The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...i mean really wow. ...loved ur insight on sanam...the way she cnt control her thoughts bout aahil...awww ...tks šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bkmrk hvnt read yet... will comment after
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awww Farruu!! šŸ¤—Don't say that.😳
Miss you more my awesome maniac!
I'll be online from tomorrow Kay?
I am not able to come, guests would be leaving tomorrow.šŸ˜†
I missed the epi today too. Hope it's not worth watching šŸ˜†

I love you! You know that right?

Hugs!šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diana72

wow...i mean really wow. ...loved ur insight on sanam...the way she cnt control her thoughts bout aahil...awww ...tks šŸ‘


Hey thank you so much Diana! Is that what your name? 😳
Glad that you liked it.
Thanks for such lovely comments.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read the first time you wrote on Aahil's pov but it was midnight when i read it so couldnt comment. I thought to do it later and nw when i searched for it i found i have forgot to comment! So sorry!!

but this time i made it a point to nt miss it! 😃
I read sanam's pov and its bang on! You have captured her essence soo perfectly! šŸ‘ I loved your portrayal of her! Its beautiifuuul...ā­ļø

you are a talented writer. Please keep writing! I loved the amusement and vigour in both the pov's! Please please carry on dear...šŸ¤—
p.s. Please pm me the next time you update!! I will eagerly wait to read further...take care..šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

I read the first time you wrote on Aahil's pov but it was midnight when i read it so couldnt comment. I thought to do it later and nw when i searched for it i found i have forgot to comment! So sorry!!

but this time i made it a point to nt miss it! 😃
I read sanam's pov and its bang on! You have captured her essence soo perfectly! šŸ‘ I loved your portrayal of her! Its beautiifuuul...ā­ļø

you are a talented writer. Please keep writing! I loved the amusement and vigour in both the pov's! Please please carry on dear...šŸ¤—
p.s. Please pm me the next time you update!! I will eagerly wait to read further...take care..šŸ¤—


Thank you so much buddy! šŸ¤— Such lovely comments, i am really grateful 😃
Its okay! No need to be sorry! It happens. With me too šŸ˜†
Glad that you didn't miss this time 😳 And I got such an awesome comment :)
Thanks alot again for loving the write up. It really means a lot to me!
Yeah! I would come up with something sorta this soon. Its just that i am kinda busy these days, not getting my creative mind to work šŸ˜†
Take care bud! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath



Thank you so much buddy!šŸ¤—Such lovely comments, i am really grateful😃
Its okay! No need to be sorry! It happens. With me toošŸ˜†
Glad that you didn't miss this time😳And I got such an awesome comment :)
Thanks alot again for loving the write up. It really means a lot to me!
Yeah! I would come up with something sorta this soon. Its just that i am kinda busy these days, not getting my creative mind to workšŸ˜†
Take care bud!šŸ¤—

you're most welcome!šŸ¤—
okay! no worries Dear. i shall wait.😊but please dont forget to pm me when you update! i will be glad to read anything written by you!😳
Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hola everyone!!
Okay, I wrote this some days back, thought its not that good so din't post. Then I made some corrections, to make it posting material. I don't know is its still or not! You guys tell!!

I just feel like posting, so I am! Thats it.

This is the one on when Aahil got blown over by Sanam's bravery over that snake issue. I know quite old, but I just want to post it now. I know I would be posting on the recent ones, yes I would be.
Wait for that okay? šŸ˜†

So, here it is.

Aahil in conversation with his alter - ego.

Miss "Angel" Dhabevaali

Uggh. Miss Dhabevaali! I can't believe she just did that man! How the hell she always gets one step higher than..

Girl you're my angel, you're my darling angel..."

What the hell??! You again! What are you doing in my bed?!

Correction dude, in your HEAD, not bed! Pervert!

Shut up! And, and...What's with that song you're singing?

Dude, you just made YOUR Miss Dhabevaali, an angel. Awww!

You..!! Get outta my head! Stop messing up my mind!

Yeah, i guess I should. Miss Dhabevaali is enough for giving you hard time..

She is NOT the reason for the mess, okay??!

Yeah. That's why you're so pissed off, coz' she just scored over this LOSER, again!

A simple act of so called bravery, doesn't make her win over me, okay?

Brave huh? You really are getting blown over by her eh? Aren't ya?

Ha! Grow up! She is just a cook, man. JUST a cook! Okay?!

Ah. The one whom you so proudly, OWN right?

Of course i own her! She is my servant and i am his master.

About which I often think, it's so totally the other way round, I guess.

Would you just stop assuming things? For once?

Dude. This chick just made the shit real! She has got some real guts!

Of course she has! After all she won the challenge against ARI. The A.R.I.

Woah, woah woah! Look who's praising Miss Dhabevaali!

Shut up! It's almost impossible to beat me in my own game. I play to win.

Dude. You gotta do some serious reality check.

Oh you! A simple challenge win can't decide who the master is, get that?

Huh? Who said anything about challenge? What about that "snake charmer" thing..??"

Get over it! It was not THAT charming okay?

Charming? THAT charming? Huh? Since when did the "snake charmer" become "charming"?

Arggghhh!! This girl! What does she think of herself? Did you just see how modest she was being, after her so called bravery stint'?

Modest? Brave? You really HAVE started appreciating her, haven't you?

That was really surprising for me, okay? I mean, she doesn't even know what dry cleaning' means man! Stupid girl!

Ah. Stupid. That. So you meant stupid while calling her angel" eh? Right.

I never meant that okay?

What? Calling her stupid or angel?

Of course angel! Idiot!

So, you didn't mean stupid, either!

Ughh. Shut up you..! Stop confusing me!

Go and tell this to your Miss Dhabevaali, NOT ME!

She is NOT mine!

Ah right. Coz you're HERS!

*poof*

Ugh. Miss Dhabevaali!


Its not that long, just a short one. Thats all it is.

Hope you guys enjoyed reading it.


Farru, Aaloo, Dhann and Sarru, I am on the J Aahil one. Would be up with it soon.

My maniacs are the BEST!! šŸ¤—

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Posted: 11 years ago
mine!


Oh Mr Alter Ego at his best!!!!



In your head not your bed.


!!!!!!! Cheeky are we?



Oh charming angel!



ARI miya...tu toh gaya.


Praguu!!!



Thank you mannn! Aaloo!!! Look look she gave us another one!!


You think like you're him!!




Oh Sanam! Dhabewali!


And and and!!!!!


There's some more coming!???



A green wala Aahil??? Aaloo!!! Hi five!!!


Mwah mwah Pragzyy!!!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reshfjd
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auto correct rly hates me.

sorry. also for taking too long. sorry <3

the thing i love about these is the internal debating going on in Aahil's head.

man, i went all jlerawGEFGgf at

She is NOT mine!
Ah right. Coz you're HERS!

asdklufaklegfaq wHEN IS AAHIL GONNA REALISE THIS ACTUAL?????

he appreciates her!!!

and this.

Yeah, i guess I should. Miss Dhabevaali is enough for giving you hard time..

i dont even this this is appropriate for this site but, my mind went completely, totally, straight into gutterville. 🤣

like jesus i couldnt stop laughing bc my mind is so dirty 🤣

fgiuhIGRIOAUgf

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CONTINUING THIS ILY šŸ¤—



Edited by suds. - 11 years ago

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