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Originally posted by: princess_saumya

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Yaar its ok u forgot to pm me but i read the chappy and its amazing plz post chappy 12 today ok.plz 😉 😕

Originally posted by: marshi

Yaar its ok u forgot to pm me but i read the chappy and its amazing plz post chappy 12 today ok.plz 😉 😕

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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

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Chapter 12

Credits go to jaskaran.kaur08 and hely

Jodha POV

The sun's rays telling me to open my eyes , but I keep then close for while I can hear beats , heartbeats I slowly open my eyes with confusion , I quickly look up to see jalal's peaceful face , the sun's rays Touching his face I smile at my view it took a second to realise what I was doing I slowly sit up from my position . Wait did we both sleep together yesterday?? OMG this is so embarrassing I untie my hair and put the hair to my side , well this is going to be awkward. As I just sit her smiling to my self I can't hear a few noises coming from jalal, I take a deep breathe a turn towards jalal he open his eyes and smiles he suddenly see me he quickly sits up In a jerk. He scratches the back of his neck

Jalal: uh um good morning ??

That sounded more like a question though

Jodha: good morning I giggle a little and get out of the bed

Jalal: um jodha am sorry about this

Jodha: yea it's okay exactly how did this happen??

Jalal: um you feel asleep and you held my hand and it's a sin to wake a sleeping beauty

I immediately blush , I honestly want to cover my face in my hands right now.

Jalal: I was only joking love if I woke you up you would have killed me

I turn towards him and glare at him, and walk away he suddenly hold my wrist. I turn around to see him kneeling on the ground with his hands holding his ears.

Jalal: sorry beautiful

I feel bad and remove his hands from his ears and support him to get back on his.

Jodha: apology accepted jallad

Jalal: excuse me

Jodha: kya hua jalal ko gusa are rahi hai I tease him like a child

Jalal: meany

I give him a fake glare

Jalal: pretty

Jodha: nice save arrey where is rest do the group ??

His eyes widen

Jalal: oh shoot they are still in the car

Jodha: what?? You left them in the car

Jalal: they were sleeping

Jodha: let's go

I hold his hand and drag him out quickly out of our room, he just seems to have his back relaxed as if am some jet boat and he is skiing.

Jodha: oh hello Bhai sap enough relaxing

Jalal: don't call me that

Jodha: Bhai sap

Jalal: meany

We keep calling each other those , we finally reach the car and finds them still sleeping. I open the doors of the car and try to wake them up.

Jodha: guys come on get up

I shake them but they just get I rested and turn away from me. I roll my eyes.

Jalal: GUYS THERE'S FIRE!!!

They up in a shock , and get out of the car without looking Around I turn around to jalal is laughing I join him they all look at us with a annoyed glare.

Abdul: I hate you jalal

Jalal: love you too

Jodha: guys akshay is still in the car

Jalal comes towards the car and yells

Jalal: THERE'S A FIRE!

Akshay: tell the fire to go away then he still has his eyes closed

Jalal leans foreword akshay and gets hold of his nose, akshay gets alarmed and panics

Akshay: dah am drowning am drowning he sees jalal, and his mouth hangs down.

Akshay: what the hell dude??

Jalal: shut up and get up

Akshay gets irritated and gets out of the car and crosses his arms , and pouts like a child. Moti gives him a quick hug and he turns happy again,

Jalal: guys let's go eat something

Akshay: finally

We all go towards the dining room which look absolutely. Grand , as I admire the room , someone hugs me from hugs me form the back the touch doesn't seem that familiar. I don.t think it's jalal I turn around and surprised to see surya!, I give him a huge smile and hug him back.

Surya: arrey beautiful tum yaha?

Jodha: yea main aur meri friends yaha holiday KI liya so tum yaha

Surya: meri friend KI behan KI shaadi he says with a chuckle

Jodha: oh hey thanks for dropping them back from. The nightclub

Surya: hey no problem exactly where were you

Jodha: complicated story yar, I look over at jalal who seem so irritated by his presence.

Surya: oookaaay ... Hey do come to the shaadi yar please I beg you

Jodha: paar hum kaise

Surya: chup just come okay , I will text you the address it's on tommorow evening i'll text u the details okay

Jodha: tik hai

Surya: and definitely bring all of them

Jodha: yea definitely I glance back at jalal who seems thought jealous, I take advantage of it.

