Episode 133 (07-02-2014) (Wednesday)

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi all,

This is episode 133. Do Enjoy!!

Recap - Teej is here! The Ranawats are busy with decorations, preparation of sweets (laddoos), the women folk, busy with fasting. All is fine, until Mohini meets the Sisodia's to dicuss "buisness". She tricks Samrat, tags him along and introduces him as a probable bachleor, who gets to meet Shatabdi, the daughter of the Sisodia's. She eventually blurts out to Samrat that they are having talks of getting hitched and not discussing embroidery. Rudra is still on to the investigation - finding out about the attacker/stalker/mysterious guy and gets called into his office.

Scene 1 The episode starts with Samrat and Mohini battling it out, why he was tricked into meeting the Sisodia's and how he is happy with his married life and she needs to back out.

Kindly bear with absence of snaps. Dialogues alone!!

Samrat - M.. Maa sa, main Shaadi-shuda hoon!

Samrat - M.. Maa sa, I am happily married.

Mohini - Shaadi - Shuda!! Ek banjhadi ke saath! Ek aisi aurat ke saath, jo kabhi, bapu sa kehne wala thaari godh mein nahi daal sakti! Jo manhoos hai! Badkismat hai, thaare liye!

Mohini - Happily - married!!? With a banjadi (sorry no idea, definitely a mean word , a swear-in of some sort) To such a woman, who never, will be be able to bear a child, place a child in your lap who would call you a father! Who is sinister, is a bad omen for you!

Samrat glares at her and she changes her tone.

Mohini (trying to sound apolgetic) - Mhaare bete ke vans ke dipak na jale, yeh baat mhane kabhi nahi bardaas hogi, Samrat.

Mohini - My son's future, not able to become a father, I simply cannot bear that, Samrat!

Sumer - Haan, bhai sa. Maa sa, sahi toh keh rahi hain. Matlab, bhabi sa acchi hain, lekin vo..

Sumer - Yes, brother.. I agree with Maa sa. Meaning, Bhabi sa is okay, but she..

Sumer crosses a line and Samrat responds.

Samrat (strictly,) - Beech mein bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Chota hai chota hi rah!

Samrat - Don't you dare speak inbetween. Your are small, stay so.

Samrat (to Mohini, finally standing up for Mythili) - Maa sa, aap apni bahu ke baare mein baat kar rahi hain, mhaari patni ke baare mein baat kar rahi hain. Vishwaas nahi hota ki, yeh sab..

Samrat - Maa sa, you are talking about your daughter -in-law, you are talking about my wife. Unbelievable! I cannot imagine all of this..

Mohini as usual, seeming disinterested as he goes on.

Samrat - Lekin yeh, yeh kabhi nahi hoga! Aap kismat ki baat kar rahi hai, na? Khush kismat voh pati hot hai, jiski patni, uske har sukh aur dukh mein, uske saath hoti hai. Use pyaar karti hai. Mhaari jaisi kismat kissi ki nahi hai, Maa sa. Voh pyaar karti hai, mhaare se.

Samrat - But THIS, it's never going to happen! And your talking about destiny, right? He is a happy/satisfied/lucky husband, when his wife, offers her support in both his happiness and sadness, who loves him dearly. None has a lucky fate as mine. She is in love with me.

Mohini seems to be fuming with hearing praises about Mythili.

Samrat - Main itna bata doon ki, mhaari patni aur main, bahut khush hain. Phir chahe, mhaare ko bapu bulane wala ho, ya na ho.

Samrat - Let me just mention one thing, My wife and me, are very happy. Even if, there isn;t anyone to address as me as father!

Mohini is all silent, listening to all he has to say, with her blood boiling even further.

Samrat (raising all valid questions while mohini is left baffled) - Aur vaise bhi, aap kehte hain ki, Mythili mhaare bacche ki Maa nahi ban sakti? Kya, yeh jo ladki aayegi, yeh mhaare bacche ki ma bann sakti hai? Kya yeh log apne taraf se certificate denge, ki yeh baccha paida kar sakti hai? Voh bhi, ladka?

Samrat - And by the way, you are the one right, who says Mythili cannot become the mother of my child? Then, wll this girl, will she be able to become the mother of my child? Will, these people, from their side, give away a certificate, that she is able to concieve? And too, a boy?!

Samrat storms off, leaving behind Sumer in deep thought.

Sumer - Vaise, Maa sa? Yeh bhi ho na, toh mumkin hai, na? Nahi? Nahi, vahi certificate wali baat!

Sumer - Actually, Maa sa? This could also happen, right? Don't you think so? No, that certifcate comment.

