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Here you go..the last chapter...I thought the previous one was 9th..and this 10th...but this is the 9th..so 10th will be the epilogue...

Read away..

Ps I didn't re read it..or edit it...so please excuse all the errors...

Chapter Nueve

Old flames...renewed desire..

Take my hand...its time to jump in this fire...

I look at the mirror for the millionth time, I cant believe that's me. Dressed in a knee length red dress with sequenced straps to hold it up and a deep back, this dress is nothing short of WOW.My hair, my makeup dont't need much, the dress, the diamonds and the natural blush thinking about what next, has me looking the best I have ever looked. I look at the watch and just then the door bell rings

One more look at myself in the mirror and I almost run to the door.I stand there, the knob in my hand, and close my eyes.Taking in a breath, I try my best to calm my nerves and let it all breathe out. This is big, this is the thing of dreams, this is what I used to talk with Mindy all through our evening chatting sessions. Coming up with different possibilities, of how he would ask me on a date, what I would wear, what I'd say and do, was right here separated by this door, waiting to take me by surprise and fulfill the most basic, yet deep rooted desires of my formative years. One more breath and I open to door.

And there he is, just like that, taking away my breath, my senses and my sanity. My eyes dilate into a deeper brown as I drink his presence with my eyes...

He's not in his regular jeans and tee...He's all dressed up, standing there, complimenting my outfit perfectly.

Dressed in a classic tux with a bow tie, black and white with a red napkin to suit my dress, is the guy that...I can't form my emotions into words. At this point all I can do is to look at him, not caring about the smirk or his signature eyebrow raise he gifts me, while I unabashedly stare.

He looks dapper.Clean shaven face, hair slicked back and the suit accentuating the flattering form of his body.

I look at him and he smirks...

Hey there...he says...

Hey...

Looking...he doesn't finish the sentence, instead he does exactly what I have been doing for the past 2 minutes..He checks me out, and boy do I feel the blush getting deeper by the second. His eyes travel from my Monolo's all the way till my hair. I have shivers running down my spine and on the entire surface of my body.This is intense. He's not even touching me and yet I feel his gaze burning my bare. I try to look away but he holds my gaze..

His eyes dark, really really dark.I can undoubtedly see a storm of emotions brewing within, and it adds on and on to my state. Never knew it would be this overwhelming standing in front of the guys of your dreams on the verge of taking the first step towards the dreams I had once lived on.

He leans in closer to me, his breath fanning my exposed neck. Instinctively I close my eyes and inwardly let out a moan...

Breathtaking he whispers into my ears...Zoya you look breathtaking. This dress has nothing on you. It just makes a feeble attempt to compete with your beauty. Its just trying its hardest to match up to you.

I gulp, and inhale at the same time. I am rooted to my spot. Damn this has been me since the last few hours.Everytime he comes close, I cant react, its like I am arrested in him and he owns me completely.

Zoya, Zoya Zoya...he whispers into my ears, getting a little closer each time he says my name.Breathe,relax, let go.

I let out a sigh and he laughs, shaking his head as he recedes back to his spot..

You amaze me girl, you truly do. I cant help but be enticed by you.

Huh...I gape at his confession...What's going on with me, where is my voice, my presence of mind.Why am I acting as such...

We have the whole night. I have a lot to share, and I believe so do you...he looks at me...making sure if I know what he means...What the heck does he mean???Aaa I am losing my mind.This guy is making me insane...

Let it go Zoya, it will all fall into place very soon. But for now,would you be kind enough to let me escort you to the car, onwards our dinner date???

I manage a nod...and he offers me his hand...I place my shaky hand in his and he hold me tight, guiding me towards the elevator and then onto a black Rolce Royce Limo, me, due to my incredulity, not letting out a single word or emotion as he ushers me into the magnificent interiors of a classic vehicle.

~~

I look at her as we drive off the our desitnation.She seems completely out of sorts. She doesn't know what's going on. I wish I can tell her.I wish I can tell her that I know and that what's next is just a part of the many desires she had weaved with me in her mind when she was young. I had tracked down Mindy's phone number, and after a little coaxing she had been kind enough to spill the beans, to tell me what Zoya really desired. With so much to take in, overwhelmed by the magnitude of her emotions I had finally decided to take the first step, to start where in an ideal situation it would all have started. I was taking her back.