Surya: anyways bye see you around

Jodha: arrey eat with us nah , am sure everyone would be pleased especially jalal.

Jalal glares at me

Surya: um okay

We both go towards the dining table everyone was siting in , as soon as the group sees surya everyone cheers.

Abdul: surya tum yaha??

Surya: hey Abdul , oh meri friend 's sisters wedding so

Moti: cool

Surya: hey you guys are coming too , I will tell jodha the address

Salima: OMG yay!

Surya: oye jalal where were you that night !

Jalal: oh um complicated story yar

Surya gives him a confused look, while me and jalal exchange grins.

*Time lapse*

I get back to my room, still thinking about what happend last night I go though my suitcases e and wear a pair of lace shorts and lights green flawy top. I take to lairs if hair from the front and bring to the back and clip it. I adjust my wavy hair , and go and open the door and surprised to see jalal there.

Jalal POV

She looks so cute and hot, the top just looks flawless against her skin, her long wavy hair , her dark brown eyes. Every time I look at her she seem to take away my breathe literally.

Jodha: um jalal??

Jalal: huh what??

Jodha: can we go now??

Jalal: yea sure

She wears her million dollar smile , and walks beside me.

Jalal: oh by the way the group went to the shimla market so do you wanna go there??

Jodha: arrey vah yea definitely

She gets excited and quickly drags me towards the lift , and she let's go of her grip, it really does hurt when she let's go. I frown a little we finally reach the lobby and we exit the hotel,.

Jalal: oh we can't take our car too big for the road so I booked a jeep.

Jodha: even better

Jodha skips towards the jeep and gets into the seat next to me and we drive off.

Jodha: so how was surya's presence

Jalal: great I say unenthusiastically

Jodha: OMG you are so jealous

Jalal: I don't need to be jealous of him , when I kinda close to get what I want

Jodha: close to getting what?

Jalal: something important

Jodha: arrey what??

Jalal: not telling

Jodha: fine don't tell me

She turns away , and face the open window and crosses her arms

Jalal: kya hua jodha gusa arr rahi hai? Repeating the same thing jodha said to him.

Jodha: copycat

Jalal: meow!

Jodha giggles , and unfolds her crossed arms.

We finally reach the market , jodha runs a head of me . As I was going to run towards her someone comes I front of me I feel a bit confused. I was surprised to see shehnaz there, she puts on a flirty smile and hugs me . I don't respond to much. As I look towards jodha who seems hurt and her smile just vanished away, she notice me observing her she quickly turns away and runs towards the market. I try to I free form the hug , I hated hugging her oh no jodha I thought stupid shehnaz had to come. I finally break free from the hug. Shennaz looks pretty confused, but ignores it

Shehnaz: hey jalal long time no see

Jalal:'uh yea long time , hey I have to go we will talk later okay sorry it's very important.

Shehnaz : oh okay then bye.

I nod and run towards the direction jodha went, I feel really guilty for making her feel this way again.i just got the old jodha again no way am I going to loose that. I look in all different direction and finally I see next to a jewellery stall, her eyes look disturbed. I slowly walk towards I hesitantly walk towards her she seems me and walks away , we keep doing this for a while. She finally turns towards me.

Jodha: why are you following me?? Her expression tell me that she is angry and irritated

Jalal: I don't wanna follow you , I wanna walk beside you.

Her face becomes slightly relived , and faint smile creeps on her but gets angry again.

Jodha: go walk beside your shimla wali girlfriend

Jalal: she is not my girlfriend

She walks off again, and I walk after her and stand near her side

She stops in her tracks and looks back to find me not behind her, she frowns I walk behind her and kneel down , and hold my ear with my hands. She turns around to see me , her eyes widen with surprise ness and

And gets alarmed. She looks at me with all care and removes my hands of my ears and grips on to my shoulders. I slowly get up we both look into each other's eyes.

Jodha: don't ever kneel down In front of me

She hugs me tightly , I was seriously shocked yep am sure of it she definitely hit her thank you god I respond back to hug immediately .we both just stand there lost in each other's arms.

