JaGan-SS: The Three Musketeers (updt pg:2)

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Hello guys.. writing something after a long timešŸ˜›
I know you must have been thinking that yeh ladki apni FF hi update time pe nahi karti then why a SS again.. something doesn't have answer right..😳 this is one such thing..
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We all were disappointed as well as frustrated that JaGan wedding was not done the way we expected so, let cv's do whatever they want. I am here writing a story in which, The Three Musketeers - Nandu,Mannu and Abhi will make our wish come true..😳
Well consider that seven years passed , Nandu is now grownup, Mannu around nine years old and abhi is seven years old.
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Chapter 1
Everyone in the Haveli gathered and stood infront of Abhi who was crying badly. Mannu and Nandu were trying to console him but ofcourse Abhi was xerox xopy of his father's childhood version hence he dint paid attention to them or their words.

Dadisa was keen to know what exactly was the reason behind this endless cry.. "Chora what happened why you are crying like that? Did your baapusa scold you?" she enquired but her questions were unanswered. Sumitra offered him his favourite chocolate but Abhi refused it too giving a shock to everyone in the home.Abhi loves chocolates and him rejecting chocolate that too his favourite was definetly a shocker. "Let Jagya come he is the only person who can console him.. bilkul baap pe gaya yeh chora.." dadisa smiled and left the hall to do evening aarti.

Jagya and Ganga decided to return to haveli, he took out his car,"Let me drive" Ganga said sternly.

"Order or request..? jo bhi ho, ok you drive, I am totally tired.." Jagya said and handed her keys.

" Dr.saab you can't just neglect your health try to take some rest.." she said in a low tone.

"Oh! C'mon Ganga our Hospital is now Super-Speciality you know how hard we worked to develop it.. Now that it has been completed I can't let go off my responsibilities right?" he said.

"Of-course I do know but that doesn't mean that you have to take this much stress, you know how many months it has been since we have visited any place or celebrated any festival? Our children, they are very much understanding, thank god. What if they were like you Stubborn?" she pouted.

He smiled at her words, he love the way his wife taunts him for silly reasons out of care and concern. "Stubborn!! Me? "Jagya asked her though he knew the answer. True it was he had to be stubborn enough to achieve his goal. He kept himself busy all these years but he always regret that he couldn't spend much time with his children. He started the work two years back and successfully completed his task of providing all the advanced and sophisticated facilities to the people of Jaitser. Jaitser developed a lot in all these years but few things didn't change the warmth of people and the bond every person shares with the other.

Jagya opened the window and made some fresh air enter the car. He was so relaxed. He wanted to do something to cheer up his wife's mood.

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Nandu and Mannu sat down, "Nandu Bhaisaa, Abhi ka kya kareen?He is crying because he is not in the photographs in the marraige of mom and dad. You understand what I mean? There is no way we can solve his problem. He saw me and he saw you.. He asked me where was he at that time.. He started crying.. Uff!!" Mannu told Nandu.

"Mannu why did you show the pics yaar.. You shouldn't have done that." Nandu was confused. "Abhi is very sensitive he takes everything so seriously, once sonething sits in his mind he doesnt let it go.." Nandu thought and asked Mannu why did he took the photographs out.

"Mom and Dad's Wedding Anniversary na.. I thought of making a collage, I want to make something special for them." Mannu answered. He folded his hands and taunting himself at his stupidity.. Mannu wanted his mother and father to take pause in their daily routine, their life turned so mechanical hence he thought to change it at least on the special day." I just want to celebrate their Anniversary.."he sighed in a low tone.

"Love you Mannu!!"Nandu screamed out of joy and hugged him. "Kya?" Mannu was confused. He understood that his brother would have got an idea..

"Let's make them married again.., roka,haldi,sangeet, mehendi, baraat and shaadi.. " Nandu said. He has no plans yet, marriage is such a big thing . His brother had a simple temple wedding, Nandu as a brother of Jagya and small friend of Ganga jiji now bhabhi always wished for their grand wedding which remained as a wish. But he was thoughtful; the doubt of rejecting the proposal bothered him.

"You think they will agree.." he said the words because his bhabhi and bhaiya turned so busy these days.

