Akdha OS: ||~Mujhe Teri Zaroorat Hai~||IMP. Note on Page 21

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Hii Guys!
So I've tried my hands at something new... And the result is this OS.😳
As you might know... I write ff's but I feel its easier to write them,reason being we have many more chapters to convey the emotions that we need to convey. But in OS, We have a single shot to convey our feelings😊
A big credit to Tahni di... I saw her signature one day.. When it was Mujhe Teri Zaroorat Hai.. and an Akdha pic.. So I got the idea from there and the next day I watched Ek Villain.. And that song touched my heart so I decided to write an OS..THIS IS THE SURPRISE I WAS TELLING YOU ALL ABOUTšŸ˜›šŸ˜³
Hope you all will like it!
||~MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI~||

"Have... Have you seen her?" He asked, breathing irregularly. He showed his phone to a stranger showing him HER picture.

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein

He asked a lot of people,all different. But their replies,all the same.

" Nope. Maine ise nahi dekha" The stranger said in a humble tone,understanding the situation.

He was dejected,once again. How.he wished he'll get atleast SOME clue about her

Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai


"Yaad kariye. Shayad kahin koi ise le jaa raha ho yaa kuch bhi. Dekhiye ye bahut time se ghar nahi aayi hai, I am worried about her" He pleaded him to recall.

The stranger was touched by his concern towards the young lady.He gently put his hand on his shoulder and said," Dont worry bro,wo mil jaayegi. Bhagwaan hai naa" He smiled,trying to make him feel better,but all in vain

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya


He ran like a mad towards an appartment. He opened the door with spare keys and stormed inside.

The first thing he saw was a beautiful portrait of her hanging on the wall. A lone tear escaped his eyes as he saw her innocent carefree smile.

Her and her best friend Moti's picture was also kept on a side table. He picked it up and caressed her lovely face.

Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai


"JODHAAA..." Jalal shouted at the top of his voice,before breaking down completely.He was crying, second time because of HER.

He went to the balcony of Jodha's appartment. As the cool breeze kissed his handsome face, he recalled their confession.

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai
Aaa..


FLASHBACK ~AKDHA CONFESSION~

"Haan Jodha, kya hua kyun bulaya?"Jalal asked, his tone making his happiness of meeting her evident.

"Wo Jalal,Wo" Jodha said, not turning to face him,still leaning on the railing of balcony.

"Wo wo kya Jodha" He said,coming closer to her.

Jodha sensed that he is coming closer. Her heart was beating rapidly. She smirked, it was the time to put her plan in action.

She turned around and saw Jalal standing really close to her. She moved away and said," Jalal I'm going back to Pune."

Jalal was shocked beyond words. Firstly,they were the best of friends, maybe more than that. How could she hide it from him? And secondly, he didnt want her to go away from him.

"What?Ye tum kya keh rahi ho Jodha?Tumhari studies ka kya?Aur ye achanak Pune kyun?"

He held her shoulders gently,not wanting to hurt her.

" Jalal wo mumma ki tabyat theek nahi hain. She wants me to get settled in life. Tum jante ho na i cant resist her"

" Whats wrong with aunty? She wants you to get married,come on Jodha you are just 22 now!" He was getting shocks after shocks.

" I know. But if she is saying this, to kuch soch ke hi kahengi naa" Jodha was more than happy seeing his reaction but maintained her happiness.

" Tum kisi aise insaan se shaadi karogi jise tum janti bhi nahi?? Hun?" He was feeling totally shattered. Only he knew how much courage it took to control one's breakdown. He left her and said," Jodha,yaar I know tujhe love marriage karni hai!! Then why yaar!" He was on the verge of breakdown.

Jodha felt the same as Jalal,she could sense his pain masked by anger and frustuation easily.

She replied wittily." Jab koi pyaar karne wala hai hi nahi, to love marriage kaise hogi Jalal?"

This young girl was giving him shock after shock.

