pyara aur wohxx half of p10..done pg18

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😆New FF😳

dw nikila nd ippista r niccy........ipppista doesn't love shiv only likes him as a friend same with him.

" beta a boy is comin to see u 2day be ready by 4" dis kept on ringing in a gals head...............her back is shown...................she is fiddling with her dupatta..............her eyes r shown nervous lookin at the clock which says 2:20................her lips r murmuring...............she is really sacred.......................she hears sumone call her name.....gauri di...............she truns round.......yes it our gauri............finds her younger sister kaya calling her holding a phone.

gauri: kya howa kaya

kaya: di mahi ka phone hai

gauri gets up nd takes the phone from kaya nd in a quite voice says mahi's name......................................scene stiffs to a gal holdin a phone nd walkin…………………..her back is shown……………her eyes r filled with anger…………..her lips have a sad smile…………………she turns round its mahi................................phitte mooh........................don't talk to me............she ordered.

gauri: ok............gauri was bout to hang up..................when mahi shouts

mahi: phitte mooh tere........hey rabba is kuri ka kya kaho mai....................u duffer if i didn't want to talk to u y would i phone😆

gauri: ok.............y did u phone.

mahi: i need some explanation from u😡

gauri: wot explanation😕

mahi frowned: duffer.........2 fings........................1) a boy is comin 2 c u....u didn't tell me ...............o ofcourse u didn't😡................2) u knew i have came back from london u didn't come 2 c me😭 .......

gauri: i..i

mahi cuts her of: ooo mahi..............i forgot........duffer...

gauri:mahi.......😭

mahi:u crying.....gauri

gauri: mahi plz come here...........i am very scared.............god knowz wot da boi is like............I...I

mahi: don't worry yaar...............i will be der in 20 mins..............hangs up.

After 20 mins

we c a gal comin out of a car..................she walks 2wrds a big white mansion................on da other hand we c gauri walking in her room fiddling with her dupatta...................................the gal is inside the house nd walks 2wards a room nd opens da door.........gauri looks up.

gauri: mahi.......😭................hugs her

mahi: gauri yaar dw the boi will be gd for u if ur baba has choosen him.

gauri stops to cry...............mahi nd her make their way towards the bed nd sit down

mahi: how does the boi look..........mudan sona to hai na................gauri gives a piccy to mahi..............mahi eyes pop out nd her mouth opens😆

mahi: hey rabba...........munda toh sexy hai.................man his eyes r so innocent......................gauri looks at her best friend......" hey bagwan.......wot kind of friend is she.................here i am so sacred nd she🤢she is 2 busy checking out maybe😕 my future hubby...........can u belive her😡...........well 2 fink bout it he isn't dat bad.............shiv kapoor....emm...........gauri shiv kapoor sounds gd😳........puts her finger on her lip................wonder if he is a gd kisser😳................gauri shakes her head................wot da hell i don't know wot dis boi is like............if he smokes.........drinks...........flirts with gals aaaaa"..............she santches the piccy from mahi hand nd gives a anger look😡

mahi scared: wot........y r u lookin at me like dat

gauri😡:gets up: i am worried sick nd u r checkin him out

mahi: wot yaar if he dat hot i can't help it na

gauri stares at mahi givin da message " den u marry him"

mahi: he is cute i wouldn't mind................gauri cuts her of

gauri: mahi.......forgot bout him bein cute............HELLO......he is comin 2 c me at 4.................looks up............aaaaaaaaaaaa its 3...............i have to get ready....................gauri runs towards her cupboard nd throws bunch of saris on the bed.

gauri: aaaaa i have to get ready....get ready..........O GOD............wot should i wear............picks 3 saris nd goes 2wards her mirror..................dis blue......red..........or pink..........she finks......." wonder wot colour he likes😳"

mahi sees gauri lost nd goes nd shakes her.................kya howa

gauri: n..nothing fing help me pick yaar......................mahi looks at the sairs nd gives gauri a pink one with a stone work out on the dupatta.......gauri takes it nd gets ready..........she walks 2wards her dressing tables does a light make-up making her look more beautiful nd innocent...........her nd mahi make there way down nd bump into gauri's dad.

