The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suds.

Reshfjd

edit**

auto correct rly hates me. 

sorry. also for taking too long. sorry <3

the thing i love about these is the internal debating going on in Aahil's head. 

man, i went all  jlerawGEFGgf at 

She is NOT mine!
Ah right. Coz you're HERS!

asdklufaklegfaq wHEN IS AAHIL GONNA REALISE THIS ACTUAL?????

he appreciates her!!!

and this. 

Yeah, i guess I should. Miss Dhabevaali is enough for giving you hard time..

i dont even this this is appropriate for this site but, my mind went completely, totally, straight into gutterville. 🀣

like jesus i couldnt stop laughing bc my mind is so dirty 🀣

fgiuhIGRIOAUgf

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CONTINUING THIS ILY πŸ€—




Sarru! Yayy you "unreshjfd" it finally πŸ˜† (It was NOT autocorrect πŸ€£)

Oh yes, I love calling HIM as HERS β€οΈCoz that's what he is! Ugh.WHEN INDEED HE WOULD SAY THAT.

Okay, that sent me also to gutterland πŸ€£ I thought of refining it, but it looks more exciting this way πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 Thank you for loving this. The Jealous Aahil one is gonna be up soon too! πŸ˜† 

Love you more Sarru!! πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath


Sarru! Yayy you "unreshjfd" it finally πŸ˜† (It was NOT autocorrect πŸ€£)

Oh yes, I love calling HIM as HERS β€οΈCoz that's what he is! Ugh.WHEN INDEED HE WOULD SAY THAT.

Okay, that sent me also to gutterland πŸ€£ I thought of refining it, but it looks more exciting this way πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 Thank you for loving this. The Jealous Aahil one is gonna be up soon too! πŸ˜† 

Love you more Sarru!! πŸ€—


i think i typed it wrong once and now it just wants to stay that way 🀣

display of dominance makes me all β˜ΊοΈ and dead.

man, dont ever change it, its one of my faves 🀣

EEEKSSS <3333
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Posted: 9 years ago




Oh my dearest Aaloo. You're the cutest!


:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute





Oh my dearest Aaloo. You're the cutest!


:)



Oh Aaloo!!! You're here finally!! Yayy! And as usual we have to patiently wait for your "unres" πŸ˜†

Good. I am gonna post another one today by evening. Its not the J Aahil one, but s phase before that one. Next would be the much awaited Jealousy one so wait for ittt..πŸ˜†

And I have another name for our #4. Guess?? *ting ting ting* Farryy!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute





Oh my dearest Aaloo. You're the cutest!


:)




No. I am an idiot. :(   



Phir se late. πŸ˜”    


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Posted: 9 years ago
Farz, Pragzyy, Suds and D.



I promise I'll unres all my res by tonight. It's high time now. I need a slap. :(


Finally I am at home. Yesterday went only in travelling.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath




Oh Aaloo!!! You're here finally!! Yayy! And as usual we have to patiently wait for your "unres"πŸ˜†

Good. I am gonna post another one today by evening. Its not the J Aahil one, but s phase before that one. Next would be the much awaited Jealousy one so wait for ittt..πŸ˜†

And I have another name for our #4. Guess?? *ting ting ting* Farryy!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

   


I know. Like I said I am an idiot. You guys are so sweet and I keep res-ing my spot and then...woooshhh...gaayab. :(   

Actually I was in train. But I am at my place now. Pakka will unres by tonight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello IFians! πŸ˜†
I am back with another fight between HIM and HIS alter ego :)

This is again all the ARI-ish stuff which I love to write. I don't know. ARI has gotten into my system SO DAMN MUCHπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

This is the one for the famous "are you feeling the same" scene :)

Hope you guys enjoy it :D

I love all my maniacs! 

Enough now. Here it is.

Why Can't She Understand?

 

Why? Why the hell she can't just understand? Why?? Is it so difficult for her to see? Ughh.

What? That you have fallen for her, and can't seem to get up??

 

Oh you! Not again!  Fallen for her? Me? ME??!! Give me a break!

Yeah, you. So called ARI just can't seem to get his eyes off of his cook!! Haha.

 

Ughh. Its not my problem if she has such deep big brown eyes, which look like she is just about to bore into others. What COULD I do??

Umm. You could be like..NOT STARE into them?? Unless you DO WANT to stare. I don't know?

 

What even??!!! Ughh. I don't stare at her eyes man! Its so embarrassing.

Yeah. Coz you can't digest the fact that this chick isn't even giving a damn about you! Haha.

 

Okay that''s enough now. But can't she just see I wanted to talk to her?

No. She can't. Coz you do EVERYTHING but talk, whenever you're close to her. Loser!