She is pretty angry with him trying to lighten the mood, she hits him back and decide to move on.

Mohini - Chal!

Mohini - Walk! Move along..

Sumer - Sahi toh hai..

Sumer - Correct only na..

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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Scene 2

Paro is busy helping out Sunheri adjust her Saree,

Sunheri (tired, probably is fasting) - Kab aayenge?

Sunheri - When will the come?

Paro (holding her cheeks) - Aayenge!

Paro - They will come dear!

Mythili - Sunheri baisa? Aap jaakar Pooja kar lijiye. Hum dono ko, apne-apne pattiyon ke liye rukna padega.

Mythili - Sunheri dear? Why don;t you go ahead with your Pooja. Both of us, we have to wait for our respective husbands.

Paro smiling, having Mythili talk abt their husbands, coming soon.

Sunheri(excited, jittery) - Sacchi! Main vaise bhi bahut thak gayi hoon. Mhaare pet mein, subah se kuch nahi gaya.

Sunheri - Really! Honestly, I am quite tired. Nothing seems to have entered my stomach from the start of the day! (Meaning she too is fasting and is feeling hungry)

Mythili (teasingly, pulling her leg) - Haan. Kitni thak gayi hongi na, aap. Saara din, sona kitna mushkil hota hai, na?

Mythili - Yes. You must be very tired. Sleeping the whole can be tough, right?

Sunheri - Chp.. Vahi toh..

Sunheri (unknowninly agrees) . Yup.. Seriously..

Mythili - Kamar toh na, aakdi?

Mythili - Your back didn't stiffen, right? (Mocking the number of hours Sunheri slept)

Sunheri - Bhabi sa..

Mythili (smiling/laughing) - Jaayiae, pooja kijiye.

Mythili - Go on, go ahead with your pooja.

Sunheri - Haan.

Sunheri - Yes.

Sunheri is about to leave for pooja, but is reminded of something.

Sunheri - Par, baaki sab kahan hai? Bapu sa, nahi dikahyi de rahe, Tau ji sa bhi nahi hai.

Sunheri - But, where is everybody else? Bapu sa, is not seen. Even Tau ji sa is not here..

Mythili gently smiles.

Sunheri (now to Paro) - Aur Maa sa, ab tak vapas nahi aayi?

Sunheri - And Maa sa, she hasn't returned yet?

Paro (answering all of Sunheri's questions) - Voh Kaku sa ne kaha ki, aaj ghar ki auratein, choola nahi jalayengi. Iss liye, Kaku sa aur Bapu sa, dono khana lene gaye hain.

Paro - That Kaku sa said that, today, all the ladies of this house are not supposed to use the kitchen. (Meaning they are to rest, as they are fasting) That is why, both Kaku sa and Bapu sa have gone to get some food.

Sunheri -

Will get back to it in a moment, lost content, an internet connectio glitch!!

Moving on.

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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Scene 3 - The women, all get ready for the Pooja and share a light moment.

Sunheri, initially starts with the Aarti and starts mumbling, with Mala trying to hear/understand.

Sunheri (praying) - Bhagwan ji, aap bhi na, bas, mhaare ko bolte hi rehte ho, rajkumar ko bhejte toh nahi. Har baar (something.. )

Suheri (sweetly complaining) - God, you too, na! Everytime, you keep only saying things, you never seem so send my Prince. ..

Mala (eyeing Sunheri, sweetly) (to Paro) - Kya maang rahi hai, yeh?

Mala - What is she praying/asking for?

Paro - Vardi wala, pati.

Paro - An officer/Man in uniform, as a husband.

Mala - Haw!

Mala - Really!

Both start smiling and giggling. Mythili too joins in, having overeard Sunheri's sweet prayers.

Mythili -He.. He.. Haan, thayi ji sa. Mhaari nanand rani ka iklauta sapna!

Mythili (to Mala) - Yes, Aunty. The only dream of my sweet sister-in-law!

Sunheri - He.. He..

All of them start laughing, smiling.

Sunheri (not ashamed) - Haan. Vardi wala.

Suheri - Yes, an officer. (A man in uniform)

All the wonderful women, seek blessings of God and finish the Pooja.

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Scene 4 - Mythili, Paro, Mala and Sunheri are whiling away time, until the gentlemen arrive. They use swings to enjoy the time, and all of a sudden the lights go off. Sunheri accidentally falls down and they all share a light moment.

The swings are beautifully adorned with orange, pretty flowers and Sunheri is busy enjoying the taste of a laddoo with Mythili rocking her on one of the swings.