The car comes to a halt at the red light and we both look at each other at the same time.

Are we going into the town?? She asks..

Yes we are. I have something special planned for you.

Oh, is it a restaurant??? Which restaurant???

You'll know in time...

What if I want to know before...

I want it to be a surprise..

But what if I need to prep myself..you know mentally get into the frame of mind...

She was babbling, Heck she was nervous..

I know I should feel bad, but instead her nervousness makes me smile.

Zoya, relax and have a little faith...

I do...

You do??

Yes...

Oh Ok...that surprises me. She once again states she trusts me. Now that's a big step...

The car drives for another 15 minutes, while the both of us stay quite.

Usually on a first date such silence would be a deal breaker, but between us, even the silence talks. I can feel what she is feeling Strangely I am feeling the same.

I cant even remember the last time I had felt as such.

Excitement, blended with a giddy nervousness, mixed with a bag full of emotions I cant even start to name. This is all too surreal to be real. Who would have thought that a silly passing thought in my teens, when you like every other girl, would leave in my mind an image of a girl I had barely ever talked to. Who would have thought I would have dreams about this very girl waking up from her sleep in the middle of the night and calling out for me, telling me she has been waiting for me for the longest of times. I had never taken my dreams seriously, but seeing her sitting right here ,the not so fictitious presence of the girl from my dreams have no choice but to realize that my dreams were always trying to steer me in the right direction. It was me who was not ready all these years to accept it and look for her.

The car comes to a halt and my thought scatter. We are here.

~~

He tells me to wait inside as he steps out and opens my door.

He offers me his hand and I take it, pulling myself up and out of the car.

He shuts the door behind me and holds on to my hand, waiting for me to look up once I am done straightening myself up.

I do. I look up and I take 2 steps back.

I am standing in the premises of my school. Right in front of the school auditorium..right at the start of the path illuminated with Fairy lights leading up to the auditorium doors..

What's going on...I look all around..I try to make sense, but nothing makes sense...Finally I look at him...and my heart stops...

He holds my gaze and goes down on his knees.He's holding a white box...and looking at me.

Now this is a whole another level of shock and surprise and a whole lotta more...

I am confused...I manage to say...I honestly am...

He gives me a smile...and takes my hand closer to his lips and kisses it...

Zoya Farooqi...the girl with the cherry dress.The girl with the love quote binder, the girl with a heart shaped birth mark behind her neck...the girl who sat ahead of me in English class...I have a confession to make...

I have been dreaming about you for the past 10 years..On and off...I saw glimpses of your hazy face in my dreams...calling out to me...begging me to find you. I tried over the years to ignore these dreams, but they just wouldn't leave me. Time after time I would remember this girl back in school.She had dark black hair and deep soulful eyes. Her smile was the kind that enticed you to smile as well. Her words and ideas inspired, her presence eased the atmosphere and her quirky personality made even the dullest of moments alive with crackle...I didn't know her much...and I feel sorry even today for not making to effort, but even without knowing her, I knew somewhere deep within my soul, that she was the one...that she was the very girl I would want to inspire, me, my life, my music and my desires..

Then 4 days ago, I met you, and you brought along with you images of that very girl. I didn't remember her face, but I could still feel her presence. From the very first moment when I saw you play with my dogs, I felt a strong pull towards you. You strummed a dormant memory in my mind, everything about you is different, yet so familiar.It was confusing.I coudlnt put a finger on it.

Then I met your friend Mindy, in the school when I came for a visit.One thing led to another and there I was realizing that the girl in my dreams and the girl that has my emotions on a rollercoaster is the same girl.

What did Mindy tell you...out of everything else this is what I say...WOW...I cant believe it. Out of all the amazing things that he said, that should have me kneeling down besides him and hugging him crazy and kissing him mad, here I am asking what Mindy told him...How foolish am I..

He shakes his hand and laughs...He opens the box in his hand and looks at me...It's a wrist corsage. Adorned with a white rose and sparkly beads and tiny flowers is a beautiful corsage, something a girl gets when she is picked up by her date for the prom.