 

You..!! I did talk to her okay? I asked her does she remember that night. Didn't I??

Yeah. And she replied too, that she doesn't. What's bothering you then??

 

How?? How could she not remember that night?? How the hell??!! Ughh.

Wait a second. Have you even started fantasising about her?? Good lord, save this soul!

 

Shut the hell up!! Doesn't she remember anything? How she called my name? How she held me? Nothing?? Absolutely nothing??

Dude. You've started to creep me out now. You're sounding like a GIRL here actually!!

 

Stop mocking me! She needs to realise what happened that night was not a mistake!

Oh come on! Ofcourse she must have "mistakenly" called your name and held you. Huh!

 

No one just "mistakenly" calls my name and holds me! ME. ARI. No one!!

Ah. So she just did all that,,stuff. By that means she is "something more' right??

 

Ughh. WHATEVER! But. How can't she remember how I was there for her, with her, for whole night! HOW??!!

Why she should? It's not like there's something going on between you two. Is it??

 

Oh ofcourse not!! There's nothing. Absolutely nothing. NADA.

Yeah. Obviously. The way you took care of her and all. Nah! It must be a dream. A MERE dream, right?

 

I don't dream such stuff about Miss Dhabevaali!

Ah. So you dream the OTHER kinda stuff about HER??

 

You better keep your mouth shut! Is she really not affected by that night? Really? Or she is just being..

A matured one.

 

What the f**k??? Are you trying to tell me I am the immature one here??

Trying? What's there to try? You are acting like the one.

 

Get a grip! SHE is immature, not me! Its SHE who isn't understanding what I am trying to tell. Its SHE who isn;t able to remember what happened that night. Its SHE who is being so oblivious to what;s happening..

Woah woah woah! Its YOU who need to realise what effect is SHE having on you. Like real soon!

 

Effect? On me?? Oh come on! That too by HER?? You are really losing your touch now.

Yeah, just like you're losing your mind, and even your heart too now. That too to HER!

 

I am not losing anything to her! I just want to know is she also feeling the same? That;s it!

No no. She doesn't love you. Stop dreaming.

 

I am not dreaming anything! I don't day dream! NEVER EVER!!

Yeah right. Just like you did that morning, going all "are you feeling the same" on her.

 

I told you I just wanted to ask her a simple question!

Oh yeah? Because you seem to only able to say  "Uh. Uh, actually. Umm.." when in front of her.

 

So? What do you think? Can I just go and ask "hey Sanam, I have been thinking about that night so much lately, do you also?"

... YEAH.

 

Oh shut up! Its not that easy okay? I can't just go in front of her and just..say that!

Whoa! Look who's going all flustered while talking to a GIRL! Mr. Aahil Raza Ibrahim. The so called Playboy Of Bhopal.

 

Arrghh. She is not my girlfriend!!

Yeah! And still you're getting all flustered! What's the matter big boy?!

 

I don't get flustered!!! Its just that...that...ugh.

I'll complete. Its just that..YOU. YOU. Mr. ARI has fallen head over heels with this girl. YOU All the best, lover boy!

 

Stop calling me that! She can't just..ugh. I own her. I. OWN. HER. She needs to get that straight.

Oh you poor soul. Looks like SHE JUST OWNED YOU. Big time.

 

*poof*

 

Ugh. I am not falling for her!  I AM..NOT FALLING FOR HER. GET IT?? I. AM. N..

Ugh. Miss Dhabevaali!


And that's all folks! I will be up with the Jealous ARI soon! πŸ˜†

Thanks for reading! :)

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Taken by me πŸ˜†
First!

"Save this soul"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Poor Aahil fighting with his inner demonic mind. And he's still hurt that she doesn't remember anything.  And and, he dreams about her πŸ˜² Don't worry Aahil, even if she doesn't dream about you, we do!πŸ˜‰


Edited by Dhanesh27 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res!
Thanks soo much for the pm dear! :D
will unres my comments soon this time!! :)

Edited----

Wow!!! What an amazingly amazing update!!! πŸ‘
Aahil talking to Aahil...Brilliant!!! πŸ‘

I loved the way he was trying to negate his alter ego but failed miserably!!
and how beautifully have you picturised the entire scenario!! especially Aahil's mental dilemma! ⭐️
Aahil is a complicated character thats unique n amazing due to all the variant shades it carry and your words have captured that complexity with such ease!! Absolutely Loved it!! ❀️

P.s. Do i need to say that how excited am i for the jealousy one?? πŸ˜‰
Please carry sooon whenever you get time praggu!!
I will be waiting! πŸ˜ƒ

take care dear...n thanks again for the pm.πŸ€—

AND i will read n comment one by one for the previous updates too!
Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 9 years ago