Sunheri - Arre! Aap log kha nahi kha sakte, toh kya ho gaya? Aakar jhoola toh, jhulo mhaare saath!

Sunheri - Oh! If you people cannot eat, what's the big deal? Come on, atleast sit on the swing and sway.

Paro goes forward, sits on a swing and Mala stands beside her.

The current goes off!

All of them are worried.

Mala - Arre! Kya hua?

Mala - Oh! What happened!?

Mythili - Yeh bijli kahan chali gayi?

Mythili - Where has the current gone?

Paro is quite worried looking here and there and then..

Sunheri - AAhhh!!.

She falls of the swing, the contents of her plate scatter.. Mythili is busy giggling, smiling.

Sunheri - Bhabhi sa, aapne to mhaare ko dhadaam se gira diya.

Sunheri (innocently) - Bhabhi sa, you let me fall down..

Mythili - Ha.. Ha.. He.. He...

Sunheri (to Mythili) - Has kyun rahi ho? Haath to do!

Sunheri - Why are you laughing? Give me a hand! (Trying to get up)

Mythili (helping Sunheri get up) - Ha.. Ha.. Lagi toh nahi?

Mythili - Ha.. ha.. Are you hurt?

Sunheri - Ah. ah.. Haan!

Sunheri - Ah.. oh.. Yeah right!

Mythili - He.. He.. Main mombatti lekar aat hoon. Aur fuse bhii check kar leti hoon.

Mythili - He.. He.. I'll just get the candles. And will check the fuse too..

Sunheri - Main bhi aati hoon, aapke saath. Ruko.

Sunheri - I will also come with you. Wait.

They both leave with Paro and Mala alone at the swings, in the darkness, with the moonlight shining over the aangan.

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Scene 5 - Paro is eager to help Mythil and Sunheri. Mala is worried about Paro's safety, she is tries to prevent Paro from moving anywhere. Paro insists and a dejected Mala (given Paro's insistence) leaves her, all alone for minute.

Having see both, Sunheri and Mythili go, Paro too wants in, on their plan.

Paro(getting down from the swing, half-way) - Main bhi chalti hoon.

Paro - Even I want to come.

Mala (stopping her from descending off the swing) - Uh ho! Paro!

Mala had promised Rudra of her safety, and she was trying her best to keep Paro under her eye.

Mala - Paro! Kahan jaa rahi ho? Ek toh tumare pair mein chot lagi hai, aur bijli gayi hui hai.

Mala - Paro! Where are you off to? Firstly, you have hurt your leg and there in no power/current.

Paro obediently listens and sits still.

Mala (sensing her silence) - Tum thik toh ho? Dar toh nahi lag raha?

Mala - Are you fine? Are you feeling scared?

Paro (reassuringly) - Main bilkul theek hoo, Maa sa.

Paro - I am totally fine, Maa sa.

Paro (clutching the handles of the swing) - Vaise, dar toh tab lagega, jab Major Saab se, mhaare vrat khulvane ka waqt aayega!

Paro - Actually, it will be scary when, the time will come for Major Saab to help, break open my fast.

Mala - Hmm.. Ha..

Mala - Hmm.. . Ha..

Both of them have a good laugh.

Sunheri (from a distance) - AAAhh.. Uooo...

Mythili (from a distance) - Sunheri baisa, aap theek toh hain?

Paro unable to control herself,again tries to get off the swing to go help out.

Mala (trying her best to keep Paro close) - Tum mat jao. Tum yahin bhaitho.

Mala - You don't go. You sit here still.

Paro (misunderstanding Mala's precautionary measures as possessiveness) - Maa sa!? Aap toh aise keh rahi hain, jaise main iss ghar mein akele kahin nahi jaa sakti!

Paro - Maa sa!? You are talking as though I am not allowed to roam around freely in the house.

Mala remains silent, unable to respond, given Rudra had instructed the same, keep Paro safe and not let her know of the dangers.

Paro - Hamara hi toh ghar hai, aur vaise bhi darwaaza bandh hai. Main bas, abhi dekh ke aati hoon.

Paro - It is afterall, our house. And anyway, the door is locked. I'll just have a look..

She is off the swing in hurry and Mala obliges.

Mala (convincingly)- Ek min. Theek hai. Tum yahin ruko, main dekh kar aati hoon!

Mala - One minute. Okay fine. You wait here, I'll have a look and be back.

Paro is left alone, even if for a minute - The perfect setup for the stalker/villian to make an entry.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Scene 6 - Paro is all alone and the wind play's its part - gets Paro all worried & scared!

Paro is left all alone, she looks ethereal, with the moonlight shining on her!