Will you go to prom with me...he asks...

I gasp and a tear falls from my eyes...I kneel to meet his height and I look deep into his eyes...

Are you for real...I ask...My tears are all set for the down pour.

As real as it gets...now do what you need to do.. he stands up taking me along.

What...

Say yes...

Yes??

Great...and he slips the corsage on my wrist...

You tricked me...

How...

I didn't say yes..

You did..

It was a question..

It's a yes...

No its not..

It is...your eyes don't lie...and I know...

It was the one thing you used to talk about all the time with Mindy...going to prom with me...

I laughed now...I laughed real hard, throwing my head back...his hand still holding mine...

WOW just WOW...I cant believe it...I look at him...all the craziness in my head has subsided, paving way for the right kinda emotions...This feels right...everything about it feels right..

I gently reach out my free hand to touch his face. I caress his smooth skin, and let out a breath...

This is for real...I say...

Yes it is..

For real real...

Yes...

So you know I had a crush on you...

Yes...

And you know all the crazy things I used to dream of???

Yes..

And you're still here??

Yes...

And you're gonna make them all come true??

Yes...

Why??

Cos Once upon a time...I read on a binder that I had borrowed from this crazy girl a quote..

Care to share...I come a little closer, enjoying the feel of his skin under hand as I continued to caress his face..

He pulls me in, twisting my hand behind my waist and crushing me into his hard chest..

He smirked...and mirrored my actions, caressing my face,

"If I am not worth the wooing, then I am definetly worth the winning''

Hmm...so you plan yo woo me??? Now I am flirting with him...and I like it...My hand reaches behind his ear, as my knuckels caresses his jaw.

I am gonna do more than just woo you...I am going to make you mine...his hands do the same caressing the sking behind my ears all the way to my jaw, down to my neck...

My eyes close...and I lean back...Both my hands move away from their places and meet behind his neck, locking into each other and holding onto him. He continues to caress me..and I give in. This feels good..

His other hand holding me tight into his embrace is busy enjoying the bareness of my back...inviting my goosebumps as his nimble fingers tease the skin awake.

Asad...I almost moan...

Zoya...he whispers closer to my ear and kisses that spot behind my ears.I moan...he continues to kiss receding down to my neck, onto my dcolletage and I cant help but pull on his hair.

He stops at my action and looks at me...I open my eyes...I know they are dazed but I don't care. His confession and my realsiation has taken away the hesitation and awkwardness I was feeling a while ago. This feels right..It seems to belong..It seems long over due...Its like I've felt this before...and I know how it feels to touch him, to kiss him and to make love to him..I know..I don't know how...but I just know...He's my passion...he's always been my passion...the one I've been waiting for...the one I have shunned every other prospect away for..

I look into his eyes and I can see the very emotion play into his eyes...he feels the same...we are finally where we are supposed to be...in each other's arms...the journey has been long, confusing and tiring..but we are here now..

Its time to take you for the prom you've always desired...he says..giving me his signature..melts your insides kinda smile..and I nod...

I follow you wherever you take me...

~~

She's in my arms. I found her. I want nothing more. I do want to make her happy, to make her smile and in time...fall in love with her and make her mine for good.. In time I will do that, I know for sure..

She's happy and elated at the efforts I made for her...The sweetheart theme, the groovy, jazzy music and the romantic ambiance has her where I want to see her all the time...In a state of blissful happiness...

She looks at me...and walks up to me. Without the hesitation that had been bothering me for the past few hours, almost making me worry, she pulls me close to her and kisses my cheek...

Thank you...thank you very very much...this is beyond what I had imagined...she says...

Its beyond cos it's real...and mark my words...sweetheart...I plan to do a lot more that is beyond your imagination...Asad doesn't do anything halfway...

Wow..you're arrogant...she teases...

You have a lot to know about me..sweetheart...

Umm Sweetheart...I like the sound of that...

I like the sound of you flirting with me...thank god..that shocked out of my socks moment was just that...a moment...I don't know what would I have done with you if it was to stay any longer...

