enjoy reading your story. It is really interesting and keeps me waiting to know what happens next. You should've started writing long ago. You're an AMAZING writer. This is such a creative plot I'm just like wow...too good.👏
Now please update soon, I am waiting for your further updates to find out who was that shadow.😆
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Lovely chapter Aria. I want to give you tons of hugs for this.🤗
I really enjoy reading your story. It is really interesting and keeps me waiting to know what happens next. You should've started writing long ago. You're an AMAZING writer. This is such a creative plot I'm just like wow...too good.👏
Now please update soon, I am waiting for your further updates to find out who was that shadow.😆


I'm happy you loved it pookie 😃shadow you never know who it might be 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanuli

Best . Best...loved it👏


thanks deary 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: esingh90

Nice update. Continue soon.


thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hold the phone! Hold! The! Phone! The hell just happened?

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Wait so Babli is in with the Kapoors? O_O how did that happen? Sweets you were right...right now I'm not liking her very much at all. Well then the look on her face when she realises the truth would be absolutely priceless. 😆

Oh so she went out with Avi as well now? What happened to Zayne? I thought they had a thing.

Uh oh, with Babli missing I'm seeing a lot of the Pakhi-Kamla relationship between Priya-Kalpi. The way she's worried about Kalpi's tears and all.

Brava Kalpi! I was waiting for her to get irked with Babli in order to teach her a lesson. If Babli loves her so much then there has to be a little but of strictness from Kalpi.

Oo, ouch. That dialogue of Priya's. "i love her more and will not hurt her like you"..dang girl. Granted I never liked your mother, I'm liking you Priya. Smart mouth and equally loving.

Yaara, I can't see RagNa this upset. Moreover I can't see Babli act this way with her Dad. Damn if I was Raghav, I would've slapped her a few more times to really knock the sense into her. Bandobas ho sakta hai Aria sweety? In which Raghav and I magically switch souls for one day and I knock some respect into Babli.

The bedroom scene was cute. A bit of father-daughter understanding. I liked it.

😆 join the club Babli. I have a habit of munching on something when I get angry too.

Gauri and Babli seemed to hit it off good. Let's see how that continues.

Precap looks awesome! Will head on over to read the next update. For now, see you later alligator.
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Aria...it's different, and completely creative in a good way! At the moment I am hating Babli...and I don't like her at all! 😆 hope everything sets right soon.

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