"I will make sure bapusa says 'yes' " said Mannu.
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Jagya was relaxing on his easy chair. He had a habit of drinking tea and to listen songs the old melodies on radio which he gifted Mannu. Mannu and Jagya shared similar tastes when it comes to music and food. Mannu knocked the door, "Come in Mannu.. This is your fav song isnt it?" jagya asked. "Our fav.." Mannu added and smiled.
Mannu was tensed, he assured his brother but he himself had no confidence to ask his father about this plan. He knew his mother will shut him down with excuse and only person who can make his mother understand and let things work is his father so gathered all courage and asked, "Bapusa hum matlab means.. I mean, we that means, Nandu bhaisaa, me and Abhi want to celebrate your wedding anniversary.." .

"Cool but isn't this suppose to be a surprise.. I mean a small party can be done in the house itself." jagya said.

"No.." mannu said. Jagya was surprised at mannu's words. "No.. Matlab? What do u mean by 'no' mannu?" jagya asked.
" Look dad, you may think we have gone mad but you know, every ritual will be celebrated once again, I mean rokha, haldi, sangeet, mehendi, shaadi. Please bapusa don't say no please." Mannu looked at him so innocently. Mannu never asked anything big since his childhood his likes were simple, this was the first big thing he asked and Jagya also wanted to do something special for his wife.He said "Ok."
Mannu smiled and the other two who were just behind the door entered the room and three brothers had a team hug.

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link -> chapter 2
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How is it? pasand aaya shall I continue?
comments are most welcome😳
Edited by sush_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Sush meri partner A hug šŸ¤—Awesome first chapter I loved it ā¤ļø This is my dream Don't know how many times i wish to see it in a day but thanks to your SS i can see it in my imagination now with your awesome writing helping me in that
please continue😳 and update soonšŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Sush ..Loved the idea and first chapter 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved loved it I loved the idea and first chapter continue Sush will love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sush always wanted to see a big marriage on the show for JaGan...thanks for fulfilling it.. a very nice idea n a lovely start...do continue. Thanks
Neha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sush its so nicešŸ‘, i just wanted to see it in BV but it failed and i had only imagined, Thanks sush for that nice part😊. The happiness when i read heavenly soulmates was unimaginable and i had the same happiness when i read thisšŸ¤—. Thanks yaar. I want the second part soon and if you have time update the next part of heavenly soulmates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidra08

@Sush meri partner A hug šŸ¤—Awesome first chapter I loved it ā¤ļø This is my dream Don't know how many times i wish to see it in a day but thanks to your SS i can see it in my imagination now with your awesome writing helping me in that

please continue😳 and update soonšŸ˜†

updating... sid
i forgot about this one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I totally forgot about this SS. So please excuse this lazy girl againšŸ˜›