Jodha: jallad

Jalal: excuse me

Jodha gently breaks , and her million dollar smile , erupts into laughter

Jodha: jallad , jallad , jallad , jallad

With that she runs away , I chase through market I can hear people getting angry as I push towards them but don't care. I can hear jodha's constant giggles , I can help but burst into laughter we reach near a riverside and I finally get hold her I hug her from the back and lift her up and swing her around. She keeps giggling we settle down she hugs my arm.

Jalal: you know I bet I can make you say , I love you to me

Jodha: tough chance

Jalal: I can definitely make you say that in less than 3 minutes I bet

Jodha: impossible

Jalal: nothing is impossible in this world love , okay if I win you have to do something crazy that I will tell you to do and if you win you can tell em something crazy to do and I will

Jalal: okay,let's try

Jalal: say red

Jodha: red

Jalal: pink

Jodha: pink

Jalal: 2+2=

Jodha: 4

Jalal: see I told you I can make you say 4

Jodha: no you said you will make say I LOVE YOU!

Jalal : I just did

Jodha closes one eye and slaps her forehead

Jodha: arrey this is cheating

Jalal: no it's not

Jodha: fine what you want me to do?

Jalal: jump into the river

Jodha: WHAT!!! Pagal hogaya kya?

Jalal: I told you will have to do something Crazy

Jodha: nahi nahi main asa nahi karogi

She gets up , walk near the river away from me. I get a idea " lightbulb " I say to my self

I quietly creep up from the back when she was not in attention I push her into the river , she shrieks I can help but laugh he comes up for air.

Jodha : what the hell???

angry with red face... And just irritation , the water just just a bit below her chest . She looks like a mermaid I can't help but fee a bit of lust when i see that all her clothes are wet and stucked with her body... as she is wearing a slightly transparent top ...

Jalal : main kaha tha nah

I can help but jump in I seriously can seem to control myself, jodha shrieks and start splashing water on me and try to run through the water which she fails miserably due to the depth.I pushes her towards myself and I look her with complete love and lust...

Jodha: jalal plss mujhe jaane do

She struggles in his arms.. he pushes her more and more closer...and places a kiss on her forehead...

Jodha: Jalal chodo mujhe plss... koi aajaega!

Jalal: Bas thodi der... itne saalon tak tum mujhse door rahi.. kyu jodha ?? itna to gunaah bhi nai tha.. jitni saza di thi tumne mujhi .

Jodha POV

Just as he said those words , I literally felt like dying I have hurt him so much. Something he didn't even do and I gave him a huge punishment. I feel like what I did was something I rather die than do that again. I can feel that our hearts have turned into one . I wipe off his tears...i places a kiss on his lips slightly... and hug him like bone crushing hug...

Jalal POV

I feel like am in heaven... When she was hugging i start kissing on her neck... she clutches his shirt...she moves away from him... And back on to the land.

Jodha POV

Those words again shouting , screaming at me mocking me every single time we get close.

Jalal starts walking towards me and I walk backwards as I kept walking like this i found myself in between a tree and him...he looks into my eyes deeply he rests on of his plam on my cheek and this other hand draped around my waist griping on tighter as he started kissing on my lips... I wrap my hand around his neck. I slowly break the kiss we both have our foreheads touching but still looking into each others' eyes. I hug him back more tightly and bury my face into his neck.

Jodha : am so sorry!

Jalal: shhh don't

Jalal: I will tell you everything

As he narrated the entire incident , from the obnoxious text , to the heart wrenching pictures. All this time all those years all those words I have said to him. Kills me as I recall those words. Tears freely falling from my eyes as if there is no boundaries, I feel weak and my head aches in pain. I tighten my hug as he caresses my hair.

Precap: surya 's friend's sister's wedding / Akdha moments

So there you go !!

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RES!!!!! CMNT SOON!!UNRES!!! Wow what an amazing update again!!!! I am flat!!!! Just ausome ,ausome & ausome!!!!! Love ur story!!!!! Liked the part wen misundrstanding finally cleared?!! Both love each other very very very much!!!! Yaar dialogue " jao apni shimla wali gf ke pass" that was funny!!! Maza aa gaya yaar!!!!!!!! Heyyy wanna be my friend?????? Reply waited!!!