ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14) - Page 59

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy! I made it in the first page 🥳

Awww! The update was a mark of pain, love, adorableness, understanding, trust and shocks. It's just like a blend of all correct ingredients in a much awaited cuisine. While this update for us was no less than the awaiting cuisine I was talking about, the others are the important ingredients making it as delicious as it could be. LOL!! I sounded so much of a foodie right? 😆

First the way you have shown the scarred teenage boy hiding behind the facade of a grown up man, his pretense of masking them all inside even though he still wants all the love he is bring deprived of, it was very touching. He couldn't speak them out and the same time he don't want anyone to poke into his dark life and get scarred like him too. It's such a complicated ASR acting all up hiding Arnav. 😒

Then his warning cum caring towards the butler of their home. It's too cute to not be noticed. The only time when Arnav tries to show up pushing ASR. 😃

And GLM scene is a whole different one. Khushi is too adorable for her own very good. They would have the world's trust on Arnav, but still knowing the shocks and confusions Arnav is getting from them makes it totally interesting. He isn't the one who is accustomed to this much causality around him other than the persons he categorize as his family. Payal and Khushi sure as hell are going to make Arnav mad, not of shocks, I'm sure, with their immense trust and love in him and towards him. 😉

And finally I'm seeing Rahul in the update. Ya real real Rahul not in thoughts Rahul. And the last about him was something that raised the respect for him. He is one of a golden man anyone can get. When Arnav was correct that only Anjali herself should realize what she lost, I believe she also needs a push to actually bring herself up and talk to Rahul which Rahul cannot give her. 🤔

I really loved the bonding explained between Arnav and Rahul so much. Their relationship is based on the understanding. Though made on the difficult circumstances their bond never left the thread of understanding. I'm really looking forward for their conversation now. I'm sure the coming is going to be like a father Rahul and son Arnav conversation. I'm really am waiting for the Tuesday night to come. 😳

And do take care Vera. Babysitting the number of kids and teens you're saying is really a tough job, I know. So do take your time. Don't make it too hectic for yourself. We will wait. 😊

Lots of love to you Vera. Hugs and Kisses! 🤗
Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's Awesome update..Loved Arshi cute moments..Gradually, Arnav is falling for Khushi..Loved the whole part A..eagerly waiting for part B..thanks for pm :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope it works out for anjali superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES, will comment together for both updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳My Place 😉 WOnderfull Update Candy 👏 Do i need to say Anything ?? Offcourse No , simply I have Words to Do justice with this fabulous Chapter .. 😳
In this chapter i had seen inSecure Child who want nothing but love and just To see his family Happy and Love eachother .. Payal and khushi is so sweet man I am loving the way they are treating Arnav so sweetly :) ..
Rahul is just another person i adore after Srnav and Khushi so selfless creature awwe ..
eagerly waiting :*
love you ❤️
Edited by beenish248 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awsome...
loved reading...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all take care of yourself dear!!

awesome mind blowing update(10stars⭐️)

with all this hectic schedule you are manage to write and update hats off to you👏

the way Arnav came to his di room before starting his day,is so loving gesture

he got flowers for K and P and went to meet them,

the act of K and then P talk made Arnav felt so much happy and he was amazed the way these 2 ladies are doing all the things he had asked for.. he is still not able to recall..

the way Khushi understood and read him amazing..

the way Khushi thank him so emotional and lovely👏

like Rahul-Arnav relationship..

eagerly looking forward for their conversation and ofcourse to nice arshi time as always

thanks a lot for taking time to update the story then sending the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...
arnav is so cuteee...
loved the way u have portrayed rahul's character...
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
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take ur time dear...update whenever u r free...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsommmiiieee itz damn amazing...matlab whn wud u stop amazing me with such awsom chpz...it strts with Arnav wnt 2 Anji & his thoughts on his di..how he regrds n wishes dat his di hadn't gotten 'Shaq ki bemari' 4m his mom..i feel bad 4 situation Arnav is in, den he wnt 2 GH & man da speed Gupta sisters r inveading his lyf, does he realiz it? Hahaha khushi stealing cookies dat was so cute & dat breakfast scene was so sweet, lolz he doesn't wnt 2 face warth of da 2most soft ladies he met..den whn he dropd dem & da momnt Khushi shared with him was so sweet, his emotions r cmz 2 b in mess 4 him. Rahul's intro & i realy luvd da guy..i mean man he is true gentlman & Rahul's POV made me luv Arnav more & hate n kick Akash all da more seriourly!! I can't wait 4 Arnav-Rahul convo..Arnav wud surly share bout Khushi, i wnna knw wht POV Rahul wud hav. Btw just thought by ny chnc Rahul's son Arul name kept with Arnav-Rahul name or just co-incidnt? Nyhoo nxt update soon & best of luck with babysitting

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