I was not active on IF, my health was not so good and then exams followed so I took an off from social sites..
In this part , Dr.saab will manaofy his sherni.. the preparations will start from next part..😃
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Chapter 2:
"Ok so this is a plan of the three Musketeers.." Jagya smiled looking at the trio.
Abhi ran into Jagya's arms. "World's best papa.." he shouted out of joy. Nandu and Mannu were happy to see their little brother happy. "Bhaisaa toughest task is to convince Bhabhi.." Nandu reminded Jagya.
"Everyone are scared here.. I mean scared of my wife not me.. Looks like I have to be strict from tomo..." Jagya was interrupted by the trio with a big "No". He laughed.
Mannu and Abhi were kids but Nandu's reaction was worth watching. Jagya laughed, "Nandu I never knew you are afraid of your Bhabhi." Jagya started to tease Nandu. "Bhabhi is so strict bhaisaa, one person is enough to keep us under control.. Please you don't turn out into a Hitler.."he said and bit his tongue.
"Hitler Bhabhi.."Jagya laughed out "Ok.. okay but I am not sure of What she will say.. I will message you guys.. Don't have high expectations, if she says 'no' don't be heart-broken." jagya said.
Nandu took the two to his bed-room. His brothers were still kids as elder brother he had to take care of the complete responsibilities of the marriage if his bhabhi agrees.
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Ganga was completely in her sherni mode. The nurse agency has send their worst ever trained nurses who makes excuses to work and the only thing they do correctly on time is taking a break for every two hours.
"No Mr.Singh you cant just send these people to work here, they are totally irresponsible. You know how much we helped you but we dint expect this from you." she said it loud and clear. Jagya heard her voice and expected that she is not in a good mood. She cut the call and looked furious. He looked at her, she was fuming yet she looked beautiful in her simple green saree, the big round eyes were scanning the ground and she was lost in thoughts.
"Dont take it so seriously Ganga, I have talked to Lal about this, he said he will arrange, you just sit down and relax," he placed his arm around her shoulder and comforted her. She gently placed her head on his shoulder, "you know dr.saab.. I feel so happy and relaxed when you are around me." she looked at him with utmost love and respect pouring out of her wonderful eyes. He was so touched with her words. started, "But I haven't done anything remarkable to you. You know not even a perfect marriage." he said.
"Marriage!!"she exclaimed. "Hmm remember our marriage was so simple... You deserve a grand wedding with all the traditional rituals celebrated royally."he said.
"Wow after these many years why you are suddenly saying this..."she asked him. She was quick at understanding things . "I am happy with the marriage it was sweet and simple."she continued.
"But you know this the only thing which comes in my mind whenever our Anniversary approaches. I shouldn't have put sindoor like that. Wish I controlled my feelings, convinced everyone in the house. Then propose you and marry you. How nice it would have been but alas look what I have done, I spoiled our fairy-tale type wedding with my own hands."he said as if he is disappointed and made a puppy face.. He was acting good and she looked confused which was exactly what he wanted but before he starts his next round of dialogues She held his hands in hers and made him sit on the bed, she sat infront of him facing him directly,
"Dr.saab why you are thinking like this? Why are you blaming yourself. You know never in my life I thought I will meet a person like you, you have changed me completely . You know what a woman expects from her husband is his love,trust and support. You supported me that day when people questioned my character , that's why you took that drastic step. There is nothing to blame, tell me if we can change that incident, No right? we cant change the past so leave it. Take it out of your mind." Ganga said.
Jagya couldn't describe his feelings he was over-whelmed after hearing all this from her,thought which the trio planted in his mind grew stronger and firmer, "Ganga lets marry again." he said.
"What!?! Dr.saab you are alright? Marry again?" she laughed .she was confused as well as surprised."You are joking aren't you?" she was in total disbelief. Jagya dint want to disturb her, he dint want to force her but he want her to say 'yes' . He cupped her face with his palms , "Look at me Ganga, please dont say no.. "he said.His sincere request couldn't be denied. To make him happy she cant put her life on stake, one 'yes' doesn't matter at all but grand celebration and guests, mainly their children will be present and doing everything in front of them will be a bit unusual."What people will think? It is not even like we have completed silver jubilee or golden jubilee.. It will be so embarrassing." she pouted.
"Ok from your side it is ok right? You are just afraid of the people around. Believe me Ganga they will be happy to hear this, you just take rest. I will handle everything" he said.

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Nandu received sms that Ganga agreed. Nandu passed the news to his brothers and all had a team hug. "ok so you people sleep,its late now.." Nandu made them sleep and he sat down to make the guest list. He only wanted to call all the near and dear but the guest list went on.
He called up Varun and Shagun his two cousins to help him out.Varun was not only his cousin but also his best buddy he promised him that he will come within two days as he had some work to sort down whereas Shagun is a bookworm she was making excuses abt the classes she has to attend, she dint promise but she said she will try her best to come.
Nandu looked at his brothers who were sleeping peacefully especially Abhi who almost created a hell upside down scene today in the Haveli with his never ending cry.
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next day morning:

Jagya sat besides Dadisa and he started to explain about the discussion which he had with Ganga last night . Ganga went to the kitchen and put on the stove to prepare tea. She was stealing glances to check everyone's reaction. All were pleasantly surprised and looked happy at Jagya's words. Nandu said the words loudly so that Ganga can hear it, "I will take all responsibilities,, we will celebrate it grandly."
Ganga felt relieved looking at the positive reactions. She was much a shy person and she had many doubts about the reaction of family but glad everyone approved without thinking for a second.
Nandu went to receive Varun and Shagun called him that she is coming to attend the celebrations.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My laziness partner don't need to ask forgiveness because she gave such a cute update 😃
Loved it ā¤ļø

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