Akdha SFF. {{Torn Apart }} ch 17 pg 161 10/9 thread closed! - Page 13

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

lovely... wil wait for teh next chapi.

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

super duper going dear...finally read all update... itss very lovely...

eagerly waiting for Shimla update...continue soon and do pm me...

Chapter 11

Sorry guys ever short chap!

Ps: seriously though super short

Jodha POV

Jodha: shimla perfect!

I can see that jalal is smiling and looking over at me from the corner of my eye.

Jalal POV

Jodha looks so happy right now , she is some how different her radiant personality is back again this trip I can use to talk to jodha clear out every misunderstanding am not expecting her to forgive me that easily though. After we finished eating we left to pack our bags as I was leaving towards the door someone held my wrist I turn around and surprised to see jodha. Oh of course how could I forget the slap I close my eyes and slowly turn around facing my cheek half way towards her.

Jodha: thank you

I burst open my eyes , in a shock wait thank you she is not going to slap me shocker I thought as I continue to stare at her confusingly , all she gives me is her million dollar smile she let's go of the grip.

Jodha: kya hua??

Jalal: am dead confused

She giggles at little

Jodha: confused of??

Jalal: um look I knw KI this is going to sound really weird but did you hit your head when you fell??

She laughs again

Jodha: what??

Jalal: nothing love you take care

And I leave for the door god that sounded so stupid I glance back at her , she still can't control her laughter. I smile back at her.

Evening

Me and guys go towards her apartment , oh I just can't wait to see her again okay jalal it's fun but it's control I keep saying the same statement over and over again in my head. I knock on the door and there she stood

She was wearing a light blue high waist jeans , a thin strapped floral top and a sleeveless peach short over coat. Yep the statement I have been practicing in my head now it makes no sense to me. I just stand there admiring her uncontrollable, beauty over powers my senses.

Jodha: um jalal?? Hello jalal JALAL!!

Jalal: huh what

Jodha: um shall we get going

Jalal: um yea yea

I move out of the way as she locks the door ,me and guys follow her towards the lift.

Akshay: so what exactly are we doing in shimla??

Jalal: um I booked a hotel for us , and I guess it's basically up to us whatever we feel like to do we can.

Abdul: partying

Jodha: skiing

Akshay: meeting

Jodha: meeting who??

Akshay: girls

Jodha: of course

We reach down and Salima and moti are already in the back seat of car, and jodha will go and sit with them I frown a little. I pack the bags in the car and get into the car I have a massive shock jodha she is siting next to me, I can't help but smile too much. OMG jalal it's fun but it's but it's I don't know what comes after that. I feel a sudden excitement which came out of the blue my heart is jumping up and down okay jalal clam down that's it easy there. And after that we drive off

2 hours later

Jodha is talking to me again like there is no barriers , and I felt so happy just seeing her being well happy to talk to a monster. And then akshay started talking to her and they both started chatting to each other. Am gonna kill you soon akshay.

Jodha: jalal I think we should take a break you have been driving for so long.

Jalal: nahi nahi koi baat nahi

Jodha: you need break baas end of discussion.

Jalal: man you are so bossy

Wait why is she nice to me again , yep am so sure of it she definitely hit her head when she fell, I do as what she said and pull over near a roadside cafe. Jodha gets out from the car and admires the fresh air oh she looks so cute I just sit there admiring her she looks over at me .

Jodha: jalal Come out

Oh it's feels good to hear my name from her graceful voice , I nod when I look behind the rest of the group is fast asleep love you guys finally I can talk to her alone. I quickly get out if the care making sure I won't wake up any of them I casually walk towards jodha who is smiling at me.

Jodha: better

Jalal: better

She holds my wrist and pulls me towards the cafe , am just admiring her soft touch OMG something happend to jodha she is as if kuch nahi hua hai I love this jodha again so I don't raise much question I just roll with it.

Jalal: u hungry??

She nods aw her nod so cute

Jalal: kya chaiye TUMHE ?

Jodha: um

Jalal: let me guess pakora

Jodha: obviously

Jalal: you are so predictable

Jodha: don't judge

Me and jodha finds a free table and sits down , the waiter comes towards us.

Waiter: so what can I get you guys

Jodha: um jalal I think we should have dinner ,

Jalal: yea okay

Jodha: okay any dinner special hai??

Waiter: jee madam , it's new actually Ameri curry and any sides as you wish like parota , roti

Jodha: arrey vah Ameri curry yea definitely bring that

Ameri curry oh god that is going to hella spicy jodha seems happy about just roll with it jalal and drink water.

Jodha: and parotta and drinks beer and coke

Hey she remembered I love beer , as a dinner drink oh the curry am worried about I don't want to make jodha feel bad no jalal just eat it and drink lots of water without her noticing.

