Akdha SFF. {{Torn Apart }} ch 17 pg 161 10/9 thread closed! - Page 12

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

OKK .!!! Today before i asked u said that u will update next week😭😭.. koi baat nai will wait😆😆.. but haan ek shart pe wo isse zyada long ho.. zyada content ho.. zyada story move kare.. or haan romantic ho...😳😳

Coming to the chapter.. It was not boring at all!!😡 It was entertaining😉... remove the word waste...😡😡or haan i love how jalal forgot everything but only remember that jalal kissed her... and the dialogues are really funny ... i like how he glared at moti when he told jodha to call surya for hanging🤣... jodha's change behaviour is really really cute😊😊... nd how jalal is confused and assumed that she has hit her head... is extremely funny😆😆... yaar love u for this.. nd abdul is really caring i noticed.😃😃... love uu.. udpate soon...😛😛

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

Thank u for the update it was awesome 😉

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

Its nice story... I hv jst started reading it... Lovely concept nd beautifully written..
Hey add me to ur PM list...

Originally posted by: hely

wow
that was an amazing chappy
liked it...😳😳
i luv woh wife wala part😉..how sweet..jalal said kaash..then suddenly..wil cm back to reality
dt jo is nt his wife...😆not now...or may be even not in future...🤔
jalal abdul akshay became chef😆good
so finally they r going to shimla like me😆
i have doubt on jalal..??🤔he have another gf in shimla😡plz dont make jodha jealous...she is cute n pure soul..😭
whr is ruku...??😕
lookinf forward 4 next chappy😉
plz update ASAP
when will u update any fix date..?

Originally posted by: niveasree

Awesome chapter dear😊