gauri: baba

aklo: beta have u seen da time its 4...........looks 2wards da window.............look der r here now quickly go nd make some tea......mahi beta fankoo for comin u no her she gets scared easily mahi: its ok uncle..................dey make der way 2wards the kitchen.

aklo goes 2wards the door nd welcomes the Kapoor family but doesn't find shiv😕

aklo: shiv kya hai

nikila: der...................she points to a body built man makin his way towards dem......he is wearin a half sleeves white desginer shirt with sexy written on the side in fades black 100 times.....ripped jeans......white trainers..........can't c his face........................we see he is wearin black sunglasses...............he takes dem of we see his balck sexy eyes.............a cute smile on his lips...................he is wearin a stud on his right ear..................he walks 2wards aklo nd touches his feet........aklo puts his hand on da boiz head........"geeti raho".......he gets up nd we see its shiv.........yes our shiv.

they make their way in..................gauri looks though the door nd sees shiv.........she feels butterfiles in her stomach..................shiv feels someones gaze on him nd looks up.................gauri quickly goes in da kitches leavin shiv to see her sari dupatta nd grins😃.

aklo calls gauri..................she comes out with 7 teas cups in a tray with mahi by her side who is just starin at shiv............gauri places the tray on the table nd touches nikila nd mahen feet...........before gettin up she looks at shiv who winks at her😆........gauri is shocked😲...........she goes nd sits down lookin down nd fiddlin with her sari dupatta................shiv just stares at her while she is blushin like crazy................gauri gives nikila nd mahen tea..............she makes her way 2wards shiv to give some to him.................her hands r shiverin.........when his hand touches her she drops the hot tea on him.................we hear a loud scream.

shiv: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.............gets up nd starts to jump............HOT....HOT AAAAAAAAAAAAA

gauri feels bad: i...i am sorry....i........finks..............opps aaaa gauri u duffer look wot u have done aaaaa wot shall i do now............poor sweetie in pain.......mahi is alway right u r a duffer

aklo: well dis colour looks niccy to.......😆..........gauri take shiv to ur room nd get the stain clearned................gauri noddes her head nd takes shiv up............while mahi & kaya tryin to control their laugh😃.

preview: shiv nd gauri both fall on her bed.......der lips r very close😳........mahi enters.😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏GR8 work....very long and juicy...especially the end....that was 😳 and 😍


Keep on writing FF's....at least 4 our sake 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha004

👏GR8 work....very long and juicy...especially the end....that was 😳 and 😍


Keep on writing FF's....at least 4 our sake 😉

lol xx i will try soz😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was fantastic 👏 👏 i couldn't keep my self from laughing specially at the last part where she drops the tea 😆 and when shiv winks at her 😳 i could just imagine that scene with iqbal and pallavi 😳 please update both the ff soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

that was fantastic 👏 👏 i couldn't keep my self from laughing specially at the last part where she drops the tea 😆 and when shiv winks at her 😳 i could just imagine that scene with iqbal and pallavi 😳 please update both the ff soon 😊

LOL fankooo

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo

shiv & gauri's suhag raat..........gauri is sittin on da bed tryin not to blush☺️...when she hears da door bein open.....she sees shiv nd looks down....shiv comes near her nd says in a sexy voice....."gauri" ☺️

gauri shivers.....as she feels his hand movin 2wards her blouse nd him openin her hooks☺️.......she closes her eyes.....after a while....she opens her eyes to see shiv is nowhere in da room...gauri is shocked 😲
Edited by pink_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg! shivs entrance was HOT HOT HOT! hehehehe god i still got goosebumps.....cant wait for mor....i hope mahi leaves right after she walks in on them n leaves them....alone 😳 ....but y did shiv dissappear on the suhaag raat? i hope its nothing serious.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just read the 1st part and promo!!!
sounds interesting!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!!! 👏 👏 👏 dying to read more!!!but whts with the promo dude???where did Shiv go all of a sudden??? 😲 pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum start
sounds interesting
plz cont soon

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