" Oh come on Jodha. Kitni bacchon waali baatein kar rahi ho tum. what if koi tumse pyaar karta hai lekin keh nahi pata?"

"Agar usme confess karne ki himmat nahi hai, to vo humare rishte ko nibhaa bhi nahi paayega"

Jalal got her point. She wants someone who can take a stand for her and their love.He was lost in his thoughts when Jodha said," Agar wo 5 minutes mein apne dil ki baat nahi kehts hai to I'll leave for Pune. I've done the packing already (she pointed to a suitcase)"

5 minutes passed by. Jalal was immersed in his thoughts while Jodha waited for him to say those three magical words. Getting no response,she decided to play her last trick.

" Fine then. I'm going Jalal,good bye!" She picked up her suitcase and opened the door and was about to leave when Jalal said," I love you Jodha"

Her mission was a true success!! She threw the suitcase and immediately embraced Jalal tightly.

" I love you too Jalal" She whispered in his ears. Jalal lifted her up as Jodha giggled innocently. He was holding her from her tiny waist.

Jodha played with his tresses while Jala lived the moment. His lady love,his life was in his arms,confessing her love. Could life be any better?

FB ENDS

By now Jalal had lost his control over his tears. He sat on his knees,holding a picture of Jodha.

" I love you Jodha. Please vapas aa jaao" He was totally broken. His love,his life had been kidnapped. And all he could do was to hold her picture and cry his heart out. Al he could do was to wander in the streets asking each amd every soul whether they have seen her.

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain


Jalalludin Mohammed,26, is the son of Humayun Mohammed, the founder of the great buisness empire, The Mughals... He was a carefree young lad till he met his ladylove,Jodha Singh,22, the daughter of a humble employee Bharmal and a modern and optimistic housewife Mainawati.

Life changed completely ever since he met with her. It was a true love at first sight.

FLASHBACK

"Haan Ammi. I've got 95% in my first year exams. Abbu se kahiye he doesnt need to worry for me. I'm fine ammi! Khuda hafiz" Jalal said,struggling to manage his phone on his shoulders as he carried two heavy bags.

" Papa!!! Papa I've topped my exams!! You've got to give me a bigg party when I return to Pune! Okay?" The ever chirpy Jodha informed her parents of her scoring 98.5% in her exams. She was also in the same shop as Jalal was, only difference was She was with Moti and he was alone.

"Moti yar mujhe pinch kar I cant believe it!! I've aced my exams!! Yippe!" Jodha exclaimed. Moti knew how smart and optimistic Jodha is, behind her bubbly and childlike nature.

"Gosh yaar Jodha! You're seriously a book worm!!" Moti chuckled.

"Yes,that I am." She said before bumping into a person.

"Sorry" She said,as she bent down to pick his things,which now lied on the floor,scattered.

"Its okay. I'll do it" Jalal said, as he bent down to help her. Somewhere he felt a connection with her.

Jodha finally collected all his things and got up. As she did this,the hair which were covering her face were removed by her fingers, unknowingly helping Jalal to see her face.

"God! She's so beautiful!" Jalal exclaimed, unfortunately for him,those words slipped out of his mouth.

"Excuse me?" Jodha asked, slightly confused by the sudden compliment.

"No..Nothing" He shuddered,abruptly ending the thoughts in her mind.

FB ENDS

"Its all because of me. Buiseness rivalry ke naam pe they kidnappes my Jodha! They'll surely pay for this gustakhi!" The Mughal blood in him was boiling to take revenge,revenge for his Jodha... His heart was worried for Jodha... how was she? Kahin use kuch??

Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai



So how was it???

I'm really a novice in writing and you know today's writers day so its a tribute to all the writers on IF as well as worldwide...You guys are doing a great job!šŸ‘

Guys.. please hit likes and leave your comments and suggestions.. It really helps me to write more!😳

Regards,

AnushkašŸ¤—



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