The diya blows off, there is light gust of wind, an eeriness looming around.

Paro is busy in her own world, swaying on her swing, awaiting Mala, Mythili and Sunheri to return.

She has no clue, what is in store for her! Slightly worried. The intensity of the mild wind is slowly increasing.

Perfect pindrop silence!

And then all of a sudden, the tumbler/steel glass falls down, given the wind is in full swing and no where close to light breeze!

Paro is terrified, given she is alone.

She is more than terrified, wondering what's taking everyone so long! Wish she had never sent Mala.

The wind is teasing her, playing it's card right, given it's slowly setting in the goosebumps and chills.

The villain is finally here. His boots are seen, with every step he takes closer, Paro's heartbeat raises, and she is petrified and prays along, given He is her only companion, at this moment!

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Scene 7 - As an audience we know that the mysterious guy is getting closer, yet Paro is oblivious to the fact, continues to have a one-sided conversation with the person.

Paro - the perfect devotee, now uses all her religious knowledge and chants out loud.

Paro - Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath

Paro - Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath

Until..

She stops the chanting for a moment, as the the villian/stalker is almost near her. She feels a certain sense of comfort, given she assumes those footsteps are of someone, who she believes is her true rakshak!

But she continues, going with her gut feeling, and continues to chant on.

Paro - Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath, Jai Bholenath

Paro - Jai Bholenath!

He clutches the handles of her swing and she stops chanting! Her heart must have skipped a beat.

Paro is horror-struck, and yet doesn't hesitate to turn around.

Paro is truly relieved having seen the familair BSD uniform, which she knows, only her true Rakshak owns!

She is on top of the world. He is there, when she needed him the most, given she was the most petrified a few seconds ago and she initiates the conversation.

Paro - Aap aa gaye?

Paro - You came?

He sways/rocks her swing and she goes on.

Paro - Kya hua? Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe?

Paro - What happened? Why aren't you saying anything/something?

She is enjoying this feeling, swinging along and teasing her Major Saab!

Paro - Mhaara, Teej ka taufa kahan hai?

Paro - Where is my gift, for Teej?

He is trying to maintain his secret identity, continues to sway her swing.

Paro (noticing his silence) - Kya hua, Major Saab? Aap javab kyun nahi de rahe?

Paro - What happened, Major Saab? Why aren't you answering?

She gives him a moment, to respond.

Paro - Aap mhaare se gussa hain?

Paro - Are you angry/upset with me?

He remains silent and her impatience is slowly setting in.

Paro - Major Saab!?

Having realised someting she carries on, with him gently countinuing to rock her swing.

Paro (slowly) - Voh.. Aapko vrat ke baare mein pata chal gaya, kya?

Paro - That.. Did you come to know about my fast?

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -himu-
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Thanks Baisa!! Glad you liked it, there's more,yet to come.

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Scene 8 - The MG is on a roll, he totallly creeps out Paro and Rudra makes an entry!

The mysterious guy (MG) keeps rocking her swing and Paro having asked him something, he responds. Paro gets up swiftly, but he manages to calm her down..

She senses his gentle touch, and is a bit relieved that finally her Major Saab has somethig to say until...

MG - Pehli Teej, Mubarak ho, Parvati. Bhagwan tumare pati ko, lmbi umar de.

MG - Greetings, for your very first Teej, Parvati. May God bless your husband, give him a long life!

Paro is stunned, dumb-founded, speechless.

MG - Teej, Mubarak!

MG - Greetings for Teej!

She doesn't take of her hands off, given the state of shock she is in. He slips his off and she frantically gets off her swing and moves as far as possible from the MG.

She turns around, to get a look at the MG. His face is completely hidden in the darkness and then...

A door opens from behind. She is trying process the displeasure she just encountered with her actual Major Saab lurking from behind.

(She did say the doors were locked, yet Rudra manages it unlock it from the outside and make a grand entry!)

Rudra comes in closer (gently) - Paro!

Paro has the shock of her life! She rapidly turns around.

Paro (dead scared) - M.. Major Saab!..

The MG is nowhere close to being threatened. He stands still, behind the swing.

Rudra now having come real close, tries to get a good look at the intruder, with Paro also facing the MG.

Mala, out of the blue, enters and has a candle in her hand. She has no idea about the tensed situation.

Mala (stands next to Rudra) - Kaun hai?

Mala - Who is it?

Rudra takes a step even closer, slowing moving towards the predator, which Mala still hasn't identified, that he is still standing behind the swing. Paro is terrified all through.

Mala (out loud) - Kaun hai, vahan?

Mala - Who is it, over there?

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