Jodha: um jalal I will back soon

Jalal: okay

I watch her going towards the cafe counter and telling the waiter something he nods and she comes back.

Jalal: kya hua?

Jodha: kuch nahi baas I was telling them to make our drinks cold

Jalal: oh okay

Why is jodha lying?? Anyways

After a few minutes the food arrives , I hesitantly eat the curry I was no that spicy actually maybe I am getting used used to this spicy ness. Wow ameri curry is super spicy and I don't feel anything. Burning my tongue this is awesome.

Jodha: how is the food?

Jalal: really good , ha am really getting used to this curry

Jodha: yea...

Time lapse

Waiter: that was 169 rupees sir

I reach for my wallet, and see jodha slapping her forehead

Jalal: kya hua?

Jodha: mera phone I kept it in the table I will quickly come

I nod and hand the register his cash he checks it and smiles

Waiter: you have a caring wife

haha this wife thing again , I love it

Jalal: what makes you think so?? I ask curiously

Waiter: arrey she was the one who asked us to reduce the spice in your curry.

Wait jodha did that for me, USko kya ho Gaya anyways I could help but smile every little thing she does for me makes me love her even more.

Jalal: yea I know I have a caring wife

The waiter smiles and leaves

I turn towards the direction jodha is coming , I seriously want to hug her right now jalal control. Jodha smiles and warps her hand around my arm and drags me out of the cafe I was just surprised with her gesture. We reach the car and she lets go of the hold I frown a little we get back into the car and drive off again.

Jalal: um jodha?

Jodha: yea

I need to ask this

Jalal: do you like surya

Jodha: of course he is my BFF

Jalal: no I mean like like him

Her mouth hangs down

Jodha: what's wrong with you?

Jalal: ah nothing I quickly turn away and face the road again

Jodha: are you jealous?? She shoots that question straight

Jalal: Why the heck would I be jealous i ask in annoyance

Lots of reasons jalal you are lying to yourself

Jodha: liar

Jalal: am not lying

Jodha: liar liar pants on fire

Jalal: am not jealous

Jodha: oh please

Jalal: name reasons why I would be

Jodha: well he is good looking , charming , dreamy , nice , down to earth , romantic , rich , sporty

Jalal: i said to describe surya not me i smirk at her

Jodha: ah not quite I didn't add annoying and irritating did I

Jalal: you are so mean to me

Jodha: truth does hurt

We both laugh , this was definitely a new beginning for both of us.

Few hours later jodha falls into deep sleep the wind kissing her face , I reach our hotel in shimla I lean over to her face I can't help but place a soft kiss on her cheek.

I look behind to find them them sleeping so I decided to leave a note for thEm when they wake up , I quietly get out of the car and open jodha's side I tap her cheek gently.

Jalal: jodha jodha wake up

She slowly lifts her eyes that shine so bright , I never want to unlit ever again she blinks a few times.

Jodha: jalal if you wake me up again you will never see the light of the day again

Jalal: crap ur scary

She hesitantly gets out of the car, and wraps her hand around my arm and rests her cheeks on my arm, my smile can't fit my face right now, we both walk towards the grand hotel as I am registering our booking jodha still has hand around my arm , resting her cheek and closing her eyes.

The hotel manger keeps smiling at us. When we get into the elevator I can feel that her grip becomes loose I quickly get hold of her waist and pick her up. Jodha without knowing wraps her hands around my neck and buries her face into the bottom half of my neck. I can feel her soft lips brushing against my skin, the feeling is heavenly. We reach our level I mange to open. The door I go straight towards the bed as I lay her down as she was fragile , a delicate angle fallen from the heavens , i move towards her rosy lips I pause for a second I can't help but place a kiss on her lips. As I turn around to leave she held out my hand I hesitantly turn around to know if she was awake. But no she was in deep sleep but her grip on my hand so determined I try to loosen my grip so she can sleep peacefully. She gets irritated and places my palm under her cheek I lean over towards her this i can't help but place my self next to her we both sleep in each other's arms , our safe haven.

Precap: morning time , first day in shimla Akdha getting closer

Dedicated to the beautiful girls, jaskaran.kaur08 , ruthshalini and Hely love you guys heaps!!

And get well soon ruthshalini

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

Oh my god ... its such a cute update... lovely... jalal asked her... if she hit her head ...🤣ooh my god... nd the praise of surya..adding two words ... annoying and irritating to jalal.. really funny... cant wait for the next udpate... i will not ask u when???... u will udpate whenever u want... bcoz nowdays im affraid.. and u know the reason.. love u.. update sonon😳😳

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

Awww so cute nd awesome update thank u nd love u to jaan 😃