What would you have done..she comes a little closer...teasing me with those lean fingers, tracing tiny circles behind my neck...making me lose my cool...I like this part of her.This unafraid,uninhibited part of her..

I lean in a little closer...a few inches away from her lips...and locked her gaze...

I would kiss you senseless until you snapped out of it...

I doubt that would work...Heck she's challenging me..

Sweetheart...in time you'll learn not to doubt me...I don't say things...for the heck of it...I say it when I mean it...

Prove it...

Just tell me you want me to kiss you...don't beat around...

Kiss me...she says...

With pleasure...

~~

One moment I am teasing him, flirting him and the next moment, I am speechless...

I am on fire, right that very instant his lips touch mine...

His kiss wakes me up..completley...My soul...awakens..my emotions awaken...and all my latent...potent...desires...awake with an insatiable hunger.

His kiss is gently yet, possessive...His lips warm,yet chilling me to the bone...I am in awe of the emotiong coursing through me, not settling on a definite, taking me, introducing me to everything brand new...

I kiss him back with equal fervor.I am hungry for him.Its not lust, it's the dormant desires of yesterdays, waking up and wanting to curb the growing hunger...

My hands reach up into his hair as he pulls me real close to him...Flushed to his chest, my breast heave in satisfaction...my leg grazes his up and down as the kiss deepens..

I moan as his hand that hold my waist digs into my bare skin on the back...and the other playing with my earlobe..

His presense, his affect...his emotions surround and blanket me completely...I moan...he graons...we create music with our sounds and bodies...moving in harmony, dancing in the glory of out kiss...

I surrender, I surrender completely...and he takes over..kissing me senseless...proving his point and making me sure for what I feel about him...He doubles my passion and adds his own...We kiss...until we can kiss no more...only breaking when he is ready to gloat...He's proved his point..and I have proved mine...

I wanted him to kiss me...and he did...

~~

So that does it...the story's end...I'll fill in more in the epilogue..but it wont be that long...I don't know how this story turned out to be and how much was it liked..it just happened as I went along...this update...could have been better I think..but I couldn't come to that better...I tried..I deleted and re-wrote..and this is what I got..so if I disappointed u..I am sorry...easy writing is not coming to me these days...so this is it...do leave your comments and let me know...ur thoughts on the update and the overall story...I would like to read that..for sure..

So that's it from my end...I'll try to give you the epilogue in the next few hours...but no promisies...and from next week onwards I'll work on EB...

Cya soon!!!

Edited by -StarsLinedUp- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Totally Loved the confession... 😃😳
And after that big confession she comes up with just What mindy said?? 🤣
Totally fun mixed with romantic and passionate update...
Loved it a lot... 😳☺️
The update came out really good don't worry..
Update the epilogue soon.. and make it HOT and SEXY... 😉

p.s.Longer comment later 😳
p.p.s. Did I forget to mention the kiss... ☺️ Ohh Do I need to say anything about it?? *sigh* It was ☺️❤️... I guess that would do.. 😳😉
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Res
unres...

it was as usual lovely Aashna...❤️👏

i loved it so much...the confession was PERFECT!!!!
i was in a dreamland!!

and their sweet flirtatious convo...☺️

and the kiss ☺️

it was all so WOW!!!! 👏😳

going to read the epilogue now...so, a longer comment comes there 😉🤗
love ya.. ❤️🤗
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Res 😃
Unres...

Yaar i'm still in trance ! i'm blushing like a tomato !! From the very first words of the update my goofy grin and blush isnt stifling ! And there is bro in front of me looking at me weirdly 🤣

Well alll i have to say is... Asaaadd ! ☺️ the Asad in ur story succeeded in making me blush ! ☺️

I so so so loved this chapter !!! From Asad's teasing to Zoya's shock, then his confession to her opening up and then the kiss !! This is like a fairytale i'm reading! ☺️

Waiting for the epilogur 😉
Edited by SBanoMalik - 11 years ago
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res for shree, mahu, ani, anusha :)
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Is this last chapter 🤔
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Okay people..bye now..see you all later,
will hopefully join u all in spamming on monday/ Tuesday 😳

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Aww Asad is so adorable and loved the way he surprised Zoya and recreated the prom...beautful story Aashna..

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